SS - Silent Echoes ...(Wrapped Up!) - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sareeta.. i was blown away..! it was so moving.. and everyone's pain was so well etched out..!! i can't wait to read more..! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: panache

Sareeta..First Let me apologize for not commenting earlier!I read it but had to cook lunch as ppl were coming over! 😉 Awww, you dont need to apologize, now you are really embarrassing me yaar! I know you eventually do leave your comments coz I do value them immensely!

O.k..I loved the way you described Prachi's pain..I liked the part where you said that "leaving the world that she had nutured" truly apt. That was her dream world...and her remembering the time with him...Awesome! 😳 Thank you sooo much! I wanted to bring in a diff aspect of pain that she felt... that jus didnt mean losing him... but losing a world... that she had so carefully... worked at!

Hun! you have perfectly described her mindset and pain..very well... Thank you soooo much!

Now, comes sukriti's part - After seeing her brother so broken she cannot help but reveal the truth. Very well done.. Thank you soooo much!

I really do feel for the pair... 😳 Thank you soooo much! Awww, you feel for the pair, matlab mere yeh choti si koshish to keep that mood of the episode continuation barkaraar has worked! 😳 Thank you!

For me personally its very difficult to describe pain, the emotion behind it with the very touching words but you have done it beautifully ..... 😳
Guess... I relate to the pain in ppl at times at a deeper level and with Bhaggu's gift... I guess I have been able to express it to the best of my ability!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Read the ending.. * Edited* This is not the ending apparently. I thought it was!😳

👏

The small ray of hope that everything would be o.k can be seen through your writing. The hope that Milind and Prachi would be together after his sister tells him the truth....Very good!

Sukriti redeems herself in the eyes of the reader by revealing the truth.

Awesome once again...I loved it..

The 3 characters and their pain from their own angle is potrayed beautifully.

Need i say more! It was amazing! 😳
Edited by panache - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh God, Sangeeta, it aint the ending !!

There is more to come! Did it seem that way ??! Oh dear no!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: critically-sane

Sareeta.. i was blown away..! it was so moving.. and everyone's pain was so well etched out..!! i can't wait to read more..! 😃


Thanks Shwetha! I am really glad you could relate to the essence of the story! Like I mentioned, it is an extension of a state of mind, until it changes.. for both the protagonists and thatz how I intend to keep it! So glad you liked it!
Will be wrapping it up soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Oh God, Sangeeta, it aint the ending !!

There is more to come! Did it seem that way ??! Oh dear no!



Arre..yaar..i thought you were just going to write abt their pain from 3 different views (M, P and S).

O.k..me editing my reply now! I really thought that was it...😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: panache



Arre..yaar..i thought you were just going to write abt their pain from 3 different views (M, P and S).

O.k..me editing my reply now! I really thought that was it...😊



Yaar , aap bhi na! I loved your interpretation of my story....and something that wasnt a concious effort from my side, but yeah, I didnt intend to divert from the pain bit either...

The story is indeed short, but I have jus a tad bit more to add and then its a wrap! An ending, I wanted to give it!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG Sareeta, I was gone one day and here you are with your SS.... Simply one word Awesome... 👏 👏 👏

The main thing that I like abt ur stories are that you stress on each moment... as if trying to hold it still... I could imagine Milind and Prachi's expressions all through while reading...

Thnx for the story.. Please keep writing...

Shan
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh! my god! Sareeta *Hitting my forehead*
Npw, i know its not the ending 😆 😆

Awesome line..."Walking over to the threshold, he paused involuntarily… as she noticed him pausing and almost walked over to him, when she saw him… over come his hesitance , and take the step towards the one soul, the key to his life… " -

I liked the way you have said that she is the key to his soul and his life...
I feel sad for sukriti though..but i guess now that her bhai knows he would do his best to save her.. and the love btw brother and sister..beatufully potrayed...

Awesome once again....And i am not going to do the mistake of thinking that its the end.... 😉

Waiting to see how you are going to bring the pair together....How is she going to react once they meet... 😳


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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMg Sareeta,you have updated the SS with 3 more parts and I haven't noticed it. .That's so bad of me. The way you described Milind,Prachi and Sukrithi's emotions was mind-blowing.👏 👏When I was reading those parts I didn't feel that I was reading a story.I felt as if the whole story was taking place infront of my eyes.So real was it.Lovely.I am not finding correct words to describe the feeling.I want to tell you how happy I was reading this.But then you know I am out of words completely. You leave me speechless as always.Now I am eagerly wating to see how you would bring our MICHI together. 😳 And I know that it would be a real dhamakedaar one with loads of fire works.I am very sure of that.Thanks a lot for this SS Sareeta.

Madhavi.
Edited by madhu_vasireddy - 18 years ago

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