FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 46

THIS IS WIERD RIMA..LATELY ALL MY WISHES HAVE BEEN COMING TRUE😲!!!

THANK U! imma read it now 😉

You updated😲?! Thank the lord.. H-a-l-l-i-l-u-j-a-h!😆

Originally posted by: fahimataq

First WOWWWW FABULOUSSSSS UPDATE!!!!👏AHAHAHAAAAAAAAA...Thank you...😆

OMG OMG My Neesha are sooooooo hot!!!!!!!!!!😍i loooveee their chemistry so much,,,......no dialogues lekin kya garma garam love😳Haina...I was worried...this part had virtually none...especially between them...but I think itturned out okay na...

So im guessing Baba took milind for a sifarish naukri and our hottie didnt want itWell yeh...sort of, Milind did not like it at all, but it was all necessary to get his butt in gear..........LOVED Michi scene too....I actually imagined it ALLL😍😍....and prachi ufff this girl is already madly in love😳who wouldn't be right?.....glad tht milind has stopped smoking now😊\Lol...I said it wouldn't be for long...

This avinash guy i reli hope inder does not mak eany rishta with him😡 nice guy but MP forever!!!!😃Dont judge too soon hun...wait and see....😉😆

AND thannnnkkk uu soooo much hun for this lovely update😳😉 try updating sooon if u can😃😃😃I will try again...no promises...I always seem to break them

Originally posted by: jinc118

So happy i finally get an update to Aankhein. Itni der kyun lagaa di.ahhhhh! I'm sorrrrrrrry...sab naraaz the...😆...but I got busy in the beginning and then just lazy...😡

OK this part totally belonged 2................PRACHI😃 Oh did you think so...I thought I kept it pretty equal between the twi girls but okie..she deserved it anyway😃From the beginning when she knew it was Milind and was angry that Ayesha was trying to pretend otherwise...and the silent moment between Ayesha and Prachi....😭 ok i didn't cry but it was special. awww Glad you thought so...Reminded me of the old days of Prachi and Ayesha's friendship. I was actually remided of the epi when Ayesha was accused of stealing and she left insulted and came home crying and Prachi came to see her and to apologize...i know the situations were different but just the bond between them...that they felt each other's pain.OMan I loved their friendship, forget the jodi's these girls had what you call chemistry...oh yes they do feel each other's pain...Ayesha just conceal's her's better...but just like the show...Prachi will be there for her too...😊..And recently when Prachi hugged Ayesha thinking that Neev was after Milind and she reluctantly put her hand on Prachi's back...😭😭😭Oh yeh that was a good scene...reminds me of the Ayesha in the beginning of your fic very much I want the old Ayesha back so much.sameeeeeeeee

Ok this was about Prachi...The single moment that will remain with meYes I admit...there weren't many...Prachi burning her hand with Milind's cigarette. RIMA...Prachi's hurt in Milind's behavior and her punishment to him...aaaah my Michi. I know...do you reckon it was a bit extreme?And Milind better not touch a cigarette ever in his life again. He wont do...I can't get over it. Your Prachi is very different and i really like her lots. It refreshing to see her differently.I know what you mean...I tried to keep her the same...but it was really difficult especially with her blindness... I played out that scn in my head...them sitting on a wall side by side and her reaching for the cigarette and crushing it in her hands....i can see the pain on her face and the shock on his and the anger he must have felt at himself.Thats exactly how I intended it... I don't know the right word for what i felt...like my heart just lurched forward ...wanted to push Milind in the sea for hurting Prachi..maybe that'll cool is over heated head. Lol...🤣JC!!

Vaise kya hua at Shah Mansion??? PL having a bad impression of Milind...*shaking head* aisa kya ho gaya.Well I didn't really want to elaborate on that scene inside the house...but just imagine being an idiot and getting angry...

OK i can't not mention Neesha.😆 Lol...as I expected...I don't know why Rimz but i played both Neesha scn and Michi scn in slow motion in my head. Savoring it completely.aww thats good...it's because I've deprived you for so long...😆 No need to mention how hot Neev looked in the scn and how intently he was staring at Ayesha.hell yes!😃 And tho he didn't kiss her...but didn't miss the chance to graze her waist.😳 Lol...haina...just enough to jolt her...Naughty naughty boy. I love him. OH that reminds of Ayesha's action of making a fist while in Prachi's room as if trying to erase the lines on her hands. Poor soul, why does she torture herself so...she can't keep away from your sher for long dear.😳She wont be away from him long...😃lol...I hope you like what I have planned...but yeh, she wants so badly to be loved but she still so so scared....

And the other duffer...plz don't let him rant on about his status...get quite annoying. I'd rather like to see him making something out of himself instead of bein a bol bachchan. I'd rather that he shuts ppl up with his actions ( i hope you understand what i mean).I know what you mean JC...it can get irritating, I dont like it either...but it's all necessary to jog him into doing soemthing...he's pushed Prachi away only to get closer to her...😊

I'll make a small mention of Inder and Ayesha's awkwardness and Neev noticing them. I'll only make small mention because you didn't quite delve into Inder and Ayesha's emotions there. Hope you get Neev to intervene there.Yes I didn't...I rushed that bit because I couldn't think of what words I wanted to use😆 and it was pretty late and I wanted to crank the update out...Neev will play his part sooner than expected...

Thats it for now.
luv you for updatingNo probs hun...Thanks 😃🤗
Thanx hun
JC

Originally posted by: jess.amit_3

You updated😲?! Thank the lord.. H-a-l-l-i-l-u-j-a-h!😆 LMAO!!!!!!!!!😆😆😆 I see we've ditched the cheerleading and started a choir now...😆

Sweeeeeeetuu.. once again...BEAUTIFULLY DONE!!! woohoo..goo rimaaaa👏⭐️..ur my 'shupershtar'! ahaha...that reminds me of the Jamelia song...😃🤗..'chall superstar nahin tho..writer zaroor ban sakti hain'🤣😉😎

"Pappa pappa *pulls on trouser leg*...mujhe superstar bana hain..."

"Superstar nahin beta...writer bana...marne ke baad bhi log tumhe yaad rakenge..."😎😆

How dare Inder call my Milind..batameez!..bichaara milind..hes such a sweetheart..he takes care of ur daughter sho much..isi liye batameez hoga na inder k bacche😡 d.w milind..i love u so much sweetheart 🤗😳JESSU!!!!!!!🤣 I cant BELIEVE You called INDER SHAH THE GREAT that...😆

Omg Ayesha-Prachi scene was just too good for words honestly! Prachi getting teary , ayesha sees and turns around cuz she cant see her upset..wow....i dnt know how to word what t i felt with this scene..it was really very good..very well written jaani!awwww I'm glad you felt that way...I Love writing about them...partly coz I wish I had a sis but also because their relationship is so special...if only the creatives hadn't destroyed it😡

oOoOoMmMGgG! LOLThe Neesha scene..was ...aaaaaahhhhh! just soooooooooooo AWESOME!!😳😳..haayla..i pictured it exactly the way u wrote it!!! ahaha...good good...aisa hi chahtete hum...😉The way neev looked at ayesha with so much intensity in his eyes..ayesha seeming all scared but the inside of her knew that she wanted exactly what neev was making it seem like he wud do😆😉.Eggactly mere dost...when I re-read...at one popint I was going...Kiss her dammit!😆.im so glad he didnt kiss her just yet..so funny how he grabbed the file behind her and than showed it to her😆..such a cutie!Isn't he just...hai mera sheeeeeeeeer😳😆...

😳 Ayesha ..akhir kab tak tum apne dil ko sambhaal thi raho gi..ek na ek din tho neev leh hi jaayega na...or has he already..i know he has😆..dont lie now!😉😆LMAO....LOLOLOL........Jesssssssssi😆yes he already has...kuch subr aur kar le...they'll be together...😃

Uhm the Mishra ji- Milind talk..good dialogues jaani😉!😆omg...it pained me to write all that...bechara Milind...

Yay now the Michi sceneeee!!😆😃 Boy, dat was beautifully written👏😉Oh wow, Thank you...😊

I totally feel both Milind & Prachi..poor Milind haan....feel extremely bad for him..bichaara is mistaken..thinks she will be better off without him & Prachi..bichaari..she was soo hurt!!!!..i dont know if i shud be angry with milind for not putting away the cigarette when she was having breatheing problems..but than again..i know why he did that..this michi scene was really special..was really sad..i loved it to bitz..just love our michi.I'm glad you did even though it was sad...I thought I'd get slaps from everyone😆...but it worked out okay...😃

Really sweety u made my day 🤗!!awww and you made mine...I was literally ROFL when I read Inder ke bache...😆😆😆I cant stop even now...😆😆
Thank u so much for updating!!no worries...I'll try again "soon"
Love u always, always, & always.

Jessu<3Love you toooooooo

p.s. i will kik ur arse if ur upset about the yesterday thing..jay&shabbir both rule!😆😳Nahin yaar..kha ma kha emotional ho rahi thi...*Rima shakes out of it*😡😆

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hmm Reems finally I got to read something......did anyone ever tell you not updating in a month was torture..... where did they teach you this at school? ....... *pouts*. I know I know...*Rima holds her ears and looks adorable* I'm soorrrrrrrrrry...maaf kar dou...dubara nahin hoga...😃But anyways I'm happy you did and it was a wonderful update wonderful as in the last bit. When she puts out the cigarette in her palm. It was hurting to see Milind restrain himself and Prachi trying to reach out I feel she needed him then but I can fully understand the need to do so. Spot on...of course it would pain him to hurt her deliberatly...but only because he deems is necessary...Nevertheless I felt sad and I don't often feel thatawww I'm sorry.... I'm sad because both are vulnerable to each other's presence and very much aware of the plethora of emotions that they hold for each other.Yes that is very true...despite the fact that now ords have been spoken...it is aknowledged what they both feel... I guess it's the first of a series somehow I have the feeling the path of love won't a flower strewn one for them,You're right...it's isn't an easy path...I guess it waspretty deceptive in the beginning...but it'll get tougher than this for sure... he has to prove himself to his Baba, to the world, but does she has to suffer Reems? He does and so does she...bercause they'll both come out stronger...Prachi needs to find herself too....I find it a terrible thought in itself, I'm deeply upset.

Hopefully it wont be too painful...I hope you dont find it so in any case...

Neev and Ayesha was predictableYes it deff was...I was wondering whether anyone would say so...tried and tested...but it has a twist...so wait and watch... with all that showcasing he had to pull back at this moment though I do feel she'll crave him all the more now and might in some weak moment accept her desire to attain him.You're very close...that moment will be very strange indeed...she'll be coursing with a mixture of emotions then, Her reference to the palm lines how can she be so sure Neev does not exist in them?Its not just Neev...it's any guy and espcially a guy like him that isn't there...isn't supossed to be there...she doesn't want to end up like her mother... Is there no ray of hope left? Yet again heart wrenching to think that one could shun all possibilities of happiness forever.She's had it tough...perhaps she thinks its better not to hope and be disappointed... Now you mentioned the couples not meeting till the very end as in being with each other forever, and you did mention this going on till 30 parts my humble request UPDATE SOON !!!! LOL....actually I dont remember saying that...the couple will meeet sooner rather than later than the end, their metting wont be the end......cuz honestly i do have a very short level of patience. I udnerstand completely...feel like wacking myself...😆Lovely update.Thanks Munee😊