Originally posted by: RK_fan111
Pragz sorry yaar😳..was really held up with so many things that I couldnt make my way here.. Two parts from you is like a bonus for me😃. Ahhhh Paddu!! So good to see you ! 😃 But I do understand!
Part 28:
What kasturi is not shot😲..it was so wicked of you to make us think otherwise(take this as a compliment)😉😆 Here I was expecting some cute scenes betn RK after the gun shot. 😆What a comment! 😆 😆 No she did not get shot!!! If she would get shot then I would have to write a lot of drama around that and I did not want to delay this twist anymore and so decided to keep her safe!!! 😆
The hug was such a emo scene betn roka! Yep it was!!! I was imagining them when writing it! 😳 Shivani's behaviour was so matured..just loved how she holds back her expressions. 👏Yeah she is the mature one and so thinks before she acts!
I too really wish it doesn't become a habit for Ajay to always come inbetn RK..that is the one point which keeps me from liking him full. 😆Pooru guy, but he does not know, it is very unintentional on his part!
I liked the way you have written the party preparations ..I mean how Robbie and his sis got ready. It was so natural the way Robbie was complaining about Alaana taking time and even Alaana's apprehension in wearing the party wear was brought out very naturally and her fears resembled mine…sometimes with this sort of apprehensions I end up with a very very simple dress😆.And then when we get to the party and find out that the others have come loaded then we wish that we had worn something better!!! 😆 😆 Has happened to me too sometimes!!! I loved the way you are making Shivani tease Robbie😳..thanks Pragz..I hope to see more of it. Yep, you will, you will see 2 angles of this! Btw ur praising Alaana's beauty I tend to see the Alaana in this view and find her really pretty.😉😆That is cool..........I do find Alaana of the serial beautiful too!! Her eyes are gorgeous!
What you are sending kastu to Singapore😲…why not Robbie also..please Pragz..you remmeber you had promised me earlier😆…I did promise, but unfortunately could not send Robbie this time........maybe later! Maybe for their honeymoon!!! 😆 😆
You bring out characters really well Pragz…their conversations and thoughts are so unique ..I cant stop appreciating how you have written the dialogues for Neha👏…b'cos I think it is easy to write a very sweet and good natured dialogues..but very difficult to write cheap behaviour and cheeky comments from characters like Neha who are not likeable. And their actions can be real shocking and totally out of place . You have really made us readers feel the disgust for her thru her convo👏.Oh God thank you so much Paddu for that wonderful compliment!!!! 🤗 It is really a little diificult to write cheap comments but tastefully so that the reader does not get turned off!!! I am so glad that worked!!! 😳
Nice to see AA bonding and atlast kas tell s Raunak ..that was a great relief.😆Yes it was.............there was no point in causing any grief to anybody! 😃
Part 29:
When you said 'Long cherished wish comes true'..are u referring to kastu or Alaana?.Devika's..............he finally called her 'Maa' 😳, the details will be in the next part!
What a shocker that part was😲..Pragz really the end left me dumbfounded😲 …I just didn't expect this😲. Which makes me feel happy as a writer but sad as your friend!!!! 😳 Brilliantly written and I should say this part is one of the best parts of this ff👏. ooooh thanks Paddu! 😃 Man…what a twist. You have really well planned this ff ..you can see in the flow how well the story is plotted. For ex. I always thought what is this Ananad doing in this ff and now I understand what role u had for him😆. That was outstanding👏. Thanks again Paddu, I was planning on this twist for long! But first wanted build up the story before I get here! I was always planning to use Anand! Poor guy.........😆
Raunak took it really in good spirits..hope he doesn't twist it any further. I don't think he will! He was not exactly in love with her, so he is ok! And the way Divya says everyone about Wimbledon…reminded me the resemblance it had with how my elder one talks. The same hope and confidence..I could see in Divya. 😳Oh wow! Your older one seems a very confident teenager!! That sounds wonderful to hear!!! Love to see such confidence among kids! 😃
You are reallly bringing AA love story very well. Glad that Alaana didn't refuse to go with Ajay preferring her dabba😆. Ajay had to be frank with her about his intentions otherwise he need to come up with reasons everyday. 😉OMG Paddu.......very true! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣!! Thank God I saved myself!!! 😆
What you sent kastu alone to my place😭..no Robbie so nothing for me to expect😕😆. He will come next time! 😉 😆
Coming to the accident part….never expected such problems to come betn RK and that too not from Robbie's family side ..I always thought it would be from kaush or Ajay. They will have problems from that side too! But first from this side! Devika's behaviour was not her ususal self..so I will wait for ur explanation. But I find her behavior justified! More details will come up in the next chapter! I liked all of kastu's dialogues ..you have really written those very well building up the convo and atlast when kastu loses her control..as a reader I could very well understand her predicament. Hats off ..that was an exemplary piece of writing👏.Thank you so much Paddu! 😳 I did spend some time on those dialogs and the situation I really wanted to get it right!!! 😊
Your title Robbie's new face makes it scary …I am fearing to see his reactions and I also feel I might not like his reactions. At the end of it you will love him but in the middle it will be a little different! It's a testing time for RK love. Yes it is! 😕 Continue soon dear..the tension is unbearable. 😳I will, next part will be up by my Wed night!
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