FF..Tumse Hi part 8 on pg.8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: knumnum

Ahaaa Pallavi, First of all thank u for frequent updates😆..... Iam soooooo excited to read ur story yaar....

Now tat Kas has agreed to work for Robbie and also not to get affected by his charm, Lets see who wins and how these 2 will fall in luv..

continue soooooooooooon

Krishi

Hey krishi thanx a ton....Just continue reading...I guarantee you a lovely RoKa dilon ka milan!!!Just wait and watch oops sorry read😉😉😉

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome concept... jus caught up wid it.... i luved da beginning especially, dat this is all a book... awesome idea... cnt wait to read more now that she has agreed to the job!

Thanx deary...just continue reading....and adding suggestions and comments!!

hey kahan gaye sab log..mere 4th aur 5th part padha nahi??don't miss it yaar...A big storm is thundering!!!!

Livelygal, I just read all of your parts. Brilliant job!! 👏 👏 You're a really good writer, too!!! 👏 😳 So Robbie & Kasturi secretly like each other, huh 😉 😆? Can't wait for the next part. 😃

WOWIEE! Awesome AWESOME job! I love LOVE LOOVE yoiur concept, and absoloutly ADORE your story! I'm not very keen on FF's- as I dont usually have the time to read them, but you, Robina dii, and a lot of others here have inspired me so much! =D Thanks! And keep on writing :)

P.S Can I call you Pavs? I like nicknames 😊 lol.

--Mimi

ohhh pallavi you had me scared in part 4 and finally in five i was relieved to know it was girish her friend... and i luved how you described the place its beautiful, and you've done a poetic justice to it, and now the fun parts start.. robbie and kas working together... cant wait... keep it awesome job...👏 and i luv the ending jaane ke liya paareyah.... tumse HI... beautiful.......take a bow, your a fantastic writer..

robina

thanx yaar all of you

@mike00rules,mimi,robinsdii 🤗
and yah mimi you can call me pavs! 😆

yaar here is the part 6
The games life plays are mysterious and it undoubtedly is the unbeatable and unrivalled winner….Anita's arrival brought the air of festivity to a electrifying climax…and with kasturi's tag of approved there could be nothing more explosive than Girish's spirit!!!
A private engament had been scheduled the next day in the midst of nature's melodies and frolic..in a calmness-spilling valley of shimla…Anita was dressed in all her finery and looked quite pretty ..kasturi was dressed in a dainty blue dress and looked delicately delicious..a perfect picture of purity and sublime beauty!!! The journey to the valley was uneventful except for the lingering trail of fragrance left by blossoming flowers.The day passed off like a peaceful dream and kasturi awoke to the world of an appaling reality..she had to go for her first day of work with Robbie. According to his visiting card he stayed in some celesty villa. She found the villa and managed to find Robbie..asleep …neatly tucked away in the cosy folds of dreams .The golden rays of the sun washed him in angelic masculine charm. Kasturi turned and saw the mess the room was in ..and soon things were zapped back to their place.She went over to the kingly bed and placed her hand on his forhead and withdrew …she was shocked that a mere touch could do that to her…Robbie awoke and saw kasturi standing there. He forgot to feel sleepy…and suddenly his mobile sprang to life.
Tanya-Hi! Darling kaise ho?
Robbie-Theek hoon
Tanya-To tumhara kaam shuru ho gaya hai?
Robbie- Ha aur kafi accha chal raha hai( he said winking at kasturi)
Tanya-U miss me no ?
Robbie –Very very very much
Tanya-Okay I'll catch you later.
He looked at kasturi and said –Kasturi kyat um mere saath aaj Mumbai chalogi?
Time turned paged and soon they were in Mumbai and kasturi Robbie together worked wonders..her strategies were fabulous and robbie's popularity soon reached the zenith…
Kasturi had no time to analyze the metamorphosis her feelings for Robbie had undergone..she was busy..very busy working out new plans and strategies.She was a true professional no tint of personal feelings was mixed with her work..and Robbie's mouth was left sagging at her efficiency and dedication she was working miracles as if they were the most usual thing for her to do.
Tanya and Robbie's break-up was followed by crazy fans all over the globe…Robbie decided time was ripe to tell Kasturi that making her accept the job was all a challenge put forward by Tanya…and then a cold fear gripped his heart which had enjoyed basking in her presence..what if she slapped him tight and walked out of his life??? She had become an inextricable part in the tapestry of his life…added spice and meaning to his bland life…he arrived at kasturi's house just as the mail was delivered. He shuffled through the mail and stopped at one post on which 'private and confidential' was stamped in bold letters…His curiosity was bubbling into a fountain ….
Kasturi sat in a park …she had buried many secrets and had hoped they would remain buried forever ..had hoped they would disintegrate into nothingness….Her past was misty...Chilling and nightmarish truths lay unveiled …for her it was a cruel contest between her flourishing present and unclear past twisted into lanes of regret and pain..and yesterday her hellish past had splashed on her again…she again reheard that low, finely tuned voice in crisp English in her mind.."Kasturi I am back!"
She had nothing to be ashamed of for she was not at fault and the heavens above knew !
No dear reader this was not another maniac lover tucked away in the dark… nor was it an husband out to search his run away wife..the secret was deeper and yet trivial ..and yet darker!!!!

yaar actually main thak chuki hoon mujhe likhne se zyaada padhne ka shauk hai 😃 ..chalo yaar tum sab likho na..mujhe padhna hai likhna nahi!!!

Hey dear ...u are very good Writtter 👏👏....maine aaj 2to 6 parts read kiye hai .....bahut aache likhe hai 😳...

and jo tum precape deti ho ..just mindbowing 😆.....

continue please ..i love to read moreeeeeeeee😳

Manpreet

Hiya Pavs!

NO NO NO! Keep writing! Ur FF is too good. Please PLEASE continue- for my sake at least! Ur too good yaar! U shld consider writing as a profession if all else fails! 😉

Your friend,
-- Mimi