SFF: 'Forever' (MP)Part 10, P.26, July 10 - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

Coming back to comment after reading it! 😳 *gulp*😆

*Edited* What a suprise!! My love finally decides to graze me with her writing....😆😳 Aap kahin tana toh nahin maar rahe Di?😳😆😆 sorry...

First, hope you rocked in your exams!!!! Thanku *japphi*

Hmm!! Getting back to this part...my heart was galloping 100 miles an hr as i read each line.(Seriously!)..Neetu...you always convey everything with the beautiful use and flow of words...The simple gestures and flows that have so much significance....😳😳 I love that in your ff..😳 Bada pyar jhalak raha hai Di... 😆 jkes apart, you truly humble me... moti hojaoongi aur upar se diabetic with such sweet words!😳 and gallopin Di?😆😆 Zara dekh kar, raaste pe nazar rakhiyega!😉

Loved this part to bits!! After a long time i felt that i have read something that i really really really like!!😳 Very intense and at the same time sorrowful......Your heart tends to bleed for both the characters....That's all becos of your writing... *salaam* to your imagination... I just am a crazy rambler😆 Glad for your tolerance!😳

I liked the fact that even though Prachi erects all those defenses she cannot stay away from him when she is in his presence..that's the power of their bonding and of eternal love!.. Very nice!!👏 As always...Brilliant Sweetie👏 That's what seems to come out from Michi's relationship... the way Shabbo and Panchi portray it all... finess😉 Di, you spoil me!😆 U must be speaking of someone else...

Now, that you are on vacation...please make sure that you update regularly can't tolerate months of absence from you!!😆 😡 Erm... which emotion shall I adopt of the two?😳

Their love is scorching me even now!!😆 Oh God!!!... Woh aag hi kya, joh pal mein tham jaaye😉


Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 17 years ago


Thank you!😉

Cheers,

dc
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Oh wow DC! This was fantastic! I love the way you write and this was truly a masterpiece...It was well worth the wait! Milind's emotions have been brought out so beautifully..The intensity, the anger, the love, everything is portrayed so skilfully! Kudos to you DC! This bit was fabulous! Im very greedy, so im waiting for more!! Hope you update soon!
Thanks for the wonderful read!



Hey Tweetz! Kya yaar, itna meeta khilaogi toh main moti hojaoongi😆 Jkes! What "masterpiece"? I just like to blab😉 I'm glad it was worth your time though... thank you!... Your greediness has me in a fix... laugh or cry?😆😕😳 Thanks yaar, I will cont asap! Much appreciated!

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dc
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey DC amazing part 👏 The flow of emotions is jus wonderful....plzz continue soon... 😊



Swetha yaar... thank u tonz!!! Will do so.

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dc
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Hun...AMAZING...well and truly...you're writing style just leaves me speechless...it was just beautiful...haur ki keh sakdi main?...Thank you so much. LOVED IT...and I agree with Sangs...absolutely brilliant piece of writing, something to stand up and take notice. 😊 👏



Hey Reemz!! Hahaha!!... *bows humbly* you are mad woman!😆 I know I'm pretty crazy too... but, thank you kindly. Tussi joh marzi kahi jao, saanu sab kuch kabool hai. Your words are priceless... PDi is amazing herself, and she just loves me too much😆😆 Oh wow... yaar, bas karo... I'm thinking you read something else, I'm not deserving of such... flattered... Thank you!!... I finally have time to catch up on ffs... that means yours also!😃

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dc
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

Rimz!! Neetu is an awesome writer!!!! 😃That's why her "Pdi" loves her!!😳



How's the weather down there?😆 Mujhe "palkon" par bitaya jaata hai yahan par... Madam, you are too much! *mwuaah*

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dc
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shabzc1

fantastic part DC...i love ur style of writing. ur michi are on fire...i love milsi's intensity and prachis hopless attempt at trying to stay away from him. this part is very intriguing, i wonder why they split in the first place.

waiting for the next part 😊

p.s. hope ur exams went well.



Shabzzzzzzzzz!! On fire eh? Wow... koi paani lao yaar... kahin aag pehl na jaaye😆 Thankz yaar, much much appreciated! Thank you for the wishes also! 🤗

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Lol..I know she is...I've read some of her other Fics as well...seriously amazing...👏



How much does it take?... 😆 *bows deeply... *😳

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dc
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

hmmm!!! don't say too much!! then she will not update for another 3 months!😆



*rolf* kya khoob pehchana hai!😆😆 Loving the faith!😉

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jess.amit<3

Heyyy Neetu!!
Omg i seriously have to read this ff from the beginning! im sure it will be awesome..sukhi says ur really good!!!!😳
cant wait to read!! Will comment asap!!!!😃

love,
jessu<3



Jess... You're taking that duffer's word?😆 Have u noticed his Punjabi?😕 Jkes!!... Aww, sweetness... Will be looking fwd to your rxn!😳 Btw, what else has he said?😆

Cheers,
dc

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