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Originally posted by: sailat@PA

The last update totally caught me off-guard!! i SOOWWw didn't expect that!!😃
I am happy that it was a surprise!!!
absolutely adored those letters.....
thanks.
initially i was quite surprised that Prachi had fallen in love with Milind in such a short while....the last update explained the reason!! poor gurl...oh well, der se hi mila toh!!😛😆
Yes, it would have looked out of the blue if Prachi fell for him in a couple of months considering her conditions. But the poor girl had loved him for ages.

Immensely liked this FF!! short and sweet! ohhh Rashmi!!*drool* these lil kiddies are so addictive😉
I feel bad that I didn't do justice to Rashmi making her have only a few guest appearances. I blame it on the lack of time. I
Thanx again, Shubhs, for taking the time out of your busy, busy schedule to pen this simple yet beautiful FF!! 🤗🤗
thanks for reading Saima...😊

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

😆

i think she meant start a new one!! *pretty please* just kidding!! mujjhe me batao wht was the inspiration...

Originally posted by: kaswetta

A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Thanks mfr.

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Wow...Shubs...great ending to a great story. SO well done...gotta hand it too you...
Thank you so much for reading it dear..
the letters to Millind...revealing Prachi's inital infatuation, and gradually increasing to love...as she uses her Love for Milind as her reason to live, and continue to succeed and prosper....really wekll though out.
thanks hun.. I am so happy it came across as I wished it to.
Loved, Milind's reaction...simply marched up to Prachi, cliamed his love, and didn't take no for an answer....gotta love Milind!!!
Yes, he did the RIGHT thing. He knew Prachi would have done all she can to stop him from loving her if he reacted mildly.
I loved your Prachi...independent and strong....thanks. Yes she was independent and strong. If Milind didnt come to her life, she still would have managed.. locking her pain and love in a corner of her heart. But she got her reward.
.no wonder Milind fell in love with her too! Thanks for a beautiful FF.....looking forward to another one...will we get it?...hmmmmmmmmm?
Not sure... if something strikes in my mind.. have no ideas in my head as of now. and no time too..😭

👏

Originally posted by: mehanandita

superb update👏👏👏
milind is soooo nice
prachi is loving him frm the beginning, i loved mallika a lot in this ff,
thks a lot milind had seen the file
michi c-nite scene is nice
pls continue soon

keep on rocking

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

Those letters were heartbreaking. 😭
Awww. I am glad emotions were conveyed.
They started of sweet and innocent enough but later there was so much pain. You could almost trace Prachi's growth from a carefree girl to a burdened woman.
Thank you. I wish I had more time and patience to do it better. But I am glad Prachi's life is well understood through those letters.
Wonderful! 👏 So, are you going to tell us the inspiration for it? I felt so bad for Prachi. She loved him for so long and so deeply but she was willing to let him go cos she didn't think she was good enough for him.
She did so because she loved him so much.
Loved how Milind took charge of the situation. He didn't ask her to marry him, he simply declared it.
He didn't want to give her any chance to convince him that she didn't deserve him- means he also didn't want her to suffer anymore.
And loved how he told Rashmi to call him Pappa, showed he believed they truly belonged to him.
Yes, he always loved Rashmi too.
Lovely. Are we going to get an epilogue?
May be.
thank you so much BC for taking time and your wonderful comments.

Originally posted by: Mi*chi*

Thanks for the brilliant story with a beautiful end. Short sweet and simply outstanding FF.👏

Originally posted by: layla44

the end????😲..no warnin bells....nuthin.... this is sudden death😭..

this is unfair...,unjust,...mean...,illegal...,unrighteous...,absurd,...ridiculous...,impossible,...

dishonorable ..questionable...preposterous..😭

OMG!!! I got dizzy reading all those words thrown at me..😆

hmm.. am ok now..😆 thank God you are ok,, or else I would have died in shock.

i must say i really enjoyed readin this FF n is sad it has ended so soon..😭
me happy to hear that.

lovd it..esp this last😭 part..

u have beautifully unfolded prachi's past ..in an attractive manner..

and how milind came to know her past is cool i think..
thank you..

milind prachi confrontation in the house is just great.....gud tat PL n rashmi left the house at that time otherwise dunno wat they wud hav seen.😆..small talk n quick action..simply lovd it ..
He wouldn't have reacted this way in front of PL and Rashmi. He would have waited for sometime alone with her.

n lovd it wen milind sed ''your daughter has agreed to marry me too'' so confident....so chweeet.

n the endin ofcourse was superb..
Thank you. He declared it. Didn't he.. after going through Prachi's five years of past, he had to...

for me to tell u the truth it wud hav been more polished if u had given a few small descriptions here n there in order to visualize n enjoy it fully wen readin....
I totally appreciate your complaint. I myself am aware and guilty that I ended it in a hurry. I had to as I had time constraints. I am sorry about it.

but not to forget ur updates were always with surprises wich got me hooked up badly..tats a really cool idea i think...theres always sumthin new n interestin happenin...no boring stuff to skip.
thank you.. I am so happy to hear that.

well tats my view..

overall a short n sweeeeet FF ...a story tat i wud prefer to watch as a movie..👏
Oh dear, that's a complement now. You are right this can be made into a nice story provided it is tightened up better and handled sensitively.

cooool..👍🏼
thanks.😊

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

shubs gr8 story just loved it do write some more

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

lovely ending..