Coming back to comment after reading it! 😳 *gulp*😆
*Edited* What a suprise!! My love finally decides to graze me with her writing....😆😳 Aap kahin tana toh nahin maar rahe Di?😳😆😆 sorry...
First, hope you rocked in your exams!!!! Thanku *japphi*
Hmm!! Getting back to this part...my heart was galloping 100 miles an hr as i read each line.(Seriously!)..Neetu...you always convey everything with the beautiful use and flow of words...The simple gestures and flows that have so much significance....😳😳 I love that in your ff..😳 Bada pyar jhalak raha hai Di... 😆 jkes apart, you truly humble me... moti hojaoongi aur upar se diabetic with such sweet words!😳 and gallopin Di?😆😆 Zara dekh kar, raaste pe nazar rakhiyega!😉
Loved this part to bits!! After a long time i felt that i have read something that i really really really like!!😳 Very intense and at the same time sorrowful......Your heart tends to bleed for both the characters....That's all becos of your writing... *salaam* to your imagination... I just am a crazy rambler😆 Glad for your tolerance!😳
I liked the fact that even though Prachi erects all those defenses she cannot stay away from him when she is in his presence..that's the power of their bonding and of eternal love!.. Very nice!!👏 As always...Brilliant Sweetie👏 That's what seems to come out from Michi's relationship... the way Shabbo and Panchi portray it all... finess😉 Di, you spoil me!😆 U must be speaking of someone else...
Now, that you are on vacation...please make sure that you update regularly can't tolerate months of absence from you!!😆 😡 Erm... which emotion shall I adopt of the two?😳
Their love is scorching me even now!!😆 Oh God!!!... Woh aag hi kya, joh pal mein tham jaaye😉
Cheers,
dc