SS - Silent Echoes ...(Wrapped Up!)

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Pori

@Pori

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

wow.. I havent realised tht u updated the 5th part.. it was fabulous!!

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Sareeta

@sareeta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Pori
wow.. I havent realised tht u updated the 5th part.. it was fabulous!!

Aww, thanks a lot! Yeah I did update it yday and today will be wrapping it up for good! 😉 Hope you enjoy the rest of the parts jus as much ! 😊

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Panache

@ppanache

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

O.k..jaan..i read the whole story once again.

Sareeta..Awesome..they are soulmates for sure...when i read again, i felt this shimmer of hope that she would be waiting for him and him alone.

The way he feels for her as though without her ,he is nothing and even though he has material things he has lost a piece of his soul..

Well said...Thank you! It was really splendid.

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

Aww.....Sareeta darling,

I was gone fro a few days and you were out with a wonderful.....fanfic dear.

First after reading all the 6 parts dear...👏

It looks like everyone said everything that I could say too...it was simply beautiful...the wya you described their indivisula emotions and feelings. Just perfect adn I coudl so see them....emoting those emotions and facial expression.

Loved the way Sukrit came clean...hope she does in the drama too...

Your words pierced the heart .....just as your poetry do ....as does your wonderful video mixes.

Another fantastic piece of work from you or should I say art.👏

Love

Krishna

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critically-sane

@critically-sane

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#35

Sareeta.. love your story..! can't wait to read more..! 😃

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#36

Part 7 has been updated ...

My apologies if the parts have been small, but I jus posted as when I felt it was a logical break of thought.. before I continued... 😊

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

😆 Good girl... was waiting...for that...part 7 was way to short😆

Edited by kubare - 18 years ago

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#38

^^ Krishna ji, 2 more parts and its a wrap! Thoda intezaar kariyega... main bas yun gayi aur yun aayi kahaani niptaake! 😉 😆

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#39

Parts 9 and 10 have been updated... 😊

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Panache

@ppanache

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#40

Sareeta...not fair.. 😳 You stopped at the most important part!!! Left me hanging!! 😳

Awesome...Awesome...i loved the way the secondary characters are portrayed in this...Even though those characters are of no significance to the Story you made them real and they do make an impact.

Like the old man who is drinking his coffee...I can picturize the scene so well....Awesome....

Now, please do post the next part...!! I am waiting.... 😳

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