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Posted: 17 years ago
Hello friends........sorry, part was slightly delayed! OK, this is the next part.........I wanted to write a bigger part, but could not and so rather than make you all wait any longer, I decided to go ahead and post with whatever I have written so far. Hope you will like it!! πŸ˜ƒ I did not end with a cliff hanger.


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Re-cap : AA and RK keep getting closer and closer. Kasturi goes to perform in Singapore and while returning back after a successful trip, she and Anand meet with a road accident and it turns out that Anand had hit Robbie's uncle and aunt!! Kasturi comes to know that when Robbie tells her angrily that Devika is his mother!

PART - 30 : ANGER MANAGEMENT

"Robbie betaa".....says Devika in a broken voice! 😭 😭 😭 Robbie turns to her and in an instant, his anger dissolves into concern, apprehension and shock at seeing the bruises and blood on her person!!! 😲 πŸ˜” He quickly moves towards her and says......."Yeh kya hua aapko? Kaise hua?? Aap neh mujhe call kyun nahi kiyaa???" πŸ˜•
Devika tries to control her tears and whispers....."Mujhe tumhaara number yaad nahi aa rahaa tha, Robbie!! 😭 😭 Aur phir tumhaare chachaji ki haalat......unki haalat....unki haalat...". She cannot continue and leans to Robbie for support! 😭 Robbie holds his aunt strongly against him and tries to pacify her! He just cannot see her in so much pain!!
He asks : Kahaan hai chachaji, kaise hai woh???
Kasturi listens on to this conversation confused and still reeling from the shock that Anand's car had hit Robbie's parents!!! 😲
Devika replies with tears flowing down her eyes : Doctors unhe dekh rahe hai......woh keh rahe the ki unki haalat bahut naazuk hai!! 😭 😭 Agar........agar unhe kuch ho gayaa toh......toh..... 😭
Robbie stops her : Shhhhhh chachi! Unhe kuch nahi hogaa...........kuch nahi hogaa unhe!!!
He suddenly separates her and looking at her and says : Aur aapki haalat dekhiye kaisi hai!!! 😲 Aap koh bhi treatment ki zaroorat hai......dekhiye aapke haathon seh kitnaa khoon beh rahaa hai!!! 😲
Devika protests : Nahi, nahi.....mujhe kuch nahi hua hai! Bas tumhaare chachaji....
Robbie : Chachi!!! Aap unki chinta chodiye!! Abhi Doctors unki jaanch kar rahe hai na?? Tab tak aap ek baar Doctor seh mil leejiye!!
Devika protests and refuses but Robbie does not listen to her and forcefully takes her to be examined by a Doctor and get her wounds dressed. While she is being checked by the Doctor, he comes back to the waiting area. He sees Kasturi helping Anand take his medication. He walks to Anand with determination!! 😑 😑 Anand cowers in fear at the look on Robbie's face!! 😑 Robbie stops right in front of him and warns him menacingly........."Agar mere chachaji koh kuch huwaa toh mei tumhe nahi chodungaa! That's a promise!!"..........Kasturi tries to interrupt and calm him down!
She starts to says : Robbie, please....
Robbie turns to look at her angrily and says : Shut up Kasturi! 😑 😑 Tum iski tarafdaari kar rahi ho?? Iski??? Aur tum.......tum meri maa seh itni battameezi seh kaise baat kar rahi thi?? 😑
Kasturi is very upset πŸ˜• and she says tartly : Pehli baat toh yeh, ke I had no clue she was your mother..........
Robbie interrupts her, dissatisfied with her answer : Lekin badon seh baatein karne kaa yeh tareeka hotaa hai???
Kasturi is also irritated and says : Woh bahut unreasonable act kar rahi thi Robbie! 😑 She was stopping Anand from taking his medication.......
Robbie interrupts her again, angrily : 😑 Woh aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti......
Kasturi challenges him : Accha??? Toh, mei jhoot bol rahi hun? 😑
A nurse walking by, chides them : Please......thoda dheere boliye, yeh aspataal hai......aapka ghar nahi!
A fuming Robbie gives her a killer look and walks away from her to the window and stares outside with his hands on his hips! 😑 😑 An upset Kasturi folds her hands across her chest and stares at him surprised!😲 She had never seen him this upset and angry!! And what was with him calling his mother, chachi?? πŸ€” She is completely confused! πŸ˜• But her heart goes out for Robbie at his pain!! She walks over to him and stands behind him. She slowly extends her left hand and wraps it around his right elbow and says softly........"Robbie...."
She is interrupted by the procedure specialist who had walked upto Robbie and asks him..........."Aap ghaayal aadmi ke rishtedaar hai?"
Robbie turns and ignoring Kasturi says : Haan.
Hospital employee : Aapko inn kaagazon peh sign karnaa hogaa. Yeh FIR ke fax copies hai. Jab aap sign kar denge toh yeh official ho jaayega aur police inn saab ko (pointing at Anand) hiraasat mei le lenge.
Anand struggles to stay calm 😲 and Kasturi feels terrible for him! πŸ˜” She says to Robbie
Kasturi : Robbie, please.......ek baar socho.....
Kasturi 😑...........Robbie starts to warn her when this time, he is interrupted by the Doctor.
Doctor, looking for Devika : Iss patient ki wife kahaan hai?
Robbie quickly moves forward and says : Doctor, mei unkaa betaa hun. Mujh seh kahiye.......kya baat hai? Kaise hai woh? πŸ˜•
Doctor : He is out of danger. Acchi baat yeh hai ke unhe internal injury kuch nahi hui hai! But he had lost a lot of blood, jo abhi hum unhe chadha rahe hai. Lekin, important aur concern ki baat yeh hai ki unkaa spinal cord fracture hua hai, at the base......
Robbie stares at the Doctor shocked and deeply concerned! 😲 πŸ˜’ Seeing his anxiety, the Doctor says
Doctor : Ghabraaiye nahi, sirf hairline fracture hua hai! But because it is his spinal cord, we have to be extremely careful! There are 95% chances of this healing on its own in 6-8 weeks. Agar 8 weeks ke baad bhi woh fracture heal nahi hotaa hai, then we will operate him to insert metal plates.
Robbie relaxes visibly and so does Kasturi!!
Robbie asks : Toh kya hum abhi unseh mil sakte hai?
Doctor says : In 10 minutes he will be transferred out of the ICU. Tab unseh mil lee jiyegaa. Aur uske baad I want to meet with you and your mother too.
Robbie thanks him profusely and he goes on his way.

While this is going on outside, Devika was being examined for any internal injuries. Her BP is checked and her wounds are cleaned and dressed. The process helps Devika to calm down a little but the biggest calming effect on her was Robbie's presence!! The moment she had set eyes on him, her fear and anxiety had reduced by 80%!!! Suddenly, she was more sure of the situation, the severe tension she was undergoing was controlled as soon as his strong voice had assured her that everything will be fine!! And she believed him!!! She believed that Puru will recover and that this horrible experience will be put behind them!

And yes it was a horrible experience, an experience that had also left her shocked at her own behavior!! 😲 😲 She was shocked at her own aggressiveness! 😲 It was like something had snapped inside her!!! She realized that its was not this single instance that had caused so much reaction in her!!! Over the past few years, Devika had been struggling with an ever increasing frustration at the state of affairs of the current generation of kids and the disappearing values in them!! Being a teacher for high school students had exposed her to this change almost on a daily basis!! Devika had been teaching for 25 years but she had never seen such drastic erosion of values and culture as she has been seeing in the recent 3-4 years!!! 😲 😲 😲

She was seeing a lot of easy money in the hands of kids, money which gave them freedom to do many wrongs! She was seeing kids loose respect for their teachers, parents and elders! Irresponsible parents who were too busy to even remember that they had children! Busy parents who had no time to monitor what their kids were upto or......into! There had been 4 teenage pregnancies in her classes over the few years, something that would have been unimaginable just 10 years ago! 😲

It was not that all the kids were bad. There also were these highly impressive set of kids that were scaling heights of success in academics and sports! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ There were kids who still treated there teachers as Gurus and there were parents who shared an unbreakable bond with their kids! But these kids were a dying race. πŸ˜”
This was the topic of discussion many a day in the school staff room!! That these discussions had been affecting her on a sub-conscious level........she had realized this today, when she let loose all her anger and angst 😑 😑 and frustration on these two youngsters who had happened to cross her path today in such an extreme way!!! 🀒
But........she was provoked! Anand's using such disgusting language had proved to be the final provacation!!! 🀒 It had just pushed her over the brink and she had exploded!!!😲 😲

"Maam...........Maam?".........hears Devika and snaps out of her thoughts! The nurse was calling her. Devika responds to the nurse who helps her get down from the high bed. Devika slowly walks out into the corridor. She sees Robbie and that girl seriously arguing near the window! 😲
"Who is this girl??"..........thinks Devika. Robbie had called her something, she could not remember her name! But Robbie must know her very well......because Robbie never argued with strangers! 😲 If a stranger did something that Robbie did not like, he simply ignored them. But if anyone who is close to him, did something wrong then Robbie always made it a point to communicate with them and tell them the same.......and so Devika is surprised to see him arguing with Kasturi!! 😲 😲 Devika slowly makes her way to them. Kasturi and Robbie are in such a heated argument that they do not observe her.

Robbie was demanding to know : Mujhe yeh samajh mei nahi aata ke tum uski tarafdaari kyun kar rahi ho?? 😑 😑 Tumhe uski galti nazar nahi aati? Agar mere chachaji ko kuch ho jaata toh? 😑
Kasturi : Lekin hua toh nahi!!! Bhagwan ki krupaa seh woh theek toh hai!! Doctor neh kahaa hai na ke woh 6-8 weeks mei theek ho jaayenge......
Robbie interrupts her impatiently : Baat theek hone yaa naa hone ki nahi hai!!! Baat hai galti ki aur sazaa ki!!
Kasturi : Please Robbie! Ek baar meri baat samajhne ki koshish karo!!! Mei maanti hun Anand ki galti hai, laaparwaahi thi.......magar.....magar usse ek mauka doh! Please! Woh phsycologically utnaa stable nahi hai!!! Woh bahut hi sensitive hai.......
Robbie : Aur mere parivaar waalon ki sensitivities kaa kyaa? 😑 Were you not assaulting my mother's sensitivities when you were screaming at her??? 😑
Kasturi is frustrated and she says : She forced me too!!!! 😑 Why is this so difficult for you to understand???? 😑 😑 She was behaving so unreasonable......in such an immature manner that I had to be very rude to her.......only to catch her attention.....
From the corner of her eye Kasturi catches Devika staring at her!!😲 😲 😲 She stops talking and turns to look at Devika who was standing close by and was listening to this conversation! 😲 She had a very hard look in her eyes! There is an awkward silence between them! The situation was looking very bad!!! The whole thing comes across as if Kasturi was complaining against her to her son!! 🀒 Kasturi shifts her weight from one leg to another uncomfortably. πŸ˜”

Robbie follows Kasturi's gaze and also sees his aunt. He quickly walks to her and asks if she was alright? Devika replies that she is fine and then turns to Robbie and asks him.........."Yeh kaun hai, Robbie? Won't you introduce her to me?"
Robbie could feel the slight edge in her voice and he is highly dejected!! πŸ˜’ He cannot but feel the terrible burden of the bad impression that Kasturi had made on his aunt!!!
He says quietly : Yeh Kasturi Chawla hai, meri dost......aur mere boss ki.......
".....behen"........finishes Devika for him! 😳 Robbie turns to look at the cold look in his aunt's eyes and is very disappointed!
Devika continues : Kasturi, mei tumseh milnaa chah rahi thi. I wanted to thank you! Tum neh chutki ki...........meraa matlab hai Divya ki jaan bachaayi, uss rescue operation mei!! Thank you very much!
Robbie is a little relieved to hear her say that and thinks that maybe the situation can be salvaged!!!
Kasturi moves towards Devika and says : Thank you ki koi zaroorat nahi hai aunty ji........
Devika interrupts : Zaroorat hai! Aur tumhaare iss ehsaan ke badle mei, mei tumhaare dost ke khilaaf apni complaint waapas leti hun!
Both Robbie and Kasturi look at her surprised! 😲
Devika continues coldly : Mei kisi ke ehsaan ka bhoj apne kandhon peh nahi rakhti!!! Khaas karke paraaye logon ki, 😑 unn logon ki jo kabhi kabhi raaste mei mil jaate hai aur phir bichhad jaate hai!!
Both Kasturi and Robbie feel the deep sting of that statement!!! 😲 😲 The tone of her voice and what she had said was ample indication that she did not wish to meet Kasturi again!! Kasturi is hurt! πŸ˜” She feels that such a strong remark and reaction was uncalled for! πŸ˜• And Robbie.....he feels that its best that Kasturi leave before any more more damage is done!!! 🀒 His aunt was not in the right frame of mind and anything Kasturi said or did was only going to irritate her even more!!!

Robbie decides to change the topic and is about to say something when the nurse comes out and tells them that Puru has gained concsiousness and that they can now meet him!
Immediately Devika moves towards the room where Puru has been shifted and turning to Robbie says........."Robbie, Shaayad Kasturi aur uskaa dost ab jaana chahenge, unhe thodaa baahar tak chodh ke, jaldi aa jao!"

She does not even look at Kasturi and simply leaves!! Robbie and Kasturi stare after her and then they turn to look at each other. Kasturi could see the disappointment in Robbie's eyes and she gets angry! 😑 😑 Why was he behaving like this whole thing was her mistake and like she had purposefully behaved rude!!! 😑 But Robbie was disappointed more with the unfortunate turn of events rather than with her!!! πŸ˜” But right now he was too flustered to explain that to her!! His uncle and aunt needed him!!! Kasturi also realizes that its best to converse after calming down and so she says to Robbie
Kasturi : Ab mei chalti hun Robbie.........Mei thodi der mei tumhe phone karti hun...."
Robbie cuts her curtly : Actually Kasturi, its better that I call you! Tum rehne doh, mauka dekhkar, mei tumhe phone karunga! 😳
Kasturi stares at him for a moment 😑 and then angrily turns and walks to Anand and then taking him with her, she walks out without turning back to look at Robbie!!! ( πŸ˜• )
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

RESERVED πŸ˜† *YAY* me first1st time lolzπŸ˜†

this is a great idea diiπŸ˜ƒ im so addicted with this great ff πŸ˜ƒwhenever i finish reading it i always want to read more and more and moreπŸ˜†...Thank You dii its not a cliff hangerπŸ˜• after the previus part cant bear cliff hangers anymoreπŸ˜­πŸ˜†

ok now back to the part:πŸ˜†

Robbie is really sweet😳 he care for his chachi alot😳 like her mother😳

i cant see RoKa fighting😭

Thank God Puru is out of danger *phew*awww i love Devika and Robbie bond😳so sweet😳

if im not wrong Robbie's parents died in an acidenet as well πŸ˜•and still Robbie is handling the situation camlyπŸ˜• this is just too goodπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

There had been 4 teenage pregnancies in her classes over the few years shocking for India peoplesπŸ˜† but in foreign countriesπŸ˜†this is not shockingπŸ˜†

i have a feeling that Devika wont let Kasturi married to Robbie i hope my prediction go wrongπŸ˜•

Devika thoughts were touching 😳that is true actually teenagers are bad 🀒im too a teenager but im not like that🀒

Kasturi, mei tumseh milnaa chah rahi thi. I wanted to thank you! Tum neh chutki ki...........meraa matlab hai Divya ki jaan bachaayi, uss rescue operation mei!! Thank you very much! this line makes me a bit comfortable πŸ˜†but when she takes her complaint back that was a reliefbut i want to punish that Anand😑 dnt like him 😑but i hope she accept Kasturi as her bahu ASAPπŸ˜† but i know this will take ages πŸ˜•Devika have to forget this inncident 😭but its hard for her😭

im really confused who is right who is wrongπŸ˜• they both are equaly right i thinkπŸ˜•

i dont understand one thing why Kasturi is suporting Anand for?😑 i understand that he is sensitive 🀒everyone is sensitiveπŸ˜› but he is just too much🀒

now what will Robbie doπŸ˜• will he call her or notπŸ˜•cant wait for the next part diiπŸ˜†plz post the next part ASAPπŸ˜ƒ

Love,

ManiπŸ˜ƒ

Edited by *princess*15 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 😭 kasturi and robbie uncomfortable 😭
pragz yup i know that these are required for roka relationship to move further 😭 😭 but i will wait for the happy one πŸ˜†

about AA yup they are fantastic and am waiting for their more romancing

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Posted: 17 years ago

Ok Mani i thought i was first 2 post d comment πŸ˜†
Pragz di as usual ure parts jus keep getn beter and beter. keep up the gr8 awesome work πŸ‘ Pragz di thnx 4 updating the part instead of making us w8 even more longer πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† & not with a cliffhanger πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

awwwwwwwwwww robbies cha cha ji is in such a bad state awwww robbie
6-8 weeks in healing omg hope he gets beter and robbie dont worry he will
wowww devika u knw wat u cope with a lot of teens init pregnancies too
devika that girl is non other than KASTURI πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
wowwwwww robbie yh devika did get a bit out of control the situatuion was too but yh kasturi your sticking up 4 anand so much why????????????
πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† devika your thanking kasturi chutki πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
omg bohj ehsaan what is all this omg 😑 that means when devika finds out relationship between roka what sgoing to happen??????
awwwwwwwwwww robbie your going to phone.
I guess al the things happend at the wrong time wrong place.
pragz dii keep up the gr8 work
πŸ‘
& make everything be ok between kasturi and robbie
& update the nxt part soon
luv Hummy
xxx

Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Ok Mani i thought i was first 2 post d comment πŸ˜†

better luk nxt tym hummy lolzπŸ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
i guess both are (RoKa) are not in a proper state of mind 😭 😭 😭 . I hope things get resolved. ohh itz sad that they fought bt i m pretty sure that they ll get over it 😳 . figths and problems are part and parcel of a relationship 😳 . i hope puruz condition improves i think it ll help in the betterment of the situation .

Now darling once again a brilliant effort πŸ‘ . i simply luved it. the best part is we dunt have to bear those flashes and loud sound effects πŸ˜‰ .

they way u hav potrayed the state of mind of every character is impressing πŸ‘ . one tends to behae like this in such situations.

i liked the part very much πŸ˜› πŸ˜› .looking forward to the next part dear.Keep on Rocking. πŸ‘

Tc
Luv SUVI!!! πŸ€—
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Posted: 17 years ago
WoW! This is more wild than I thought it would be.πŸ˜†

But both Ro and Ka are right from their own view. Robbie, of course, is gonna be worried about his relatives (mom or chachi or dad or chachaji) and Kasturi was right in her own place, Devika did loose her control but it was all mainly that stupid Anand's fault. I can't believe Ka is still with him.

Looks like this might effect on AA too.πŸ˜† Although I hope that you don't put fights like the ones that happen in the actual show where Kasturi or Robbie get hit by each other.

Overall, nice fight.πŸ˜† Great Work!πŸ‘

-Yams
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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG this part was so 😭

ThankGod Robbie didnt overact..I was so worried that a wrong sentence from him could def. worsen the situation. His fears are not unfound..the situation is def. grim

Thankfully Puru's condition not too bad..actually I was worried that his leg could have been hurt. Devika's reason for her reactions were quite understandable...though a bit more violent ..I still will take it for we need some drama also. πŸ˜†


Prazg you have put me in a dilemma ..RK both look correct in their views and this makes the situation so helpless. Gosh! Devika is furious with kastu ...now its so difficult for kastu to win her heart. πŸ˜• Anyway I no need to worry they are in safe hands πŸ˜‰ ..I mean RK are in ur hands and I know u can salvage them. πŸ˜†

Please continue soooon! 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
RoKa in a horrible argument πŸ˜’ i hate it when RoKa argue and shout at each other but i guess in this part it had to be done....both are right in their places....Robbie clearly hurt by the news of the accident and then seeing Kasturi shouting at Devika....and Kasturi for trying to make Devika understand as firmly as she could and then Robbie misunderstanding it

Glad Puru is fine

Hope RoKa sort it out soon.....its going to take Devika a while to accept Kasturi now

Prag write a happy part soon...we have enough sadness to endure from the serial 😭 πŸ˜†

overall very well written Prag.....nothing over the top 😊

Kay
Edited by Kay - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

hi pragal...yet another short and (not sweet) good part....

very well said about the affairs of the current generation of kids and the disappearing values in them!! πŸ‘

Busy parents who had no time to monitor what their kids were upto or......into! ...it is so true lol cuz nowadays both the parent go for job to have comfortable life..πŸ‘

There had been 4 teenage pregnancies 😑...it is too much...still i know that it is a bitter truth...that too in metro cities...

devika..indirectly said kasturi paraayee..she is selfish😑..cuz she understood that she may loose his son...

robbie said to kasturi.. tum anand ki tarafdaari kar rahee ho...iski..?😑...what is wrong if kasturi support to anand when he did not do that accident intentionally...robbie said so cuz once he try to miss behave with kasturi in a party...isn't it..??

i dont think that anand is absolutely wrong that time...cuz

Originally posted by: pragalbha


she was drinking, that her dressing sense was not so modest, and that she was so free with a guy

Anand was absolutely drunk and had no idea what he was doing!!

quote from ur FF part 12 page 35....

lol this is what the condition of kasturi and anand at that time...in this condition any normal man is liable to miss behave.. in anand's place if robbie would have been there i am sure he will also do the same...then y robbie should get so annoyed with kasturi for supporting anand...ufff..😑

when kasturi said i will call u ...i dont understand y robbie avoided and said better that i call u😑....is it cuz of his attitude😑...?..if so robbie better u know for a girl like kasturi who is beautiful,talented and rich..thousands of robbies will make a Q...but for u it is not so easy to get a girl like kasturi...

she is ready to sacrifices her luxury life ...and in fact every thing...for the sake of robbie but he cant withstand a harsh word from kasturi to his chachi not even his mother ,mother like...ufff...that too she was forced to speak like that cuz of anand's mental condition...and his chachi's yelling and screaming without control..

i dont know y this guys r like that..they expect girls to leave every thing and go behind them...and we fools too do that happily..and this idiot boys cant tolerate a single word towards their parent or family...ufff...i wish my husband read this...

shumi

Edited by robbii - 17 years ago

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