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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks for the brilliant story with a beautiful end. Short sweet and simply outstanding FF.👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
the end????😲..no warnin bells....nuthin.... this is sudden death😭..
this is unfair...,unjust,...mean...,illegal...,unrighteous...,absurd,...ridiculous...,impossible,...
dishonorable ..questionable...preposterous..😭
hmm.. am ok now..😆
i must say i really enjoyed readin this FF n is sad it has ended so soon..😭
lovd it..esp this last😭 part..
u have beautifully unfolded prachi's past ..in an attractive manner..
and how milind came to know her past is cool i think..
milind prachi confrontation in the house is just great.....gud tat PL n rashmi left the house at that time otherwise dunno wat they wud hav seen.😆..small talk n quick action..simply lovd it ..
n lovd it wen milind sed ''your daughter has agreed to marry me too'' so confident....so chweeet.
n the endin ofcourse was superb..
for me to tell u the truth it wud hav been more polished if u had given a few small descriptions here n there in order to visualize n enjoy it fully wen readin....
but not to forget ur updates were always with surprises wich got me hooked up badly..tats a really cool idea i think...theres always sumthin new n interestin happenin...no boring stuff to skip.
well tats my view..
overall a short n sweeeeet FF ...a story tat i wud prefer to watch as a movie..👏
cooool..👍🏼
Edited by layla44 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
shubs gr8 story just loved it do write some more
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Posted: 16 years ago
@Layla, itni saari gaaliya de rahi ho?😆
I will reply to your comments (and everyone else's) later!
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Posted: 16 years ago
@All, Sorry to have ended this FF. I never wanted to write another after PKHH as I honestly didn't have enough time to dedicate to writing. But this particular FF was boiling in my mind and I had to get it out!!! I know this plot could have been stretched into a few more parts before I revealed Prachi's past. But as I am going to start a new project at work from today, it wouldn't have been possible.
Will get back to writing if something boils in my head again!!!😆
Edited by michifanreal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Shubha this was unexpected, I mean I was expecting the FF to go on for about 2-4 chapters. To my surprise you just ended it in one shot. Ok my comments, liked the letter format in part 10A with the photo, it was something different and personal. I felt as though Prachi in the letters had a crush on him, but when she met him thats when her feelings developed into something concrete and real.

Last part was written well too, loved it that Michi esp Milind didn't beat around the bush, and asked for P's hand in marriage. Am glad that Prachi got a 'happily ever after', she couldnt have got a better partner than Milind. I could understand and see from where Prachi was coming from when she was reluctant to let Milind come into her life because of her past. Will miss this FF.

I hope to read some more FF's in future from you :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: michifanreal

@Layla, itni saari gaaliya de rahi ho?😆
I will reply to your comments (and everyone else's) later!

dear u deserve it and more😆 for finishin the sweeeeet FF😍 without a warnin..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: layla44

dear u deserve it and more😆 for finishin the sweeeeet FF😍 without a warnin..


If I gave warning people would have made guesses! I just wanted the end to be a surprise for everyone. (except for Sumu, who seemed to guess the story to some extent).
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Insomniac

Awwe Shubhs I'm left feeling shocked after reading that;

Shocked? 😲

on one hand I'm thinking why couldn't I have guessed it was like this and on the other hand - there is no way I could have got that.

Yeyyyy, I wanted no one to guess it.. Sumu had come close... but I don't think she would have guessed it this way.

I'm saying this because there were a lot of hints that you had thrown in which I had picked up on (like why did she know he liked wearing cufflinks, her trust for Milind with Rashmi, and whenever I read your updates I always had the feeling that she loves him more than he does her -

Yes she loved him more than he loved her- because she had almost worshiped him for 5 years or so while Milind fell in love recently. But he loves to very much too.

I think I said this in one of my replies to one of your updates). What threw me was why he was in the picture with her (even though you didn't confirm this, but that's how it looked to most of us),

I know most of you thought the pic was Milind's. Yes Milind was in it in the background, but it was Prachi that Milind saw in the photograph and he remembed the college event he had attended seeing the pic. And then he saw the folder...

then I think at that point I just lost the plot totally, but at the back of my mind I kept thinking that she must have a past with him.

She did have a past with him didn't she? What if it all was in her mind!😆

However having said all of that I never would have thought that she was his secret/invisible lover. Wow that's just an amazing scenario and it makes so much sense and fits the story so well. What is so great about your suspense/mystery narrative is that Prachi's behavior actually made sense in the end, and you just didn't make up any old random story.

Thank you thank you. This is what I wanted it to come out as. I am glad I justified Prachi. I was worried about it as I always presented her as cold..

You are a genius. I loved reading this so so much. I loved the fact that she was deeply in love with him even after her marriage and consummation with Neeve.

I am no genius hun.. I am just crazy!!1😆😆 Yes Prachi loved Milind irrespective of her marriage to Neev. May be if Neev had not died she would have slowly given up on Milind and accepted Neev. But I had other plans for her.

Wow the way Milind kissed her passionately straight away after showing her the folder and throwing it aside - that was hot.

Thanks.. He knew there was no point in arguing with her for she was only going to say NO if he approached her mildly.

I guess I know why you said I will laugh when you finish this FF - is it because all us crazy Milind/Shabir fans may end up like Prachi - another fantasy in a fantasy. So I suppose the motto of your FF is "TRUE LOVE WILL ALWAYS FIND ITS WAY"

Yes that was my motto. I will PM you and make you laugh!!! You can say that Milind/Shabbir fans (at least some real crazy ones) are like this isn't it? Well, I myself used to write letters to Milind in this forum before he disappointed me. The difference is I used to write about him not me.

Thanks so much for this FF Shubs - it was entertainment at its best.

thank you so much for your kind appreciation. Me happy.😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Insomniac

Forgot to say that I also loved the format of your update - in a personal diary style -

Thank you. I am glad people liked this format. I was worried how it will be taken (also because I wrote it all in such a hurry).

at first I felt she was a bit of a stalker - as I read on the love that she had for Milind was something deeper - it was almost the sole reason of her living - her strength and her confidence all stemmed from her love for him.

She was a stalker at first.. gradually she got attracted, attached to him. He grew on her..

By the way their first night was full on passion and longing for each other just as would be expected. Also Rashmi has got the father that Prachi always craved for her, for her daughter. 👏

thank you. Yes it's a happy ending for htem!

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