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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#371

Shubs, you said that Prachi was happy that her brother-in-law is in Delhi. Since she already said he is a jerk, how can she be happy about him being in Delhi? Are her in-laws not in Delhi as well and she was living with them? Check the entry for Dec 8, 2006. I think it should either be she was happy that he was in Kokaltta or she was unhappy that he was in Delhi.

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Saima

@sailat@PA

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#372

The last update totally caught me off-guard!! i SOOWWw didn't expect that!!😃 absolutely adored those letters.....initially i was quite surprised that Prachi had fallen in love with Milind in such a short while....the last update explained the reason!! poor gurl...oh well, der se hi mila toh!!😛😆

Immensely liked this FF!! short and sweet! ohhh Rashmi!!*drool* these lil kiddies are so addictive😉 Thanx again, Shubhs, for taking the time out of your busy, busy schedule to pen this simple yet beautiful FF!! 🤗🤗

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Saima

@sailat@PA

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Hun its finished!!!

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i think she meant start a new one!! *pretty please* just kidding!! mujjhe me batao wht was the inspiration...

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: optimist
Shubs, you said that Prachi was happy that her brother-in-law is in Delhi. Since she already said he is a jerk, how can she be happy about him being in Delhi? Are her in-laws not in Delhi as well and she was living with them? Check the entry for Dec 8, 2006. I think it should either be she was happy that he was in Kokaltta or she was unhappy that he was in Delhi.

You were absolutely right. I corrected that too.

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#375

@Saima, I will PM you too!!! LOL
Yes my busy busy schedule is the reason for posting it without editing and Opti Akka pointing out mistakes. I hope there aren't more bloopers (typos to honge hiii).

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kaswetta

@kaswetta

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#376

A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Thanks mfr.

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#377

Wow...Shubs...great ending to a great story. SO well done...gotta hand it too you...the letters to Millind...revealing Prachi's inital infatuation, and gradually increasing to love...as she uses her Love for Milind as her reason to live, and continue to succeed and prosper....really wekll though out. Loved, Milind's reaction...simply marched up to Prachi, cliamed his love, and didn't take no for an answer....gotta love Milind!!! I loved your Prachi...independent and strong.....no wonder Milind fell in love with her too! Thanks for a beautiful FF.....looking forward to another one...will we get it?...hmmmmmmmmm?

👏

Edited by AKANargis - 16 years ago

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#378

Is that the end? but then I'm so very happy you know specially the letters she wrote to him were so touching. She shared each aspect of her life with him.... I'm so very happy for them Rashmi for having a father and Prachi for finally getting him. I must say your Milind is magnanimous. Hope an epilogue soon follows.

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mehanandita

@mehanandita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#379

superb update👏👏👏
milind is soooo nice
prachi is loving him frm the beginning, i loved mallika a lot in this ff,
thks a lot milind had seen the file
michi c-nite scene is nice
pls continue soon

keep on rocking

Edited by mehanandita - 16 years ago

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KaneBC

@KaneBC

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#380

Those letters were heartbreaking. 😭 They started of sweet and innocent enough but later there was so much pain. You could almost trace Prachi's growth from a carefree girl to a burdened woman. Wonderful! 👏 So, are you going to tell us the inspiration for it? I felt so bad for Prachi. She loved him for so long and so deeply but she was willing to let him go cos she didn't think she was good enough for him. Loved how Milind took charge of the situation. He didn't ask her to marry him, he simply declared it. And loved how he told Rashmi to call him Pappa, showed he believed they truly belonged to him. Lovely. Are we going to get an epilogue?

Edited by blackcurrant - 16 years ago

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