Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 72

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Posted: 17 years ago

Ppp, the part was gud.... I dont know why but I somehow didnt enoy RK in this as much as I enjoyed AA... Shockingly, I was more interested to see wats going to happen with AA and if they are going to talk again before saying gudnites๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Rk's romantic parts seemed a bit more forced to me, Aaargghh even i dont know why iam feeling tat๐Ÿ˜† May be I have started to hope more for AA in ur FF๐Ÿ˜†

Luved Divya's part... Why do I think tat Gia and Ronak are in luv??๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I think they are going to be a pair๐Ÿ˜ƒ I luv them tooo, sooooo Iam all ready to read romance between RK, AA, RG๐Ÿ˜†

btw, I cud feel the excitement wen reading the rafting scenes of AA๐Ÿ˜ณ It was written very well๐Ÿ‘

Wen u posting next part??? Likh sooooooooooooon๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hiyya Pragz!

Sowwie didn't notice you updated! But read it now! And it was a huge relief let me tell you!

I was so scared for Alana after that teaser you posted, dunno if you read my comments on it, but I don't know swimming either! And drowing scares me a lot too! So I was really really really relieved when Ajay saved Alana!

Ok now to the rest of the part:

I loved the little race the rafts had and that Divya won! She sure seems to love competetions!

OOOH and Ajay tipping the manager guy, LOL...just to be close to Alana! So cute!

But I must commend you on Alana's character! She knows the reality of the situation, just like Robbie did: the class and financial differences, as wella s the fact that Ajay is Robbie's boss. Buuuuut....as you know...love cannot be forced, it just happens!

I also loved the end bit, the romance was sooo cute!

Ok, now update soon! I know you just did, and this is me being greedy, but anyways!

Will look forward to more romantic scenes, which you're btw really good at!

Love,
STAR โญ๏ธ
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Posted: 17 years ago

Wicked Part๐Ÿ‘

Such a cute part๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘i love AA Jodi in your ff๐Ÿ˜ณ

Divya really is a tomboy lol๐Ÿ˜†

Ajay bribed ooooooooooooo lolz๐Ÿ˜†

This part was full of AA ๐Ÿ˜ณlove AA pair๐Ÿ˜ณ but Allana is seedhi sadhi+bholi bhalli type girl๐Ÿ˜† so now Ajay gotta confess๐Ÿ˜‰ if he wants to๐Ÿ˜† lolz offcource he wants to๐Ÿ˜†

Love the jokes ๐Ÿ˜†heard 2nd joke before๐Ÿ˜† but i didnt expected it'll be that one๐Ÿ˜†

RK scenes was so cute๐Ÿ˜ณand specially mumbai ke Heer-Ranjha lolz๐Ÿ˜†

looking forward to the next part๐Ÿ˜ƒ and phleez put some RoKa scenes๐Ÿ˜ณ they are my fav you know lolz๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
pragz nice one yaar ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ , you have two differnt jodis and managed to bring their romance in different way ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ loved it ๐Ÿ˜ณ

thanks for no cliffhanger too ๐Ÿ˜† but when is the next part ๐Ÿ˜‰
loved both your jokes too ๐Ÿ˜†
hehe robbie met his match in kasturi ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago

Wow what a fantastic turn around Pragalbha, your updating so quickly, i'm super impressed for this part was one of your best peices in Kaarvan..(well for me, and okies its cause of AA thanks krishi for the jodi name) they just slammed into my heart and i couldnt get enough of this couple..uff, what can i say...I was kinda shocked that RK took a back seat in this part...yet i feel everyone had equal coverage.

Okay some parts that i really thought were so wonderful that i had to comment:

Alaana is so down to earth i like her... she's one of those people knows the work has to get done and she just does it.. Ajay liking this quality just endeared him more to me...๐Ÿ˜ณand the fact that Ajay didnt catch robbie, had me ๐Ÿ˜† i expected it, but still made me laugh..phew.. robbbie no more close calls...

Why do i get the feeling robbie's sisters dont like Kasturi? is this trouble heading kas's way.?

The way you described the water rafting, was soo perfect, where i live we do a lot of white water rafting so i found that part very well written, are you a fellow rafter?(well i've been out of it for awhile now..)

OHHHH they way Ajay said that i didnt think you would make me save you soo soon, was sooo cute.... omg this couple is just awesome...and poor Ajay bribing the guy was very sneeky of him,, good to know Ajay isnt holding back he knows what he wants.. the only think i would like to see more from Ajay's character is him fighting with his inner battle about Alaana being Robbie's sis, cause i think for Ajay that will be a huge mental hurdle to over come.. will wait anxiously to see..

and Robbie's rafting romance 201 class soo funny... i'm sure he'll have tons of takers.๐Ÿ˜‰

again your jokes left me ๐Ÿ˜†. loved both of them.. but the one about the guy asking for the kiss was classical.. hand on the door bell..uff...

well, i'm sure your exhusted from writing two great back2back parts..but thank youuu. you more then exceeded my hopes in writing about ajay and alaana.. i'm more then satisfied thank youuu Prazs...

luv robina

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Posted: 17 years ago

Wow this part was full of AA ! You have made Alaana's charcters simply lovingโ€ฆI really liked the way she carried herself โ€ฆno wonder Ajay is bowled over๐Ÿ˜ณ. I simply enjoyed how they bonded and that accident really brought them close. I have to congratulate you for making AA couple as adorable as RK.๐Ÿ‘

Ajay knows how to get his way..thats so cute of him to bribe the person there.๐Ÿ˜†

I could so well relate to the discussions they were having about men-women and it made me nostalgic rememebering the times when the same sort of discussions used to perk up whenever I met my cousins๐Ÿ˜†. The jokes were wonderful and it's a new thing u have introduced in this ff which was missing in the other 2 ffs..

Divya a winner..she is sure is enjoying this trip๐Ÿ˜†. How old is this Rajat? Is he as young as Divya?

Looking forward for more of AA romance๐Ÿ˜ณโ€ฆyes RK can rest for a while๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†.

Edited by RK_fan111 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Prag! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Glad Ajay did not see RoKa sleeping ๐Ÿ˜†....i was hoping Alaana would come and distract him ๐Ÿ˜‰
It would have been nice to have a scene beween RoKa talking about them falling asleep in each others arms ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Im really starting to like the AA jodi now......so sweet..Alaana seems so different here than the serial...she has some brains here atleast ๐Ÿ˜†

Loved the whole Raft trip.....it defo has brought AA together...and we got some RoKa romance aswell ๐Ÿ˜ณ...loved the jokes in between......im sure Robbies classes will be fully booked ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

Liked the whole competition atmosphere.....it sure does build up more excitment to any trip ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ajay gave the guy money ๐Ÿ˜† im glad he did....atleast AA got to be together and so did RoKa ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

Alaana falling in the water is sad since she cant swim....but Ajay was there to save the day ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Robbie and his jokes are back ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ both jokes were hilarious Prag ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† you have to tell me where you get them from ๐Ÿ˜‰

RoKa last scene........they both are naughty as each other as well as romantic ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜

Loved this part Prag...great job ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Update soon! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago

wow Pppp di, i love alaana and ajay, i was more interested in them than roka. i love their sweet, decent and a pure love, man. i truly loved their parts. alaana ne wakya ajay ko bahut jaldi azma liya ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† and ajay went inside to bribe that man, so he and alaana can be alone, but it also worked for roka too, but robbie made some efforts too. i really liked wat ajay did. ๐Ÿ˜† i was more than just glad that alaana told ajay about her problem, not robbie, i think she was maybe more comfortable telling him about her prob, shows her trust on the guy, not that i'm saying she doesn't trust robbie, but at times i think u can only reveal some of ur feelings to someone veryyyy close. even though the water scared and she was forced to tell at the last minute, but i still feel she was more comfortable telling this to ajay.
kasturi still wore those shorts, to be very honest this attitude of ppl gets on my nerve, but then i realize that i'm like that too sometimes ๐Ÿ˜† but the situation of sabarwal sisters was presented very well, i mean even wen u don't dress up properly for a party or something, u feel very out and uncomfortable, so i totally understood how sabharwal sisters felt cuz i didn't dress up in indian clothes for asian heritage month few days back cuz i had forgotten that there's a celebration after school, in tension of my mock trial. but only for a while, i'm not someone who take these things too seriously, everyone have the right to dress up the way they want.

and ajay thinking that gia and his sister were lazing around, khud kausa vo khait mein hal chala reha tha, i hate wen men do that yo, i mean itni problem hai usako khudh kyun nahi bena leta sabke liye breakfast, i get really upset wen men think it's women's job to cook and do the house work, for god sake this is 21st century, i hate these old vichaar of ppl. to an extend i think this is also their narrow minded mentality. not that i really appreciate wat kas and gia did, but let one decide wat they wanna do or not, and wen u urself is not doing anything , than why blame others. u might think that i'm elaborating on this too much, but i hate this attitude of ppl, who think girls should do all the chores at home.

no one was more happy than me wen divya wonnnnnnn, yaaaaaaaa, i like rajat and divya's friendship, they both r very alike.
and i also liked how robbie answered those guys back, that he will teach them too.๐Ÿ˜‰ even though that dialogue was a little besharam. ๐Ÿ˜‰ but i guess all guys r like that to one another.
alaana accident was soo real, u do go blank, that happened to me too, i got drowned once wen i was a little, and guess how, while taking bath, u might be thinking that i was swimming in a pool or something but no, i got drowned in my bath tub ๐Ÿ˜†i was like 2 or 3 yrs old then, now i don't even fit in that bath tub anymore with my legs stretched out. i thought that was the last day of my life, and then i think my bro and counsin sis told my mom who were also bathing with me, or my mom just saw me drowned, and i had my hand on the side of the tub, and my mom pulled me out and yelled at me because she never used to let me go near water and i followed my cousin and bro who were older than me to the bath tub. aur towel mein lapait kar kar ek side pe khada kar diya ๐Ÿ˜† and i remember myself, standing there in a towel drenching, and thinking how danger a bath tub and water is while staring at the bath tub. now it seems funny. but at that time it wasn't cuz 2 of the kids had died with the similar accident as mine, i was lucky that my mom saved me, my mom still remembers it. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

anyways, back to the ff, i loved the both of the jokes, first one made me laugh sooooooo hard, women are crazy yaar, i agree with that, but for the second one it took me a little while to get that joke, but once i got the joke, i found that funny too. bechchara mr. oversmart, made a fool out of himself. ๐Ÿ˜†

and Pppp di, r u like the same height as kasturi too ๐Ÿ˜ฒ that's another shock, u have to shock me in ur every ff, last time, wen i thought u were the same age as mine, but was shocked to hear that ur married and this time, i don't know why, i always imagined u as some very tall girl, dunno why, i always think the opposite, i guess. continue soon.

love
harman ๐Ÿ˜›

Edited by Herman_4u - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Pragz only after reading this part I realised how much I missed ur ff! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Man....where were you Paddu??? I was waiting for your comments........you were like the last one to comment! But you are ven, because now I am late in replying to you...sorry!

Wow so many people coming in betn roka ๐Ÿ˜† ..its a huge crowd ๐Ÿ˜† Agree ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† and so many love stories in the making ๐Ÿ˜† . Looks like you are taking the future parts in a much adventourous way. Well, as of now, only 2 love stories....later there will be one more! And only the next 2 parts will be adventurous.........after that I will bring you all back to Delhi! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Gia is a smart cookie to come up with some idea of protecting kastu...I dont think u will bring in any misunderstanding as I know u dislike them. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณ True.....๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† I hate stupid misunderstandings and nothing of that kind will happen in the FF!

Alaana counting the times Ajay turned over shows that she too is getting interested in him ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...really looking forward for their love-story to pick up. Its gonna pick up in next part!

Roka romance in open air ๐Ÿ˜ ..was too good..how I wish the show creatives take a lesson or two from u. are you planning to make kastu getting kidnapped? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Next part seems to be filled with action..and the teaser seems a good start for AA love story! ๐Ÿ˜† Yep.....that accident will set things rolling! ๐Ÿ˜†

Please post soon. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: storyteller

wow praggzz that was an amazing part... whoaa... Thanksa bunch Fari!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Gia misguiding Ajay abt her and robbie to save kastu... ๐Ÿ˜† ... now I would love to have a friend like that ...a quick thinker who can save ur skin ๐Ÿ˜† That's right!! I would love to have one too ๐Ÿ˜† ... am loving Gia's character Very glad that you liked her! .. aur yeh kiyaa itnaaaaayyy saaray log .. becharay robbie and kastu.. Kya kare.....everyone just bunched up together leaving them disappointed! But still they managed well ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† of loved the scene where robbie lifts kastu up to ring the bell at the temple... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ so sweet... Robbie hai i itnaa sweet, ki kya bole!!! aur yeh kiya Ajay is falling for Alaana ๐Ÿ˜† .. chalo acha hay.. is tarah he will not be able to concentrate soo much on kasturi and robbie... As of now he is totally into Alaana ๐Ÿ˜† and this precap seems quiite interesting ... I wonder if Ajay will be the hero and resuce her and hence both will fall for each other ๐Ÿ˜ณHa ha next part will tell that!! ... am pretty sure though Ajay will not see robbie and kasturi sleeping like that,... I think u r building up some kind of misunderstandings here ??? ๐Ÿ˜† You are correct.........he will not see them so soon! ... nyways love the track... do take care and update when u can Thanks a bunch Fari!!! Its a pleasure to read your comments!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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