SS - Silent Echoes ...(Wrapped Up!) - Page 5

Originally posted by: shananubis

OMG Sareeta, I was gone one day and here you are with your SS.... Simply one word Awesome... 👏 👏 👏 Awww, I am so glad you liked it! Actually, I had been doing so many vid mixes, I wanted to get back to my element and that was writing... and this idea jus struck me while at work and I jus penned it all down... as it flowed...

The main thing that I like abt ur stories are that you stress on each moment... as if trying to hold it still... I could imagine Milind and Prachi's expressions all through while reading... Awww, yeah I have been told that by a quite a few! Well I dont really do that intentionally, but I guess... my imagination is quite slow and detailed.. so may be coz I write it as I imagine, one could blame my vivid imagination then! 😆

Thnx for the story.. Please keep writing... Thank you soooooo much for writing in and reading and appreciating as well! I will sure try and share my writings whenever possible!

Shan

Originally posted by: panache

oh! my god! Sareeta *Hitting my forehead*
Npw, i know its not the ending 😆 😆 hawwww, aaap bhi na! !! Arre apna sar mat patko yaar! Dont ya worry, aapne toh part 3 ke baad hi , the end karaar diya, ab toh cahudah aur parts likhe hai maine! 😆 Ab toh mujhe pata hai jab tak main the end na likhoon, aap bolo ge bhi nahin !! Kiddin' 😆

Awesome line..."Walking over to the threshold, he paused involuntarily… as she noticed him pausing and almost walked over to him, when she saw him… over come his hesitance , and take the step towards the one soul, the key to his life… " - I love that phrase..."Key to my life..."... it has a very beautiful... soulful essence to it! Hence I used it... I wanted that beautiful essence between Milind and Prachi to be conveyed... 😊

I liked the way you have said that she is the key to his soul and his life...

I feel sad for sukriti though..but i guess now that her bhai knows he would do his best to save her.. and the love btw brother and sister..beatufully potrayed...Well I credited that character with more sense and pride than the one portrayed in the serial at the moment... coz I wanted her to be someone who respected her brother above all, for he was all she called Family!

Awesome once again....And i am not going to do the mistake of thinking that its the end.... 😉 Awww..!! 😉

Waiting to see how you are going to bring the pair together....How is she going to react once they meet... 😳 Sure... and I hope you like the ending, that I have decided... I hope its not a dampener! 😊

Originally posted by: madhu_vasireddy

OMg Sareeta,you have updated the SS with 3 more parts and I haven't noticed it. .That's so bad of me. The way you described Milind,Prachi and Sukrithi's emotions was mind-blowing.👏 👏When I was reading those parts I didn't feel that I was reading a story.I felt as if the whole story was taking place infront of my eyes.So real was it.Lovely.I am not finding correct words to describe the feeling.I want to tell you how happy I was reading this.But then you know I am out of words completely. You leave me speechless as always.Now I am eagerly wating to see how you would bring our MICHI together. 😳 And I know that it would be a real dhamakedaar one with loads of fire works.I am very sure of that.Thanks a lot for this SS Sareeta.
Madhavi.

Originally posted by: panache

O.k..jaan..i read the whole story once again. Oh dear me , you did! Thank you... I hope it was worth it! 😊

Sareeta..Awesome..they are soulmates for sure...when i read again, i felt this shimmer of hope that she would be waiting for him and him alone. Well , you gotta wait and watch till the end ... but I must , you did give it away! 😆 May be I ought to not let it all out until the every end! 😆 But hopeless me, I always cant restrain from having the hope floats essence all through while I write... my weakness...!
The way he feels for her as though without her ,he is nothing and even though he has material things he has lost a piece of his soul.. Bingo! I am so glad I was able to convey that through the writing.. coz it was exactly what I had etched his true self out to be... in my story!

Well said...Thank you! It was really splendid. Thank you soooooo much Sangeeta! means a lot coming from you! Will cherish them! 😊

Originally posted by: kubare

Aww.....Sareeta darling, Hey Krishna dahlin'! So good to see, I was wondering kahaan gaayab ho gayi ek din ke liye! 😆

I was gone fro a few days and you were out with a wonderful.....fanfic dear. Aapke liye surprise !! Acchi lagi?! 😊

First after reading all the 6 parts dear...👏

*Bows humbly to applause! * Thank you soooo much!! I hope you like the rest of the parts and the ending as well!

It looks like everyone said everything that I could say too...it was simply beautiful...the wya you described their indivisula emotions and feelings. Just perfect adn I coudl so see them....emoting those emotions and facial expression. Thank you sooooooo much! I jus pen down , what I imagine, when a thought strikes me ... Its deeply humbling that I am able to convey it across in my writing and that people are able to appreciate it as well! THank you so much indeed!

Loved the way Sukrit came clean...hope she does in the drama too... For me, the Bro Sis relationship is one I value very high and I could bear to have Sukruti's character hide anything from her Bro... knowing she was the reason for the misunderstandings... albeit indirectly....I jus credited that relationship with more deeper and stronger sense of bonding!

Your words pierced the heart ..... Awww Bless mah soul! just as your poetry do ....as does your wonderful video mixes. Thank you soooooooo much! Its indeed very very humbling! 😊

Another fantastic piece of work from you or should I say art.👏

*bows to applause, hand on heart, deeply humbled! *😳

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: critically-sane

Sareeta.. love your story..! can't wait to read more..! 😃