SFF: 'Forever' (MP)Part 10, P.26, July 10 - Page 14

Originally posted by: lilyattitude

nice!! 👏

Thank you!😊

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Very well written! Superb!
Im really eager to read the next part!
Hope you will write soon!

Thanks Tweety😊... I wish I could post sooner, but I'm booked until Thurs evening! Will do Friday.

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: swetha10

DC darling u r simply amazing....Part 7 is mindblowing..jus couldnt get off it.....Amazed by Prachi's answer...Oh god..lovely... 👏 Cant wait for da next part...Plzzzzzzzzzz update soon... 😊 😊 😊

Swetha,
😆😆 No yaar, you amaze me with your tolerance!😳... Thanks! Yeah, she's getting kinda fiesty eh? Is that a good thing or bad... hmmm... 😃 Thanks again, will update on Fri hopefully!

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: shabzc1

desi chic...part 7 is written superbly....loved all the detail and i could literally feel the goosebumps on my arms when i read the last two paragraphs 😳 ....when are michi going to get together again?

Shabz,
Thank you kindly... I think the mere thought of having him picturized in any manner is good enough for the goosebumps!😆😳 So I understand😉... They'll be together soon enough, but how about some mirch masala in the between phase??😛

Cheers,
dc

haila dc...yaar...buddy...meri jaan...kaise ho!? 😃 umm...im so so so sorry that i am only coming now to comment on your ff...i was first for ch6 but then...mujhe nahin paata ke kya hua...😕😕😕



but fikar not...i am back...i have printed out the last two updates...i am eating my el pollo loco chicken bowl and reading your ff at the same time...or i will once i post this comment...😆😆 but i am taking notes and everything so no worries...i will be back with a gigantic comment...paaka promise...😃

JAZ

ps: hope u liked my sorry 'note'...hint hint...the picture...😉

alright...im back...just like i said...😃...here with my long comment...ahem ahem...let me begin...*takes a deep breath* 😉

Part 6:
[quote=desi chic] for the briefest moment...her gaze caressed his...Mutely, she wished the Earth would open and swallow her up as remnants of a shattered dream m[/quote]
haila...that was something else...so touching and just WOW...😃😃😃...haila...escape from your own shadow, shores of reality and dream...wow...how deep...👏...meri pyaari si dc itni deep hai...wah wah...kya baath hai...im impressed...😉😉😉...but then i have been since the first part...omg...prachi...jhoot maat bolo...milind got you HOTT huh...☺️...i know he gets me hott...☺️☺️☺️...wait did i just say that...😛😛😛...haila...milind got hurt...uff...dc...kya yaar...mujhe bula liya hota...id be his nurse...woh bhi muft mein...what more can u ask for...😉😉😉...uff...what is this 'all that occured' business...😕...im dying to find out what exactly happened three yrs ago...come on yaar...aur kinta tadpaoge......prachi dont drink it...unless you know what it is...usse haat bhi nahin lagana...😊...prachi...kitni baar samjaoon...you can run but u cant hide...you cant hide from love...ahem ahem...ek gaana haan....... "love will find a away, jaaniyeh hiriyeh!" 😆...it just came to me...😆😆😆...omg...once you have been melted my milind mishras aadas...nothing will make u melt again...yeh elija thomas kya cheez hai...😉😉😉...man that part with milind watching prachi dance with ET 😉...haila...intense doesnt even begin to describe it...😳😳

Part 7:
aare prachi...no worries...if you were to fall, humara milind hai naa...he will catch you in his open and waiting arms...😳...id be tripping all over the place on purpose to fall into his arms...☺️...oye ET ke baache 😡...prachi pe chance maar raha hai...milind will kill you...phir tera kya hoga...🤢🤢🤢...milind...kabtak baita baita dekhte rehga...kuch karo...some slimeball has his hands on your prachi...kyun dc...kuch dishum dishum hojaye...😈😈😈...haila...who is this woman prachi is talking to...i dont like her at all...who prachi is, is none of her business...but joh bhi ho...jitne bhi mishra's kyun naa ho, there is only one Mrs. Prachi Milind Mishra 😳...oye hoye...milind came...and asked her that question..omg...im totally picturing that scene...😍...haye...*faints*...😉...aur prachi bhi maan gayi...she only has one mishra...woh hai MILIND...😉😉😉...

dc yaar...the updates rocked...they were fabulous...👏...beautifully done...i just loved it...just loved it...i could totally picture the scenes...especially the last scene between MP...you did a great job...👍🏼...

aab yeh bataoo...next update kaab hai...😃...eagerly waiting...
JAZ

please please pleaseeeeeeeeetell me you're updating soon!

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Wow amazing I loved it!!! Every bit of it its amazing really every part has been better than the last!!! You have such an amazing talent!!! You write so beautifully really I can imagine it part in my head!!! Every part had been better than the last can't wait till you write more when is the next part? Hope you continue soon!!! Plz plz plz!!!!!!

Neetu!!!! You better update! 😳