Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 85

hey Pragzs.. i really felt like i was watching a serial..uff such intensity..boy almost got schorched👏 you are amazing, (i know i've told you wayy to many times but i really feel you've grown so much as a writer with kaarvan. The way you handle everyone's emotions in such a charged situation was stunning..Fantastic Pragzs...👏👏

I liked how you told me us where Devika's fustration was stemming from.. yeah the rise of teen preg. and the basic fabric of the family values is truly tearing apart.. its soo sad to see... i hate when i see younge kids swearing and smoking and wearing their pants half way down their butt.. makes me sick...🤢 anyway devika's reaction has been well understood..

Robbie oh my god, even i was afraid for kasturi, the guy was so torn btw devika and kasturi.. i felt bad for kasturi though, she really didnt know what to do to either how to handle such a distraught devika and anand at the sametime and Robbie witnessed her at the climax..what a shame.. baaaddd timing robbie...uff

I really felt a void growing btw both robbie and kasturi and it saddened me deeply, i will look forward to how these two are able to fill that void again, and move on.. but sometime we are able to forgive but not forget, i wonder if that will be the case here as well?

I loved devika in this she forgave anand cause of kasturi, and the cold treatment she gave kasturi was very normal under the circumstances... okay i'm dying to see what happens next Pragzs... please do continue soon, and man you had said the meeting between robbie's family and kasturi would be huge fireworks, and you surpassed my imagination.. it was the 4th of July type fireworks...mega hot...

brilliant part prazs..

luv robina

Originally posted by: *princess*15

RESERVED 😆 *YAY* me first1st time lolz😆Sorry Mani, for the delayed reply! this is a great idea dii😃 im so addicted with this great ff 😃whenever i finish reading it i always want to read more and more and moreThanks Mani!!! And I see you had a lot to right this time! 😆 😆...Thank You dii its not a cliff hanger😕 after the previus part cant bear cliff hangers anymore😭😆 I will try to keep them at a minimum! 😊

ok now back to the part:😆

Robbie is really sweet😳 he care for his chachi alot😳 like her mother😳He is! He loves his family a lot!

i cant see RoKa fighting😭 I know.........I cannot see them fighting either! But I am trying to show this as realistic as possible! I hope you understand 😳

Thank God Puru is out of danger *phew*awww i love Devika and Robbie bond😳so sweet😳Yes, I am glad that Puru will be able to recover! And Robbie looks up to her as his mother!

if im not wrong Robbie's parents died in an acidenet as well 😕and still Robbie is handling the situation camly😕 this is just too good👏👏👏Yes he is!!! This shows that to a certain extent he has moved on too!

There had been 4 teenage pregnancies in her classes over the few years shocking for India peoples😆 but in foreign countries😆this is not shocking😆True! But I think even in India this is not shocking anymore~ 😕

i have a feeling that Devika wont let Kasturi married to Robbie i hope my prediction go wrong😕There are high chances of your prediction coming true! 😕

Devika thoughts were touching 😳that is true actually teenagers are bad 🤢im too a teenager but im not like that🤢Mani! I am glad to know that and I know you are not such a teenager! 👏 👏 👏

Kasturi, mei tumseh milnaa chah rahi thi. I wanted to thank you! Tum neh chutki ki...........meraa matlab hai Divya ki jaan bachaayi, uss rescue operation mei!! Thank you very much! this line makes me a bit comfortable 😆but when she takes her complaint back that was a reliefbut i want to punish that Anand😡 dnt like him 😡but i hope she accept Kasturi as her bahu ASAP😆 but i know this will take ages 😕Devika have to forget this inncident 😭but its hard for her😭yes Devika cannot forget this incident so easily!

im really confused who is right who is wrong😕 they both are equaly right i think😕Yes you are right! 😆 Both are qually right, just 2 different sides of the same coin

i dont understand one thing why Kasturi is suporting Anand for?😡 i understand that he is sensitive 🤢everyone is sensitive😛 but he is just too much🤢Anand is a silghtly weak person........and Kasturi has known him for a long time! Kasturi has accepted him as a friend along with his weaknesses and so wants to fulfill her friendship! There will a lot more clarity in the next part about this.

now what will Robbie do😕 will he call her or not😕cant wait for the next part dii😆plz post the next part ASAP😃Mani, I will try to post the next part as soon as possible, probably by the middle of the week! 😃

Love, Mani😃

Originally posted by: lwfw

I am sorry Shara for the delayed reply, was caught up a bit! 😭 😭 kasturi and robbie uncomfortable 😭 Yep.........they did not fight it our outright but have are angry with each other currently!
pragz yup i know that these are required for roka relationship to move further 😭 😭 but i will wait for the happy one 😆 Right, this is how a normal and realistic relationship is and I am trying to portray that!. Good times will come back soon, I promise! [/color ]

about AA yup they are fantastic and am waiting for their more romancing Next part will have them again !

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Ok Mani i thought i was first 2 post d comment 😆 Hey Hummy! Sorry for the delay in responding to you! 😊
Pragz di as usual ure parts jus keep getn beter and beter. keep up the gr8 awesome work 👏 Pragz di thnx 4 updating the part instead of making us w8 even more longer 😆 😆 😆 & not with a cliffhanger 😆 😆 Thank you sweetheart, for such wonderful compliments! 😳 And yes, decided to give you all a break from my cliff hangers!! 😉 😆 😆

awwwwwwwwwww robbies cha cha ji is in such a bad state awwww robbie
6-8 weeks in healing omg hope he gets beter and robbie dont worry he will The best part is, he will be able to recover!
wowww devika u knw wat u cope with a lot of teens init pregnancies too
devika that girl is non other than KASTURI 😆 😆
wowwwwww robbie yh devika did get a bit out of control the situatuion was too but yh kasturi your sticking up 4 anand so much why???????????? Well, he is a very good friend of her's and she is trying to stick up to him and yes it is true that Devika was very unreasonable too!
😆 😆 😆 devika your thanking kasturi chutki 😆 😆
omg bohj ehsaan what is all this omg 😡 that means when devika finds out relationship between roka what sgoing to happen?????? Well, it won't be smooth! Devika will have to compromise a lot and so will RoKa before Devika agrees for their relationship!
awwwwwwwwwww robbie your going to phone. He may call her............he is not sure at this point!
I guess al the things happend at the wrong time wrong place. Very well said Hummy 👏 👏 👏.........it is just a bad situation that went out of hand!
pragz dii keep up the gr8 work
👏 & make everything be ok between kasturi and robbie
& update the nxt part soon Thanks a bunch for liking it! And I promise I will make it ok between Robbie and Kasturi in the next part! 😃
luv Hummy
xxx

Originally posted by: Super Kool

i guess both are (RoKa) are not in a proper state of mind 😭 😭 😭 . Very true Suvi........they both are just too flustered at this moment! I hope things get resolved. ohh itz sad that they fought bt i m pretty sure that they ll get over it 😳 . Yes, things will get resolved. This is a test to see how strong their love is and is a way to strengthen it even more! figths and problems are part and parcel of a relationship 😳 . i hope puruz condition improves i think it ll help in the betterment of the situation . Well said..........and Puru being able to recover itself is a very good sign!

Now darling once again a brilliant effort 👏 . i simply luved it. the best part is we dunt have to bear those flashes and loud sound effects 😉 . Thanks a lot Suvi!!!! 😃 I greatly appreciate all these wonderful comments! And yes I am glad about escaping those loud flashes too!! 😆 😆 😆 😆

they way u hav potrayed the state of mind of every character is impressing 👏 . one tends to behae like this in such situations. Thank you very much!!! 😳

i liked the part very much 😛 😛 .looking forward to the next part dear.Keep on Rocking. 👏 I will try to post the next part as soon as possible! 😃

Tc
Luv SUVI!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: yummys

WoW! This is more wild than I thought it would be.😆 Aha............so you are enjoying the fight, huh?? 😆

But both Ro and Ka are right from their own view. Robbie, of course, is gonna be worried about his relatives (mom or chachi or dad or chachaji) and Kasturi was right in her own place, Devika did loose her control but it was all mainly that stupid Anand's fault. That is true. Both are right in their own way! And to a certain exten Devika's behavior also made sense! I can't believe Ka is still with him. Well, that is true friendship, is it not? Not levaing friends in lurch!

Looks like this might effect on AA too.😆 At this point it won't, else their love story will die even before it blossoms! Although I hope that you don't put fights like the ones that happen in the actual show where Kasturi or Robbie get hit by each other. oh No! That is so unrealistic, all that unnecessary slapping! I won't go that way.

Overall, nice fight.😆 Great Work!👏 Thanks Yams! 😃 😆

-Yams

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

OMG this part was so 😭 Sorry Paddu, for the delayed response to your comments! I promise next part will be good or atleast it will end good!

ThankGod Robbie didnt overact..I was so worried that a wrong sentence from him could def. worsen the situation. His fears are not unfound..the situation is def. grim Acting on emotion is something that Robbie rarely does and even now he was struggling to keep his emotions in control. But he did not know if Kasturi was not right or not and wanted to give his aunt the benefit of doubt because he knew his aunt more than Kasturi.

Thankfully Puru's condition not too bad..actually I was worried that his leg could have been hurt. His condition could have been worse, but he was very lucky! Devika's reason for her reactions were quite understandable...though a bit more violent ..I still will take it for we need some drama also. 😆 That's true!! 😆 But I also tried to keep it as less as dramatic as possible!

Prazg you have put me in a dilemma ..RK both look correct in their views and this makes the situation so helpless. DidI??? 😆 😆 😆 Yes, theu both seem right and that is why one agreeing to the other is going to be even more difficult now! Gosh! Devika is furious with kastu ...now its so difficult for kastu to win her heart. 😕 It is definitely going to be tough to change her mind! Anyway I no need to worry they are in safe hands 😉 ..I mean RK are in ur hands and I know u can salvage them. 😆 Ha Ha Paddu, very smart!! 😆 But if I try to continue the fight longer then don't be made at me!!! 😃

Please continue soooon! 😳 I will try to post one soon!

Originally posted by: Kay

RoKa in a horrible argument 😒 It was not too bad Kay, was it?? i hate it when RoKa argue and shout at each other but i guess in this part it had to be done Actually that is how it always is! Its noy possible for things to be always smooth and straight! ....both are right in their places.. Yes they are and that is the interesting part! Now we have to see who will agree to the other's point of view! ..Robbie clearly hurt by the news of the accident and then seeing Kasturi shouting at Devika....and Kasturi for trying to make Devika understand as firmly as she could and then Robbie misunderstanding it Yes, it was an unfortunate turn of events! But hopefully will be resolved before it gets any more complex!

Glad Puru is fine Yes, he is!

Hope RoKa sort it out soon.....its going to take Devika a while to accept Kasturi now Devika is definitely going to have trouble, no question about that! The next few parts will be how they adjust to each other!

Prag write a happy part soon...we have enough sadness to endure from the serial 😭 😆 Ok, next part or atleast the end of it will be happy!

overall very well written Prag.....nothing over the top 😊 Thanks a bunch Kay!!! Your wonderful comments have spruced me up for the next part! 😃

Kay