FF..Tumse Hi part 8 on pg.8 - Page 5

hey Pallavi, i luv your detailing in your fanfic, the imagery comes out in waves.. thank sooo much, kasturi is hiding something??? very very very interesting, so when are you updating your next part??? cant wait.. and agree with mannnuuuu totally awesome job keep it up...

your fan

robina diiiiiiii

Pallavi!!!!! Awesome!!!!!!
I caught up chapters 3 to 6.....my god you had suspense in almost all the chapters!!!!! 😆

And this last chapter suspense is toooooooo much!!! Who is it????

OK, what I really love in your parts are the thoughts of Kasturi. You reveal that beautifully.........the way she was thinking if she can stay away from him!! The ways she was wondering about Anita.........I loved the way you wrote that!

And 3 months just whizzed by like that??? I wish you had slowed down and atleast given us an idea of what happened in those 3 months! 😉 😆
Chalo, no problem...........maybe you have some great ideas ahead!!!!

Great work , in total!!!!! 👏

Great parts...the mystery looks deep and please unveil it fast. Where it is of ur reading concerns..there are Pragz and Robina's ff...so read that but dont stop this! 😆

hey mannu,pragz,mimi,robina dii and RK_fan111(oops darling dunno your name!)
thanx for all those nice things you have written..I'll go ahead wid the FF for your sake 😳 😳 😳
And hey pragz dont worry only a month is over 😉 😉 😉 they have just begun their journey together they have a long way to go...enough time is left for robbie to make kasturi his forever....just keep reading on!!!

chalo yeh hai part 7
Kasturi sat in a park …she had buried many secrets and had hoped they would remain buried forever ..had hoped they would disintegrate into nothingness….Her past was misty...Chilling and nightmarish truths lay unveiled …for her it was a cruel contest between her flourishing present and unclear past twisted into lanes of regret and pain..and yesterday her hellish past had splashed on her again…she again reheard that low, finely tuned voice in crisp English in her mind.."Kasturi I am back!"
She had nothing to be ashamed of for she was not at fault and the heavens above knew !
No dear reader this was not another maniac lover tucked away in the dark… nor was it an husband out to search his run away wife..the secret was deeper and yet trivial ..and yet darker!!!!

Robbie was just about to open the mail when a hand rested on his shoulder…dread flooded through him what would kasturi think of him now??? Raunak's face came into view..
Raunak-Kya yaar kaha kaha nahi dhoonda maine tumhe..aur tum yahaan par ho!!!
Robbie- Kya hua raunak tum pareshan lag rahe ho?
Raunak- Ha koi admi aaya tha aur kasturi ko dhoond raha tha.
Robbie- Kasturi ko?
Raunak-Ha …aur kasturi ke bare mein bahut questions pooch raha tha jaise ki..kab who yahaan ayi? Kahan rehti he? Kya kabhi who apne bheeti hui zindagi ka ka zikr karti hai ya nahi ? Tumhe kya lagta hai kaun ho sakta hai yeh admi..
Robbie-Akhir kyun?
Just then they heard soft footsteps and they turned to face kasturi…she looked so lost and so forlorn that Robbie felt like engulfing her in his arms and kissing away all her cares…she looked so fragile!!!
Robbie- Kasturi tumhara mail..
Kasturi- (A lil stunned by the presence of these two men)Thanx
She looked at the wad of letters that had come to her..most were bills suddenly her eyes caught the private and confidential one…her head began to spin and the ground underneath gave loose …she fainted in Robbie's arms…
Raunak and Robbie both were dead worried and carried her inside. After some time her long eyelashes fluttered and she opened her eyes…she looked around for the letters and found them by her bedside .She didn't want to open the letter in front of these two man..but her curiosity was searing through her skin before she could open it a soothing voice licked her ears giving instant relief
Robbie- Kasturi are you sure you are okay?
Kasturi-Thanx a lot Robbie I am fine…infact very fine
Raunak-Is someone troubling you?
Kasturi-Why are you asking such questions?
Raunak- no no some man had come enquiring about you.
Kasturi-(tensed)What did he look like?
Raunak- He looked about 29 years ,and had rugged handsome looks…
Kasturi- Kya uske haath pe ek tattoo laga hua tha..kuch ajeeb sa?
Raunak-Ha ha wohi admi..Kya tum use jante ho?
Kasturi- haan main use jaanti hoon…
Robbie-tum hame kuch batana chahti ho?
Kasturi- Haan magar kaise bolu…
Raunak-Kasturi- Tum hamari liye sirf ek advisor hi nahi ek achi dost bhi ho…
Robbie thinks to himself usse bahut zyaada….kash tumhe abhi abhi keh deta kit um mere liye kya ho….

Hey I'll edit this post and add some more to this part!
Till then enjoy!

hey just caught up wid ur ff 😆 its so cool 👏 👏 nd ur writing skills r amzing 👏 👏 so now robbie is in love wid her 😉 i hope he tells her da truth ASAP 😆 OMG im eager 2 read da nxt part 😆

Hey very beautiful part dear 😳..and kaun hai wo tattoo man😆...jaldi se likho ..aage ...dekhe ki kya hota hai ??😆

Manpreet

Awesome part...i wonder wat he scret is and who that guy is??? Cnt wait to read more, this is ana bolutely fanastic ff!!!! N robbie is in luv wid her, sooooooo cute!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳

OMG Pallavi, kahan chaaligai hoi???? Please continue the story, i'm dying to find out who the guy issss??? excellent part, the imagary again comes out wonderfully, i luved how you described kasturi on the bench very moving piece of work..excellent in fact.. and robbie has feeling and has dumped his gf..great now please come back and update.. your fan....

robina diiiiiiiii

Oh man Pallavi...this is brutal!!! How can you leave us hanging like that???? 😕 This is worse than Balaji!!!! Jaldi likho......and the part was so mysterious!!!! Vey well written!!! 👏 👏

And Robbie is in love!!!! Great.......