SS - Silent Echoes ...(Wrapped Up!) - Page 2

Originally posted by: animerocks

OMG!! i luv it..

continue soon.. it awesome! 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: critically-sane

OMG love it love it..! can't wait to read the next part..! 😃

Originally posted by: Pori

awsomeee... i luved the wai u put all the things together

Originally posted by: panache

Sareeta..As usual it was a great experience to read your writing.. Thank you soooooo much Sangeeta! Thatz very kind of you to say so!

Even though i have seen the episode the words that you have written are more powerful than the scene itself. OMG, bless my soul! I mean... what do I say?? I jus wrote it dil se yaar... I am so humbled! Thank you!

Even if Milind and Prachi acted out the same thing that you have wriiten it would not make justice to your writing.. awesome written once again.. Oh my dear lord, Sangeeta , yaar aap tho meri jaan lekar rahoge! Cmawwn... the way Shabbir enacts it out... its numbing! And I totally fell for the way Panchi enacted that last episode! And what I wrote was a continuation of the episode , but yep... with a slightly different interpretation!
I am truly overwhelmed by your kind words! Thank you Sangeeta! 😊

I loved the words that describe the pain that he is feeling... Thank you sooooooo much!

Another point that i loved is if she had stayed the thought that goes thru his mind " a dream of a man he could be" truly well thought out.. To be honest, I didnt really think too much abt it... I jus thought as Milind and then it all came out! Ever heard of something.. like ..."You make me wanna be a better person...." ... This was a line I had written long back... for something... and it jus flowed into my thoughts this time too! And its what strikes me when I see Milind looking at Prachi! 😊

I also liked it when you said that with the tears she had grown from a girl to a woman....True....so true... Thank you! 😳

Another splendind work from you! 😳 Aww, you are being very kind!

Do continue soon... 😳 Have already updated the post! 😊

Originally posted by: meli

Sareeta,

After a long time, I do read your story...used to read poems and SS on KAA section when IQ still was there. 😛 I am glad to read them here in Kayamath also thanks to our Michi jodi. 😳 Aww, thanks Meli! I wasnt aware that you read my posts on KAA! Thats indeed nice to know and humbling as well that you enjoyed them! Yeah Michi jodi does rock! No denying that!

Your description of their pains, and emotions that went through their mind was beautifully written in words... thank you soooo much! I jus penned it straight from the heart! 😊

Very a realistic one. 👏 I didnt want to dramatize it, guess its always been like that with me... and also I jus started off as an extension to the last episode! 😊

Originally posted by: apapap

not only did u bring out his pain beautifully...but hers too.
to shut the voice that had uttered those words...which caused her infinite amount of pain...this hit me..(punch types). but still hoping...that he'd call out..just once.."deep desperation"... 👏 👏 👏
while reminiscing her times with him...its killing her to step away from her world...leaving behind a shattered soul. uff...she is just walkin out empty...hollow...and the last few steps are hell...she winces with the pain...aiyyyo...!!! when she takes her last glance and steps out...i was all misty eyed ! im sure ur havin a lot of fun :P

next part again...i love the way u've described sukriti's relationship with her brother. respect love all encompass this single relation. now shes set out to protect her protector...her brother...
"free from the chains that he willed himself to be bound in, unknowingly."
as u know i love the way u describe siblings ka bond. this again struck a chord in my hrt...
continue soon girlie..:d im waiting.