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Originally posted by: ..kashish..

wow!

another excellent story completed!
thanks Kashish (nice name, I like it). This was also finished a long time ago. I just put it all in one page.

so prachi used to love mili from the beginning and he had no idea abt it!
Yes, she was first infatuated then attached to him in her own world.

wow!...

aww..poor prachi having to go thru all that in her inlaws...but i guess that is not unusual when the husband dies withing a year of the marriage!
Yes.. she was unfortunate in that front.

aww...rashmi is so cute! love her!...

and the interaction that both PL and her have with mili...
I love Rashmi too. She is my fav character in this FF.

hope u write another story!...
Pataa nahi.. if I will write another.

loved the whole story!
thanks for taking time to read the whole thing.

😊😊

part 1:
Wow looks like we have quiet a scholars here..Milind is harvard garduate..sukriti IIT garduate...Prachi IIM graduate..
So Milind is very confident in his choice..Milind comes as a very modest and harworking guy..

So here comes the twist..So there is a past for Prachi..You always manage to bring a twist at the end of each part...
Part 2:
Wow like the brother sister relationship..Infact i like Milind sukrithi bonding in all ur fanfics..Loved this line"It's not that I am not listening to you and I consider you no less than my mother"..this shows how close they both are and how much importance position she has in his life...
Part 3:
so here comes the truth ..Prachi has a daughter tht was quiet unexpected...So the fact tht Prachi is married has already started disturbing Milind..

Part 4:
Loved Rashmi and Milind bonding..the way Milind tried to comfort Prachi at the hospital was good..Here comes another cliff hanger exactly at the last line..how do you manage to bring such cliff hangers..
Part 5:
Wow ice creams ..I love ice cream and love strawberry..I simply love them..i eat strawberry ice creams like crazy..Even in the peak winters i sit in the car and make my hubby get ice cream for me..and again eat only from the shops ..i wouldnt even store it at home in the fridge...My frnds r pretty surprise shocked tht inspite of eating ice creams everyweek ..im still lean..So Neev was in Navy and he died saving his fellowmen..felt bad for Prachi..
Part 6:
So Milind and Rashmi's bonding is getting stronger day by day..loved the way both fed the fishes..So Mallika comes here to..Do you like Mallika a lot...hmm..she gifted hmm cufflinks..why do i feel it is not a coincidence..
Part 7:
How could Niharika support tht ranveer..im glad that Pranay helped her to get out of tht hell..Liked Milind's gesture at the park..where he asked her to sit in the place where he sat so tht it would be warm..I really love this Prachi ..who is ambitious..inspite of so many troubles..she is confident and does not want any sympathy..simply love her..
Part 8:
The first line cracked me up"it must be her or your mother-in-law"..So here comes Mallika..OMg..i had to reread the last line..to make sure if i read it correctly..i was like did prachi really say I love you Milind"
Part 9:
Milind is a perfect gentleman dint want prachi's mom to knw tht her daughter drank alcohol..instead tld her tht some one mixed it in her drinks..
Poor Milind had so happy that he would be proposing her and she would accept it..but in the end all his dreams where crushed by Prachi's words...

Part 10B: Loved the way milind says You don't need to say anything. When you yourself can travel the depth of love, why are you underestimating my love and also the way he commanded Rashmi to call him Papa..
Loved the series of questions and answer session they had on their wedding night..it was cute..the question tht took the cake was Milind asking Prachi's permission if he could kiss her..

Epilogue..
Wow loved the father daughter relationship..when i read all the other parts i felt that it would have been nice if you ahd written more abt Milind rashmi bonding..but here you have made it up in epilogue..the scene in the ice cream parlor with father and daughter was written so well, when Rashmi says that she would have loved him even if Neev were alive was so touching..guess the father daughter relationship is always spl...and also liked the little fights b/w the siblings..

Originally posted by: madhavi_v

part 1:
Wow looks like we have quiet a scholars here..Milind is harvard garduate..sukriti IIT garduate...Prachi IIM graduate..
So Milind is very confident in his choice..Milind comes as a very modest and harworking guy..

Yes I wanted them all to be well educated here.

So here comes the twist..So there is a past for Prachi..You always manage to bring a twist at the end of each part...

Yes Prachi has quite a past.

Part 2:
Wow like the brother sister relationship..Infact i like Milind sukrithi bonding in all ur fanfics..Loved this line"It's not that I am not listening to you and I consider you no less than my mother"..this shows how close they both are and how much importance position she has in his life...

I love bro-sis relations. Since they don't have parents, their bond is more special here.

Part 3:
so here comes the truth ..Prachi has a daughter tht was quiet unexpected...So the fact tht Prachi is married has already started disturbing Milind..

Yes that's Prachi's past.

Part 4:
Loved Rashmi and Milind bonding..the way Milind tried to comfort Prachi at the hospital was good..Here comes another cliff hanger exactly at the last line..how do you manage to bring such cliff hangers..

Hahaaa.. this one is not much of a surprise though.

Part 5:
Wow ice creams ..I love ice cream and love strawberry..I simply love them..i eat strawberry ice creams like crazy..Even in the peak winters i sit in the car and make my hubby get ice cream for me..and again eat only from the shops ..i wouldnt even store it at home in the fridge...My frnds r pretty surprise shocked tht inspite of eating ice creams everyweek ..im still lean..So Neev was in Navy and he died saving his fellowmen..felt bad for Prachi..

Lucky you, I think if I eat like that I would put on a lot of weight. But then I am not that fond of anythign that tastes sweet and milky. I am saved.

Part 6:
So Milind and Rashmi's bonding is getting stronger day by day..loved the way both fed the fishes..So Mallika comes here to..Do you like Mallika a lot...hmm..she gifted hmm cufflinks..why do i feel it is not a coincidence..

It's not. I don't like the serial Mallika. But I love confident, well dressed, good looking women in general.

Part 7:
How could Niharika support tht ranveer..im glad that Pranay helped her to get out of tht hell..Liked Milind's gesture at the park..where he asked her to sit in the place where he sat so tht it would be warm..I really love this Prachi ..who is ambitious..inspite of so many troubles..she is confident and does not want any sympathy..simply love her..

Niharika didn't know the reality about Ranveer, and she trusts her son blindly and hates Prachi as she thinks she brought bad luck. Prachi is self respectful despite of her troubles.

Part 8:
The first line cracked me up"it must be her or your mother-in-law"..So here comes Mallika..OMg..i had to reread the last line..to make sure if i read it correctly..i was like did prachi really say I love you Milind"

That was to add some comedy..

Prachi did say she loves Milind as she was drunk.

Part 9:
Milind is a perfect gentleman dint want prachi's mom to knw tht her daughter drank alcohol..instead tld her tht some one mixed it in her drinks..
Poor Milind had so happy that he would be proposing her and she would accept it..but in the end all his dreams where crushed by Prachi's words...

Hmm, you will know the reason soon.

Part 10 A: here comes the letter..Simply superb..It was an excellent part to explain how much Prachi loves Milind...the way it started with infatuation and then gardually becoming love..and the way she used her love for him as a reason to live was simply good..Initially when Prachi said i love you to Milind..i was like how did she fall for Milind in a short while..after reading this part..it made sense..

Glad that it made sense. This was the catch of the story.. infatuation grown into love due to Prachi's tragic life.

Part 10B: Loved the way milind says You don't need to say anything. When you yourself can travel the depth of love, why are you underestimating my love and also the way he commanded Rashmi to call him Papa..
Loved the series of questions and answer session they had on their wedding night..it was cute..the question tht took the cake was Milind asking Prachi's permission if he could kiss her..

Actually I loved writing that scene where Milind claims Prachi and her family as his. I also loved that Milind asking Prachi if he could kiss her.. 😳

Epilogue..
Wow loved the father daughter relationship..when i read all the other parts i felt that it would have been nice if you ahd written more abt Milind rashmi bonding..but here you have made it up in epilogue..the scene in the ice cream parlor with father and daughter was written so well, when Rashmi says that she would have loved him even if Neev were alive was so touching..guess the father daughter relationship is always spl...and also liked the little fights b/w the siblings..

I hadn't thought of an epilogue for this FF. but somehow Rashmi haunted me and I thought I had to do justice to her and Milind. So ended up writing it.. Glad it came out well.

Well i wrote my comments in a notepad as and when i read the parts..i might have spelling errors please overlook my typos..hopefully i havent missed to comment on any parts..as i wanted to complete reading the FF before i hit the bed and also comment on it..

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I appreciate the comments, I hardly saw any spelling mistakes.

Once again it was a beautiful Fanfic Shubs..I loved all the parts..if i had to choose i would choose the letters and Milind Rashmi bonding in the epilogue..it was amazing and touching.....and also thanks for sending the link for your fanfic..it was a pleasure to read..

thank you so much for reading it all at once and also leaving comments part by part. Much appreciated.