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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

ooohhh!! UPDATE!!*happy dance* 😃


I want you to let me know if you are still dancing after reading the update!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Forgot to say that I also loved the format of your update - in a personal diary style - at first I felt she was a bit of a stalker - as I read on the love that she had for Milind was something deeper - it was almost the sole reason of her living - her strength and her confidence all stemmed from her love for him.

By the way their first night was full on passion and longing for each other just as would be expected. Also Rashmi has got the father that Prachi always craved for her, for her daughter. 👏

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Oh Man, Niki, are you flattering me or what?

Oh dear am I flattering you too much - this is no good - I don't want you thinking I'm one of your crazy fans 😆
Harre Yaar your FF wasn't all that you know😆 But I am looking forward to your next one after I've read this one again😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
😡 U Ended this FF.
I am shocked and angry...so i am not commenting...😭
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

😡 U Ended this FF.

I am shocked and angry...so i am not commenting...😭


😭 DO you want me to cry?

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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely FF shubs. I think it was semi autobiographical, wasn't it? I mean the letters to Milind? Loved it. A couple of snags though. I think the letter written on Dec 8, 2006 should read Ranvir going to Kokatta is'nt it insted of Delhi? I thought her in laws were already in Delhi. The date in a couple of letters in Dec 2008 is given as Dec. 2009. Other than these two, the writing was smooth flowing.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes Opti Akka. I corrected the dates and Delhi/Kolkata.
Edited by michifanreal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Lovely FF shubs. I think it was semi autobiographical, wasn't it? I mean the letters to Milind? Loved it. A couple of snags though. I think the letter written on Dec 8, 2006 should read Ranvir going to Kokatta is'nt it insted of Delhi? I thought her in laws were already in Delhi. The date in a couple of letters in Dec 2008 is given as Dec. 2009. Other than these two, the writing was smooth flowing.



You caught me there..😆😆. My own letters to Milind were the inspiration to write the last chapter this way though the original plot is inspired by something else. I will PM you about it later.
Edited by michifanreal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Uff nice one do cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: asmimani

Uff nice one do cont soon


Hun its finished!!!

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