Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 73

Originally posted by: yummys

Ajay and Alaana are so cute. That is just adorable!! 👏 Hey Yams!!! I agree.......Ajay and Alaana are just very adorable! The differences between them, make them even more alluring!

The 1st joke was funny. Glad you liked it! 😃 BTW while RoKa were sleeping next to each other, didn't Alaana notice them since she was up early? No, she never came towards that side of the camp at all 😆

Last part was a nice romancing part of RoKa, this one is really cute for AA!
Nice Work! :) Thank you very much for taking the time to read it! 😃
-Yams

Originally posted by: sahib29

Pragg sorry for late yaar ...and maine read kiya hai ki tum bimaar thi ? ..kya huya ? ..ab kessi ho tum ??..i hope ab tum thee hogi 😃😳 Hey mannu........thank god tu aayi, thode waqt ke liye hi sahi! 😃. Mei ab theek hun! And hope you are doing well too!!

Both part bahit hi aache hai 😳👏.....God gia ne baccha toh liya kastu ko ..lekin kahi yee jhooth ..unke future meh problem na create kar de 😕..please essa kuch na karna ..cos kastu ko mandir meh kisi admi ne kaha bhi hai ki bahut mushkil aayegi raste meh ..toh mujhe toh wo mushkile saaf Nazar aa rahi hai 😭...essa na karna ..cos serial se toh hum sab bahut pareshan hai ....FF ki khushi hum nahi khona chahte 😭Ro mat Mannu.....abhi abhi koi gadbad nahi hogi!! Baad mei ke.....abhi kuch bataa nahi sakti! 😉 😆

Alanna aur ajay ka pair bahut hi cute hai ..tumhari FF meh RoKa ke baad mujhe yee pair bahut aacha laga 😳.Thanks dear! 😊 ..dono ke dil meh bahut armaan chipe hai ..kehne ki himat nahi 😆 ..and 73 times ajay ne alana ko murd kar dekha 😆 ..arre ab murd matt aa kar usse keh de 😆Alaana bahut bholi hai......lekin Ajay is very smart! But he likes her simplicity! ...i really like this jodi 😳 Thank you!!!! 😃 ..and jis tarah alana ko ajya ne bachaya ..mujhe uss waqt laga ki jab alana hosh meh aayegi toh ajay harbarahat meh keh dega ki main bahut pyar karta hoon ..tumhe kuch ho jaata toh mera kya hota ...par usne toh ..yee kaha ki aage se kehne se pehle sochunga ..arre budhu jaldi kar tu kuch karega toh kasturi aur robbie ka rasta saath hoga 😉😆 500 de kar alana ke saath toh baith gaya ..ab jaldi se bol daal jo dil meh hai 😉Itni jaldi nahi......abhi kahaani thodi aage toh badhne deh! Inki aur RoKa ki kahaani bhi aage badhegi! 😆 😆

Robbie kasturi scene mindblowing 👏 kitne din baad read kiya hai love scene 😳 ...yaar tum best ho ...hum toh pehle se hi pyar meh hai .. esse scene read karke humhe aur bhi pyar ho jaata hai teri FF se 😳Thanks mannu!!! 🤗 Yeh sach hai ke RoKa scene bahut dinon baad likha! 😃

and pragg mujhe bahut aacha laga ki robbie ne kasturi ko kaushi aur ajay ki discussion batane se rok diya ...cos office ki problem ghar aur personal relation meh aane se pyar ke rishte bhi kharab ho jaate hai Bilkul sahi kahaa!!! Aur yeh baat Robbie acchi tarah samajhtaa hai aur yahi baat usse aage bahut madad karegi!

Tumhara robbie bahut hi caring hai ... shayad main pehle bhi keh chuki hoon .😳He is a sweetheart!!!

Joke bahut funny the mujhe first joke bahut aacha laga 😆Thanks! 😆 😆 😆

everything is perfect .. pragg tum bahut aachi writter ho yaar ..tumne likha hai ki robbie meh jaddu hai ..lekin main kehti hoon ki robbie meh toh hai lekin tum bhi jaddu gar ho 😳...Thanks mannu.....lekin tum sab log ke padhne ki wajah seh aur encouragement ki wajah seh mei likh paa rahi hun! Isliye....thanks to you all!

ab tum kab post kar rahi ho next part ? ...jesse hi mujhe time milega aate hi read karungi 😃 take care 😳Theek hai, next part jab likhungi toh mei tumhe pm kar doongi! Have fun with your sister! 😃Manpreet

Originally posted by: robbii

hi praga..one more amazing part....👍🏼👍🏼 Hey Robbii.......thanks buddy!!! 😃

alaana's breakfast....tea and veggi noodles...yummmy..mouth watering... I swera, after writing it I felt very hungry too!!! 🤣

ajai paid only RS500...phew...lol i am ready to pay $500 to get a place in raft#2...😳😉

edited: oh....it is few RS 500 bills 😡😡...never mind sowdhaa manzoor hai.i can also add few to my $500..firbhee raft#2 seat kay liyeah sowdhaa sastha hai...😍 I agree.......raft# 2 has more valuable goods! 😉 Coyld have paid any amount to be in there! 😆 😆 😆

lol ladies ithnay bhee crazy nahee hai..par lover-boys zaroor stupid hain..i luv both the jokes.👏👏 I know......but I loved the assassin joke a lot when I heard it!!! 😆 😆 😆

pics of raft added more clear idea to ur FF👏👏 Oh Good! I am glad I added them!

robbie in knee length cargo ,cotton tee...kasturi in short denim shorts and tank top...ufff..my BP shooted up I believe you!!! 😆 😆 😆 ..thank god alteast u made the RoKa romance bit thandaa so that i can keep my BP in control...ufff... I had no option but to make it thanda......situation hi waisa tha!! 😆

ajai alaana set up was massth..if u little bit work on that pair i am sure they will zoom out.since ajai is eyeing alaana he cant appose RoKa luv👏👏 That is the general hope that if he falls for Alaana, he wull be fine with Robbie......but we have to see what will happen! 😊

last but not the least i would like my husband to enroll himself in robbie's romance coaching center..i will be thankful to u if u add the address of that center too. That was too funny 😆 😆 😆!! Lekin mujhe nahi lagtaa Robbie ko fursat hogi.....classes lene ke liye! 😉 😆

Originally posted by: storyteller

wow praggzz.. this part was sooo sweet Thanks Fari! I am very glad you liked it! ... am loving ajay and alaana's pair as well 😳 They are turning out to be quite adorable!!! 😛... soo sweet of alaana to prepare breakfast for everyone.... 😊 That's right.........and here we have to give credit to Devika for raising Alaana so well! 👏 👏 .... loved the jokes as well especially the assassin one... 😆 ... Thanks!!! 😆 😆 I love the assassin one too!!! do update soon Next update will be over the weekend! 😃 Fari

Originally posted by: knumnum

Ppp, the part was gud.... Thanks Krishi! 😊 I dont know why but I somehow didnt enoy RK in this as much as I enjoyed AA... OMG....why??? 😲 It feels terrible to see you upset with them! I feel ehatever happened offscreen has affected you and ofcourse we never get to see them onscreen together!!! Shockingly, I was more interested to see wats going to happen with AA and if they are going to talk again before saying gudnites😆😆😆 Rk's romantic parts seemed a bit more forced to me, Aaargghh even i dont know why iam feeling tat😆 ... **deep sigh**.........sorry it was not too satisfactory! But honestly, I loved RK in this part! As I writer I enjoyed writing both but as a reader I enjoyed reading RK more! In fact more than the previous part, I liked them here!!! In this part, finally they were a little close to each other and among strangers, Robbie was able to shed some of his inhibitions and they both were very romantic!!! In fact they were both romantic as well as playful and I felt that was very exciting!!! I felt the romance was soft and enticing! May be I have started to hope more for AA in ur FF😆...Wel np.....there will be plenty of AA in the future! 😆

Luved Divya's part... Why do I think tat Gia and Ronak are in luv??😉😆😆 I think they are going to be a pair😃 I luv them tooo, sooooo Iam all ready to read romance between RK, AA, RG😆...Hey bhagwan.....sabko jodi banaa degi kyaa?? 😆 As of now, officially there are only 2 jodis....RK and AA!

btw, I cud feel the excitement wen reading the rafting scenes of AA😳 It was written very well👏...Thanks Krishu!!! I am glad you enjoyed it!!! 😃

Wen u posting next part??? Likh sooooooooooooon😃...hmm......next part will be over the weekend, probably sunday again!

Originally posted by: stars_shine

Hiyya Pragz! Sowwie didn't notice you updated! But read it now! And it was a huge relief let me tell you! Well then I am glad I posted quickly!!! 😛

I was so scared for Alana after that teaser you posted, dunno if you read my comments on it, but I don't know swimming either! I did. And I could relate very well with what you were feeling because I don't know to swim either!!!! And drowing scares me a lot too! So I was really really really relieved when Ajay saved Alana! It is the same with me!!! The thought itself is very scary! But I had always planned for Ajay to save her and so I was not very worried for her 😆

Ok now to the rest of the part:

I loved the little race the rafts had and that Divya won! She sure seems to love competetions! She does!!! That girl lives and breathes competition!!! And now she has someone like Rajat as a companion......there is no stopping them! 😆 😆

OOOH and Ajay tipping the manager guy, LOL...just to be close to Alana! So cute! He knows how to use his money! 😉 😆 😆

But I must commend you on Alana's character! She knows the reality of the situation, just like Robbie did: the class and financial differences, as wella s the fact that Ajay is Robbie's boss. I am so glad you understood her dilemma.........its not as easy for her as it is for Ajay. In fact it will be more difficult for her than even Robbie! Buuuuut....as you know...love cannot be forced, it just happens! It sure does!!!! 😃 And the same will happen for this jodi too! 😳

I also loved the end bit, the romance was sooo cute! Thanks! Tried to keep it a bit low-key this time!

Ok, now update soon! I know you just did, and this is me being greedy, but anyways! That is too cute of you! 😆 Next part will be over the weekend!

Will look forward to more romantic scenes, which you're btw really good at! Thanks a lot for taking the time to read this and for the wonderful comments! 😊 Love, STAR

Originally posted by: *princess*15

Wicked Part👏Thanks mani!!! 😃 Btw, this fontcolor is very pleasant!

Such a cute part👏👏i love AA Jodi in your ff😳I am very glad that you liked the part and the AA! At first I was apprehensive that you all might not like any jodi but RK! But now, I am glad!!! 😃

Divya really is a tomboy lol😆She is a complete tomboy! Won't loose a chance to behave like a boy! 😆

Ajay bribed ooooooooooooo lolz😆Yes.......he was desperate!😆

This part was full of AA 😳love AA pair😳 but Allana is seedhi sadhi+bholi bhalli type girl😆 so now Ajay gotta confess😉 if he wants to😆 lolz offcource he wants to😆Yes, Alaana is very simple where as Ajay is all high-class, we have to see how these two will get along!

Love the jokes 😆heard 2nd joke before😆 but i didnt expected it'll be that one😆You did! That's good!

RK scenes was so cute😳and specially mumbai ke Heer-Ranjha lolz😆Mumbai ke Heer-Ranjha 😆 😆 Actually I will call them Delhi ke Heer-Ranjha!!!

looking forward to the next part😃 and phleez put some RoKa scenes😳 they are my fav you know lolz😆I know they are your favorites........will do! 😆

Originally posted by: lwfw

pragz nice one yaar 👏 👏 , Thanks Shara!!! 😃you have two differnt jodis and managed to bring their romance in different way 👏 👏 loved it 😳 You know, I am sooo glad to hear this from everyone! At first I was very concerned that you all might not like AA jodi, but I am glad it worked out!!! 😳

thanks for no cliffhanger too 😆 No! Just for you......I did not have a cliff-hanger! 😆 but when is the next part 😉 I am hoping to post by weekend...on Sunday
loved both your jokes too 😆 Thanks! 😃
hehe robbie met his match in kasturi 😳 He sure did!!!! 😆

Originally posted by: pragalbha

aww u don't know how to swim either? dats so weird! and scary, I know! So I' really glad u saved poor Alana! It is a very scary experience to be in the water and think you're going to drown...I hope it never happens to either of us!

Originally posted by: stars_shine

...I hope it never happens to either of us!

Thathastu / Amen 😃