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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3 ...continuation ...

Kasturi was positioned on the sofa in a relaxed way…she sat surfing the channels …her attention caught a channel where Robbie's show was being aired. Normally she wouldn't have cared to even pause cause she wasn't really interested in rockstars cause they according to her lead a totally fake life!!She pulled out the list of his GF's that she had tucked away in her handbag by mistake..and glanced at it.
How many had he duped and shattered their hopes…how many had basked in his fake love for a short season falsely believing that it was for eternity…how many had lost into nothingness when he scorched them with his glorious look….Why the hell was she bothered???Girl,you are losing it…for Robbie Saberwal???He is a rockstar and can not involve in serious commitment and he didn't fit into her Mr. Right's image ….She would wait for her prince charming……

Robie sat with Tanya, His latest crush..she was vivaciously pretty…she was lovingly stroking his hair while he was busy diving into the fathomless depths of thoughts….thoughts of that girl Kasturi..She infuriated him no doubt..But she had an undeniable magic and was of all things unaware of it!!!How the hell could she tell him to ask those girls for forgiveness..If She had expected him to obey like an innocent child she had been wrong…seriously wrong!!He would never stoop that low…Tanya's crystal voice crashed his plane of thoughts..
Tanya- Robbie tumhari new advisor kaisi hai?
Robbie- Ab tak koi nahi fit kiya hai us post ke liye..
Tanya- Magar Raunak ne to mujhe bataya tha ki koi outstanding ladki-kasturi ne us post ko bag kiya.
Robbie- Woh aur outstanding!!!!You must be joking..
Tanya- Maine suna ki woh tumhe kuch khas pasand nahi karti!!!Pehli ladki hogi..
Robbie- I don't care!!!
Tanya- Itna ghussa!!!! Chalo main tumhe challenge karti hoon agar tumne is ladki ko apna advisor banaya aur usko is post mein 3 mahine tak rakha to tum sach me ek great star ho warna….
Robbie-Warna kya…???
Tanya- Then I will consider you a big loser!!
Robbie- Mujhe tumhara challenge manzoor hai!
Tanya- Your time starts now.

Kya yeh takkar pyar ka shuruvat hai???Jan ne ke liye padhiye Part 4 Tumse hi..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiya Livelygal(pallavi) may i call you that? its a very pretty name, i wanted to tell you i stayed up past midnight here reading your fan fic, it is awesomme. and the way you have penned your characters is very electrifying and i agree with Mimi, you are truly a gift to the kasturi forum.. thanks for your wonderful precaps as well. luv it cant wait for the next part...👏👏👏

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robina

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nrasheed

hiya Livelygal(pallavi) may i call you that? its a very pretty name, i wanted to tell you i stayed up past midnight here reading your fan fic, it is awesomme. and the way you have penned your characters is very electrifying and i agree with Mimi, you are truly a gift to the kasturi forum.. thanks for your wonderful precaps as well. luv it cant wait for the next part...👏👏👏

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robina

Thanks a lot!!!!😳😳😳Just continue reading ok!!!And yah u can call me pallavi😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Payal...OMG I was stumped ..you have an amazing way of writing 👏 ...just loved it! I am very gaer to know how kastu will tame the arrogant Robbie and how she will ultimately fall head over heels for him! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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chalo logo Part 4 hasir hai...


F2 point(short for friendship forever point)- A girl …around 21 checking her watch and striding up and down under the immemorial fountain…She is muttering "Us Kasturi ki bachi ki to main nahi chodungi.."Kasturi as if pulled by her desperation came walking…the girl blasted her..
Girl- Aaj tak tumne kabhi yeh rule nahi toda magar aaj kya hua??
Kasturi- Kaun sa rule?
Girl- Hamesha se tum time par aati ho main late..this is some sort of a golden rule …aur tum aaj late ayi
Kasturi-(Sighing with relief) shivani , meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi..tum bhi na!
Shivani-Yaar tu mujhe yeh bata ki tu shimla tour ke liye raazi kaise ho gayi…I mean tum to kabhi us tarah ki bato me interested nahi thi!!!Koi khas wajaah aisi badlaav ke liye?
Kasturi-Wahaan pe mera ek khas dost rehta hai .Main ussi se milne jaa rahi hoon..
Shivani-Chalo madamji aarahi hai to sahi..packing ho gayi hai?
Kasturi- ha sab tayaar hai….
Shivani-Then what are we waiting for? chalo…shimla here we come!!!!

SHIMLA- Kasturi and her friends reach shimla…a little paradise on this earth!!! A man…handsome beyond words dressed in casuals suiting his build…waved his hand wildly at kasturi…
Shivani nudged Kasturi and whispered.."Tumne to bola tha dost..magar yeh kyun nahi bola ki who ek ladka hai aur woh bhi extremely dashing! "
Shivani- Yahi to main soch rahi thi aisi kaunsi khas dost hai jisse milne ke liye tu bhagi jaa rahi hai..zaroor yeh dost se badhkar hai…
Kasturi- Chup kar yaar tu romance novels kuch zyaada hi padhti hai…woh mera bahut accha dost hai
Shivani-Yaar yeh to sabhi couples kehte hai…
Kasturi- tu kabhi sudhregi nahi!
She walks towards the guy who is flashing his most bewitching smile. He hugs her to Shivani's amused astonishment and says "So good to see you! I really missed you.."

Kaun hai yeh admi jo Kasturi ke liye itne khas hai…kya yeh dosti hai ?ya dono chup ke se pyar karte hai ek doosre se?Kaha hai Robbie???Akhir who to is kahani ka hero hai …ya phir who nahi hai!!??!!??!

kaisi lagi??
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oyye Pyal why are you also bringign suspense here yaar. 😆 Anyway reveal who is this ladka fast...and dont even think of pairing up kastu with anybody else! 😆 ...just kidding! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Oyye Pyal why are you also bringign suspense here yaar. 😆 Anyway reveal who is this ladka fast...and dont even think of pairing up kastu with anybody else! 😆 ...just kidding! 😉

Dont worry yaar ...suspense kills bur robbie's broke heart kills me ...aur main itni aasani se marne waali nahi hoon😉just read on!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeh rahi chatpatti part5 -
ha woh admi tha...girish!!!
Kasturi- Girish inse milo yeh sab mere dost hai..aur yeh meri sabse acchi dost hai –shivani
Girish-Hi!(To kasturi) Kasturi tum sab mere out house main hi rahoge.Maine saara intezaam kar liya hai ab mana mat karna!
Kasturi- Theek hai magar ek shart par ..
Girish- Kaisa shart?
Kasturi –yahi ki tum hame kal tumhare naye building ke construction site par le jaoge..
Girish –Theek hai!
Kasturi- Shivani tum jante ho ki girish ek bahut kamyab architect hai!!!Usne bahut ache ache buildings banaye hai.
Shivani-Ab lagta hai main bhi tumse kuch tips lekar architect ban jaungi… 😉 😆 😆
Girish- the pleasure will be all mine!!!
They go to Girish's outhouse and stay.

Robbie is knocking on the door of Kasturi's house…He is muttering.."Yaar itni hardwork maine apne final exams keliye bhi nahi ki hai..jitna is ladki ke address nikalne me ki." 😆 No one responds to his persistant call suddenly he hears a soft laughter …he turns and finds a boy laughing..
Boy-kasturi didi to gayi hai shimla
Robbie-Kab lautegi pata hai?
Boy- nahi….
Robbie-(to himself)Ab mujhe shimla jaana padega..yeh Tanya bhi na..magar main usse dikhadungi ki I am not a loser!!!(that's spirit boy)

The gorgeous vales and dreamy valleys,the sparkling water falls and the lush greenery…the lofty mountains and the satiny snow…all suited Kasturi she was in love with the place !Girish had taken them all to the construction site of his dream project-a house of his own!Her friendship with girish had been forged by destiny, strengthened by trust, lengthened by understanding and then linked them both by a love …the pure ,unsullied love of friendship…the unsinkable ship in the depths of their trust!!!Girish was engaged to a girl named Anita and she had come to shimla upon girish's insistence that only if she gave her approval he would marry anita…She was waiting ..her heart beating faster with each ticking second to see this anita who had changed girish from a fun-loving and careless guy to a serious and responsible person!!!Anita would be coming tomorrow.She slowly took a turn from her walks in the freshness-filled gardens to the caf nearby.
Robbie sat sipping coffee in a caf at shimla…He was thinking "How the hell will I find kasturi over here?" He was frustrated..this silly challenge was costing him so much trouble ! He looked up and saw to his immense relief and surprise that Kasturi had just walked in.He got up and went towards kasturi who turned abruptly turned..lost balance and tumbled right into robbie's arms 😳 ….. melting against him and his sunny warmth…she looked into his eyes…and found the starry world with all its wondrous hues swirling in there…unfathomable depths..and a tender fondness ….a beautiful enigma …suddenly she snapped back to reality…..she was staring into his eyes a bit too long…she stammered a sorry and straightened herself.He heard himself saying its okay…this girl was dangerous…. dangerously charming!!!Why was she tugging at the strings of his heart or was he just getting too soft…!!!
Kasturi-Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?
Robbie-Main yahaan tumhe who job phir se offer karne aaya hoon!
Kasturi-Dekho I am really sorry I am frankly not interested in it!
Robbie got a little melodramatic and fell to his knees..
Robbie- Please mujhe maaaf kardo tum jo bhi kahogi main woh karne ke liye tayaar hoon. I'll tell all those girls sorry !!Please don't refuse this job..please please please
Kasturi-(embarrassed that many ppl were watching )Theek hai I'll consider your offer give me 24hrs
Why was this man acting like this???As it is she could feel all the sturdy walls she had built around the fortress of her emotions shattering on the account of HIS heat blazing gaze!!!! Living in his shadow , breathing the nearly same scent he was breathing, under the scrutiny of his sweep-u-off-ur-feet gaze….could she bear the torture?…would she be able to bear it if by some unfortunate mistake she gave him her heart and he broke it……It would leave her emotionally scarred forever!!!Could she live with a broken heart? He wasn't a guy who would be serious about the rhythmic relationship of love…It was a challenge her undaunted spirit put forward before her-Accept the job, live near him and remain unaffected by him! She loved challenges and here was one..one in which her heart was at stake….she hesitatingly took it…..a dangerous gamble!!! She picked up her cell and dialed Robbie's number and with unsurity dripping from her voice she said.."I accept!"

Kya dono apne apne challenges jeet payenge? Kya kasturi anita se sehmat hogi? Kya kasturi apna dil robbie se dur rakh payegi? yeh jaan ne ke lie padhna mat bhool liye tumse hi..part 6
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome concept... jus caught up wid it.... i luved da beginning especially, dat this is all a book... awesome idea... cnt wait to read more now that she has agreed to the job!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ahaaa Pallavi, First of all thank u for frequent updates😆..... Iam soooooo excited to read ur story yaar....

Now tat Kas has agreed to work for Robbie and also not to get affected by his charm, Lets see who wins and how these 2 will fall in luv..

continue soooooooooooon

Krishi

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