FF..Tumse Hi part 8 on pg.8 - Page 2

Livelygal.........That was FANTASTIC!!!!! Bahut mazaa aaya, padhke !

I loved the intro, reminded me of another FF thatw as written in this section where Raunak finds Kasturi and employs her for Robbie!!!
And I like your writing style too!!!

Do post the next part ASAP!!! 😃

Very nice stat dear 👏 .Ab jaldi se next part post karo 😃

Livelygal, sorry for the late reply, but i have to say you have me hooked, line and sinker, i'm dying to read where you take this fanfic, and such a cleaver way to introduce your fanfic, simply luved it.. wow, you are a gifted girl when it comes to writing...very impressed, cant wait for the next post, jaaldi likhoooo pleaseeeee.

👏

robina

aure yaar mujhe vi next part padke bahut mazaa ayega. jaldhi likhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 😉 😆 can't wait after reading the first part. which was brilliant 👏

love
harman 😛

okay here is the continuation..part 2


The same night saw Raunak telling Robbie about his find!!
Robbie-Is she sky-rocketing in her looks?
Raunak-Yah in a way…But she will not tolerate misbehavior so I beg you don't ask her contact number directly or try to drag her to the bedroom she will slap you tight!!!
Robbie- Chalo tum kehte ho to main nahi mangunga aur waise bhi mujhe Tanya se thapad nahi kahene hai!
Raunak-Us Tanya ki baat chodo!Aur suno is ladki ki apni working methods honge please uske saath cooperate karo…
Robbie- Kya sach me mujhe advisor ki zaroorat hai I mean I can take my decisions quite well!
Raunak-Nahi Robbie tumhare popularity ko aur badhane ke liye yeh necessary hai!
Robbie- Raunak you are my best best best friend!!!
Raunak- Woh kal theek che baje yahaan aa rahi hai !
Robbie- Theek hai Good night.
Raunak –Good night!

The next day Robbie and Raunak were waiting in Robbie's room for the arrival of this new storm in their lives ….Well neither was aware of the chaos this smart, practical and heavenly-looking angel was going to bring into their lives!!! And the tempest arrived at sharp 6'O' Clock…tempest she was of good looks and smartness together, her smile was bewitching and radiant, her eyes spitting sparks of intelligence…Robbie stoop up amazed at this ajuba!! (His mind was bubbling with the tune of pehli nazar mein …from race.. Well I know that books don't have background scores but I cant help adding this little thing coz it fits soooo perfectly…😳)
He rose and walked towards her…evaluating her😆….She too was doing the same…suddenly she looked up at him and asked with a playful smile breaking on her lips….she was truly a beauty!!!
Kasturi- Are you like checking me out? (Laughed😉) Hi! I am Kasturi.
Robbie-(To himself) She is 9.8 upon 10 (Aloud) Hi! Robbie.
Kasturi –Kuch kam ki baat karein?
Robbie- Sure.
Kasturi- Mr. Saberwal ..
Robbie- Call me Robbie I'd prefer that!
Kasturi- Ok then Robbie You have a great fan following your, popularity is huge but there is no end on the tracks of popularity that is to say that you are quite behind in the race of popularity…you are some sort of a beginner there.
Robbie- (A little upset)Aapka kya matlab?(he was not impressed…. he was used to girls fawning over him)
Kasturi- Mera matlab hai ki agar is duniya me dus log hai to unme se saat tumhare fans honge..magar baaki ke teen nahi..
Robbie- Mujhe to khush hona chahiye ki mere dus me se saat fans hai…
Kasturi- Yahi to main tumhe samjhana chahti hoon tumhe un saat ki nahi un teen ke bare me sochna chahiye jo tumhare fans nahi hai…Main tumhe fame aur popularity ke liye greedy hojao yeh nahi keh rahi hoon…main to tumhe yeh keh rahi hoon ki You can aspire for more….Aspiration is the biggest Inspiration!
Raunak- Robbie mujhe lagta hai iske baato mein dum hai!
Kasturi- Robbie mujhe tumhare girlfriends ki list do.
Robbie- Kyun naam add karma hai kya?!!?
Kasturi- Aap ko jankar khushi hogi ki main us type ki ladki nahi hoon aur mujhe aapki girlfriends ke waiting list main khade hone ka koi interest nahi hai…!!!
Robbie- Mere cupboard me hai…wahaan(a bit more frustrated why was this girl not falling for him all girls did fall at first sight!!!There was something very infuriating about her but it added to her charm!!)
Kasturi- Thanks ab mujhe yeh bolo kis kis ne tumhe dump kiya aur kis kis ko tumne dump kiya!
Raunak- Yeh sab kya zaroori hai?
Kasturi- Ha agar Robbie ko aur aage badhna hai to use in ladkiyo se mafi mangni padegi kyunki usne inke dil ko thoda hai…cos even 1 person makes a difference..
Robbie –What rubbish!!!Robbie the rockstar to beg forgiveness from these cheapsters never…suna tumne !Tumhari strategy poori bakvas hai!
Kasturi- Jab tum unhe date kar rahe the to woh cheapsters nahi the magar ab who ban gaye…amazing!!! Aur agar tum mere strategy ke bare me kuch na kaho to behtar hoga !!!
Robbie- Yeh ladki is post ke liye theek nahi hai ise abhi…nikalo!!!
Kasturi- Tum kya nikaloge main quit karti hoon yeh to sirf ek trial tha!!!I am sorry Raunak it isn't working!
She carries herself out of the room with impressive swiftness …Raunak stares at her retreating back..They had just lost a precious gem..Such a type was one in a million!!!!
As she was walking out she thought ..He is devastatingly handsome…oh no please don't take leave of your senses just because he has stunning looks …he is a ocean of arrogance that was what made him sooo irresistible for girls…and for her…had the girl of iron will had lost it??Kasturi just stop it ok being a ruler of looks didn't qualify him to be the ruler of your heart..!!!Thank god she had lost the post!

will their ways never cross again????Destiny was authouring a different tale....

Hii Pallavi! That was AWESOME! I lovedd itt!! :D

P.S You double pasted on the second part 😛

Your friend,

--- Mimi

P.P.S Congrats on becoming an official FF writer here on the Kasturi forum! We have a lot of great and awesome SUPERB writers here, and you've become one! 😃

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Hii Pallavi! That was AWESOME! I lovedd itt!! :D

P.S You double pasted on the second part 😛

Your friend,

--- Mimi

P.P.S Congrats on becoming an official FF writer here on the Kasturi forum! We have a lot of great and awesome SUPERB writers here, and you've become one! 😃

hey thanx !!! Double thanx for letting me know about that double pasting!!!

Hey!!...cool ff...keep going...eager to read more.. 😳

Greate 2nd part!!!
I loved her strategy..but unfortunately Robbie did not!! 😆 😆

Also, in the last part I think you have a typo.....you have Raunak's name againt a dialog that probably Robbie said. 😊 This is that dialog

Kasturi- Jab tum unhe date kar rahe the to woh cheapsters nahi the magar ab who ban gaye…amazing!!! Aur agar tum mere strategy ke bare me kuch na kaho to behtar hoga !!!
Raunak- Yeh ladki is post ke liye theek nahi hai is abhi…nikalo!!!
Kasturi- Tum kya nikaloge main quit karti hoon yeh to sirf ek trial tha!!!I am sorry Raunak it isn't working!

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Greate 2nd part!!!
I loved her strategy..but unfortunately Robbie did not!! 😆 😆

Also, in the last part I think you have a typo.....you have Raunak's name againt a dialog that probably Robbie said. 😊 This is that dialog

Kasturi- Jab tum unhe date kar rahe the to woh cheapsters nahi the magar ab who ban gaye…amazing!!! Aur agar tum mere strategy ke bare me kuch na kaho to behtar hoga !!!
Raunak- Yeh ladki is post ke liye theek nahi hai is abhi…nikalo!!!
Kasturi- Tum kya nikaloge main quit karti hoon yeh to sirf ek trial tha!!!I am sorry Raunak it isn't working!

hey thanx !!!!!continue reading this FF and correcting..thanx a ton!