SFF: 'Forever' (MP)Part 10, P.26, July 10 - Page 16

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Posted: 17 years ago

Coming back to comment after reading it! 😳

*Edited* What a suprise!! My love finally decides to graze me with her writing....😆😳

First, hope you rocked in your exams!!!!

Hmm!! Getting back to this part...my heart was galloping 100 miles an hr as i read each line.(Seriously!)..Neetu...you always convey everything with the beautiful use and flow of words...The simple gestures and flows that have so much significance....😳😳 I love that in your ff..😳

Loved this part to bits!! After a long time i felt that i have read something that i really really really like!!😳 Very intense and at the same time sorrowful......Your heart tends to bleed for both the characters....That's all becos of your writing...

I liked the fact that even though Prachi erects all those defenses she cannot stay away from him when she is in his presence..that's the power of their bonding and of eternal love!.. Very nice!!👏 As always...Brilliant Sweetie👏

Now, that you are on vacation...please make sure that you update regularly can't tolerate months of absence from you!!😆 😡

Their love is scorching me even now!!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh wow DC! This was fantastic! I love the way you write and this was truly a masterpiece...It was well worth the wait! Milind's emotions have been brought out so beautifully..The intensity, the anger, the love, everything is portrayed so skilfully! Kudos to you DC! This bit was fabulous! Im very greedy, so im waiting for more!! Hope you update soon!
Thanks for the wonderful read!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey DC amazing part 👏 The flow of emotions is jus wonderful....plzz continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
fantastic part DC...i love ur style of writing. ur michi are on fire...i love milsi's intensity and prachis hopless attempt at trying to stay away from him. this part is very intriguing, i wonder why they split in the first place.

waiting for the next part 😊

p.s. hope ur exams went well.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hun...AMAZING...well and truly...you're writing style just leaves me speechless...it was just beautiful...haur ki keh sakdi main?...Thank you so much. LOVED IT...and I agree with Sangs...absolutely brilliant piece of writing, something to stand up and take notice. 😊 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Hun...AMAZING...well and truly...you're writing style just leaves me speechless...it was just beautiful...haur ki keh sakdi main?...Thank you so much. LOVED IT...and I agree with Sangs...absolutely brilliant piece of writing, something to stand up and take notice. 😊 👏

Rimz!! Neetu is an awesome writer!!!! 😃That's why her "Pdi" loves her!!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

Rimz!! Neetu is an awesome writer!!!! 😃That's why her "Pdi" loves her!!😳

Lol..I know she is...I've read some of her other Fics as well...seriously amazing...👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Lol..I know she is...I've read some of her other Fics as well...seriously amazing...👏

hmmm!!! don't say too much!! then she will not update for another 3 months!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
it was awesome.

i loved it.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Heyyy Neetu!!
Omg i seriously have to read this ff from the beginning! im sure it will be awesome..sukhi says ur really good!!!!😳
cant wait to read!! Will comment asap!!!!😃

love,
jessu<3

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