FF..Tumse Hi part 8 on pg.8

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I am back again with a new tale .....A warning for all those who have opened this topic to view it ....plz do read the tale down and read it FULLY...I promise you wont find it a wastage of time😳.Dont think and hesitate I assure you loads of delight and rapture!

A great hall illumined by dazzling chandeliers …people from all walks of life streaming in ….amazed by the priceless curiosities safely guarded here! Yes this is the world famous 'STARRY SECRETS' museum…the foremost wonder of the world year 2015!

The scene focuses on a couple no doubt the most good looking ppl present in the gathering…too dashing that even the sharpest and most brilliant security officers were not able to recognize this couple-the most wanted couple……Aryan and Sunheri(hritik and ash)😳😳.

It's dhoom again😉…….they have come to rock the world again!

But which was that fortunate object which would be soon added to their list of invaluable artifacts??? So many choices😕!!!!!

The least crowd was around a particular object …this couple carefully guided their steps towards this site. Only one lonely man stood near this wonder…

Mr. Aditya was this man's name .As soon as our couple drew near him he turned and with some unusual excitement blazing forth from his beung he said…."Isn't this book really precious…it is a true wonder"

Aryan-What is so wondrous about this compilation of mere pages with a few words scribbled on it?

Aditya-This is no ordinary book every page of this book contains a warm heartbeat…Don't you know this is the greatest love story that was ever written or read?!?!

Aryan-Well we get so many love stories now a days .They are no big deal! What is so special about this book?

Aditya-It was long ago in the year 2008.A great tournament was announced… a tournament of emotions and sentiments! All over the world young effervescent teens began scratching their pens on blank pages to unfold a story that would go down in history… all their young minds and imaginations were set aflame with innovative ideas, wild themes, crazy climaxes….

The dead line was drawn and all the participants eagerly awaited to see the results..! Two entries really touched all the judges hearts…now the difficulty arose which one would be the ONE!?!? They then decided that the story that brought crystalline tears into the eyes of the most wanted criminal in the world –He who must not be named (HWMNBN for short) would be announced as the greatest love story…The two entries were taken to him in his dark, cold prison cell ….He read through the first one and gave a small sarcastic smile and remarked "Do such things really happen in life?" He then completed reading the second entry and by the end of it he was sobbing his heart out…."Only if someone would have given me an insignificant fraction of the love portrayed here I would have never been in such a state."

Undoubtedly the second entry won the tournament and here it is enclosed in this glass walled cage unable to tell its story to the wide world which is sinking in the depths of hatred and dislike. I really wish I could read the story to this world and awaken it into a new dawn of love and unity! Treasures like this should be shared not buried like this deep inside unfathomable mists….What power the words of this book must wield that they could transform that impenetrable hard heart of HWMNBN….

Sunheri(aside to Aryan)-Truly this little book is worth the world I think this is what we should …you know what..

Aryan-Yes, you are right! Thank you Mr…

Aditya-Aditya

Aryan-Thank you Mr. Aditya for telling us this electrifying tale!

Aditya-It's my pleasure!

Next morning the newspapers yelled it, the news channels shrieked it …The treasured book of STARRY SECRETS museum was stolen!!!!

Aryan sat fondly flipping the pages of the book…Sunheri eyed him and said "Come on I am dying to know the story. Please read it aloud."

"Patience deary, okay here it begins…

Once there lived a dashing successful rockstar who had everything in life ….luxuries, money, fame, girls name anything and he had it….everything except TRUE LOVE…… His name was Robbie…Robbie sabrewal(lagi na zor ka jhatka!😆)

Well…his best, best beyond words friend Raunak was busy selecting his new advisor .The advisor had to fit into a few apparels(I mean had to suit a few conditions) designed by Robbie himself.

    Had to be a female!!!! 😉 Should be good looking. 😳 Should never question his authority😕!!!
  1. be ready to do anything for him.😊

Well Raunak had his points to be fulfilled too-

1. should not be a knock over 😆!!!

2. should be practical and sensible.

3. should have her wits about her not just keep panting like a dog behind Robbie🤣

4. should be concerned about his welfare in the right way😳.

5. she should share purely professional ties with Robbie nothing personal….maybe a cherishable friendship would do but nothing more than that!!!🤢

Giggling girls……90 percent of them were fans ..absolutely crazy ones!lined up outside to bag the million-dollar post….all dreamy-eyed.😆

Soon all of them were turned down! Frustration mounted in Raunak as he rejected each hoping heart that came to feast in robbie's shadow. He said aloud "Ah! All this fan following is burning my patience." He steered his car to a nearby caf and sat down in the only chair left empty by the side of a girl. She was dressed in a white-red chudidar she looked heavenly😳. She looked up and Raunak noticed that her face was quite familiar. Then it struck….

Raunak-Tum who sports world channel ki anchor ho!

Girl- Ha theek pehchana magar main thi ab nahi hoon!

Raunak- Kyun?

Girl- Who mera boss, sports world ke owner zaroorat se zyada akal ke dheela tha😆…mujhe aise log pasand nahi! Mujhe mera job satisfaction nahi mila to maine resign kiya! Waise main yeh aap se kyun bata rahi hoon?

Raunak- Kyunki maine aap se poocha!😃

Girl- Waise mera naam Kasturi hai.😉

Raunak- Hi! Raunak Singhania.

Kasturi- Tum the Raunak Singhania ho! Us rockstar naam kya hai uska 😕….ha Robbie ka dost!

Raunak- Ha main wohi hoon ….tum Robbie se kuch khas impressed nahi ho!😭

Kasturi- Nahi waisa kuch nahi who theek thak gaata hai magar according to me he is not upto the mark.(gr8 going girl!)

Raunak thinks to himself "Yeh ladki dekhne me acchi hai, sensible hai, Robbie ke har baat ankhein bandh kar nahi manegi ,practical hai, aur iski baato se lagta hai ki yeh kaam aur personal life mix nahi karegi…..in short she is perfect for the post.👏"

Raunak- Mere paas ek offer hai…😉

Kasturi- No thanx main us type ki ladki nahi hoon ….😆😆

Raunak- Nahi nahi main to tumhe job offer kar raha tha.😆

Kasturi(flustered)- job… I am sorry! Main to kuch aur hi samajh rahi thi.😆

Raunak- Are you interested in becoming Robbie's advisor?

Kasturi- Main trial loongi agar mujhe job satisfaction mila to main yeh job karoongi.

Raunak- Tumhari liye job satisfaction ka matlab kya hai?

Kasturi- Job satisfaction mere liye hai- jahaan main apni kam poore passion se kar sakti hoon, koi bhi cheez mere spirit for betterment ko tamper nahi karegi👏.

Raunak- Theek hai tum do din ke liye trial le sakte ho. Main ab hi tumhe warn kar deta hoon ki Robbie bahut arrogant hai aur kafi irrestible for girls.

Kasturi- Irresistable hone se mujhe koi farak nahi padta😉 😆magar arrogant , mean ,rude hona ek problem ban sakti hai…main apni poori koshish karoongi uska arrogance ko mar dalne ke liye…If I can tolerate his arrogance and have hopes of tackling it then only I'll accept the job orelse I am quitting.

Raunak- Theek hai you can have a trial for two days.

Kasturi- done.

Raunak- Kal subah theek che baje.

Kasturi- Kal milte hai.

They part .Kasturi goes and plans out what to do tomorrow .She first goes and gets all the information on Robbie she needs …In two hours she has all his biodata and turn-ons.And surprisingly few of their interests match.

Both loved horse riding. They both enjoyed listening to music . Both loved the same kind of food. They shared common hobbies. Kasturi put her hands together and said "Robbie sabrewal tumse milke mazaa ayega!"😉

to be contd. kaisi lagi?

Do leave your comments and suggestions....

Story abhi baki hai yaaro😉😉😆

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TheLastCarnival thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no one likes it? 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yup i am here 😆 😆 ..don't cry i will read and edit buddy 😊 😛

EDITED : hehehehe😆😆😆..muje lagi hai jor ka jhatkaa😆..

hey i want to really praise u..this is awesome..👏👏..the way u started the story with Sunheri and Aryan was really really innovative😃 and ur writing skills r fabulous👏👏..frankly saying here..when i started reading this story i thought : what nonsence is this? is this the story of sunheri and bla bla bla..? how come this is related to this section to post..." but u gave me Jor ka jatkaa..lagi hai dheere se..😆😆

awesome yaar..continue soon..i will be waiting..Livelygirl..this is really lively like ur Id😳

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TheLastCarnival thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sirf ek comment!!!!kahan gaye sab log?
chalo yaar kuch to appreciation do jisse main inspire hokar continue karoon! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwww ur 22222222222222 goooooooooooooddddddd...keep it up...i will read dont worry.....neways da best bit was wen Robbie sabarwal bit came 😉 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Woooowwww, Its gud... Although I was a bit apprehensive at first reading Hrithik and ash, I have put all fears to rest wen I read Robbie's name😆😆

The first part till now is very gud.... Soo, Is this a FF??? and u r writing biography of Robbie?😆

Continue soooooooooooooon, wud luv to read wat u have in mind😃

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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biography of robbie....Impossible!yaar words will fail miserably if I try to comprehend his nature and attitude...

He is Beyond everything for me...!!
This is just a small fanfic.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome dear 😳...keep it up ..jab tak robbie hai hum read karte rahenge 😳

Am waiting ur Next part

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx a lot read it again it has been continued!!!
Continuation pasand ayi kissi ko?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahib29

Awesome dear 😳...keep it up ..jab tak robbie hai hum read karte rahenge 😳

Am waiting ur Next part

Manpreet

yes !!! yes !!! compelet karte raheye !!!

love yaa !!!

aishooo😳!!!

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