Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93

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Zuzana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#701

Pragz only after reading this part I realised how much I missed ur ff! 😳

Wow so many people coming in betn roka 😆 ..its a huge crowd 😆 and so many love stories in the making 😆 . Looks like you are taking the future parts in a much adventourous way.

Gia is a smart cookie to come up with some idea of protecting kastu...I dont think u will bring in any misunderstanding as I know u dislike them. 😉 😳

Alaana counting the times Ajay turned over shows that she too is getting interested in him 😳 ...really looking forward for their love-story to pick up.

Roka romance in open air 😍 ..was too good..how I wish the show creatives take a lesson or two from u. are you planning to make kastu getting kidnapped? 😉 Next part seems to be filled with action..and the teaser seems a good start for AA love story! 😆

Please post soon. 😳

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Kay

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Posted: 17 years ago

#702

Prag what a teaser 😲

Oh no Alaanas drowing and no one has noticed yet 😕 quick Ajay save Alaana

Cant wait to read what happens next

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storyteller

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Posted: 17 years ago

#703

wow praggzz that was an amazing part... whoaa... Gia misguiding Ajay abt her and robbie to save kastu... 😆 ... now I would love to have a friend like that ...a quick thinker who can save ur skin 😆 ... am loving Gia's character.. aur yeh kiyaa itnaaaaayyy saaray log .. becharay robbie and kastu.. loved the scene where robbie lifts kastu up to ring the bell at the temple... 👏 👏 so sweet... aur yeh kiya Ajay is falling for Alaana 😆 .. chalo acha hay.. is tarah he will not be able to concentrate soo much on kasturi and robbie... and this precap seems quiite interesting ... I wonder if Ajay will be the hero and resuce her and hence both will fall for each other 😳 ... am pretty sure though Ajay will not see robbie and kasturi sleeping like that,... I think u r building up some kind of misunderstandings here ??? 😆 ... nyways love the track... do take care and update when u can

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#704

Paddu, Fari, I will answer your comments tomorrow, after I post the new part!! 😃
Next part coming up..........

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#705

Pre-cap : Robbie and party unexpectedly meet Raunak and Ajay on the trip. All of them group together for the weekend and they make it to camp Panther for camping. They visit a temple the first day and Robbie and Kasturi finally get to spend some time together!

PART-26 : HEARTS-A-FLUTTER

"Good Morning!".......Ajay hears a voice which makes him stop in his tracks. 😊 He had been dreaming about the owner of that voice for the better part of the night! 😳 He turns around and sees a beautiful Alaana looking so fresh and clean with wet open hair and a towel over her shoulders. Ajay looks at her shocked and says......"Aap already shower bhi le chuki hai?" 😲
"Haan"........replies Alaana with a smile...."Hamaare ghar mei sabko jaldi uthne ki aadat hai. 😊 Lagtaa hai aap abhi utthe hai. Aap jaldi seh mu-haath dho leejiye, dus minute mei chai ready ho jaayegi." 😛 Ajay stares at her admiringly 😳 and shakes his head. Walking towards her, he says......"Aap seh bahut kuch seekhna padhega!" 😛 At home he always had bed tea but after Alaana asked him to wash up he decides to do that!
Their conversation has awakened Robbie who was lying still with bated breath! 😲 😲 He has just then realized that they both had slept the whole night, outside! 😲 But once he hears Ajay walking away from them, he quickly gets up. He tries to wake Kasturi up but she is sleeping like a log and so he quickly covers her up with the blanket and slips away. When he gets a moment, he informs Gia about Kasturi and Gia goes to wake Kasturi up.

Meanwhile Alaana starts up the propane run stove and makes breakfast for everyone, tea with biscuits and veggie noodles! Alaana brings the noodles off the stove and shuts the stove off. She moves away a lock of hair from her face and looks up.......straight into Ajay's eyes that have been staring at her non-stop for a while now!!! 😳 Ajay is very impressed by everything she did! He cannot help but notice that while his sister and Gia were lazing around, Alaana had assumed the responsibility of feeding everyone and was already finishing up the process too!
Alaana looks away suddenly feeling very concsious of his look! ☺️ She could see that he was very attracted towards her, just like the way she was towards him! But the only difference was she was not making that attraction as obvious as he was making it! 😳 Well, he did not have anything to fear but she knew she did not have similar freedom because of the fact that he was her brother's boss and the social difference between them was something that could not be ignored!!
"Apne dil ko kaaboo mei rakh, Alaana!" she warns herself! Then she calls out to Divya and asks her to inform everybody that breakfast is ready. Divya sprints from tent to tent and informs everyone the same. Within a short while, everyone assemble to eat the tasty breakfast and are very impressed by Alaana's culinary skills! 👏

They all finish eating and clean up. They had all decided that today they were all going for rafting. And so they load their backpacks up with stuff such as an extra pair of clothing, cameras, batteries etc and start trekking down to the Rafting checkpoint office from where the journey starts. There is a shortcut from their camp to the checkpoint office and since the journey is downhill, they all cover it in an hour with Divya and Rajat racing down to see who wins........Divya wins! 😊
Alaana and her sisters are dressed in capris and cotton tees. All the guys are in knee-length cargoes and cotton tees themselves. Kasturi and Gia wear short denim shorts and tank tops. Seeing Kasturi dressed like that makes the Sabharwal sisters a little uncomfortable. 😕 Kasturi notices that they were looking more embarassed about her clothes than she herself was!!! For a moment Kasturi wonders if she should change but decides that she is going to wear whatever she is comfortable in! 😳

They all reach the office and the personnel on hand start off the pre-trip formalities such as equipping them with life jackets and safety helmets, getting them to sign consent forms etc. Alaana notices Ajay slip into the office and talk to the tour coordinator. Alaana is very tensed........she has a question that is bothering her very much! 😔 She wonders........"Bhaiyya ko batau yaa nahi?" But she does not want to be the one to be left all alone and miss all the excitement!!! 😒 Soon the rafts come up. Each raft can hold 7 people plus the navigator. There are another group of 5 noisy young people also scheduled for this trip and a few other couples and rafting enthusiasts.
The first raft arrives. Divya and Rajat are the first ones to get in, followed by Shivani and Gia. Kasturi starts after them when Robbie who is standing next to her, discreetly grabs her hand and presses it. Kasturi stops in her tracks. She realizes he is holding her back!! 😳 After Shivani and Gia, Raunak and Anand get in, followed by Sameer. He gets in and turns around for Alaana who is hanging around at the back! Some of the girls from the other group try to get in when the coordinator says..........."This one is full. Aapko agle raft mei jaana padhega."
Sameer looks on disappointed as Alaana stares at the next raft coming up to load more passengers. She is getting a little nervous. 😕 Ajay thinks that he should get Raunak to join Kasturi and Robbie to take Raunak's place in the raft, so he could be with Gia.....but before he can say anything, the raft starts to move! The next raft arrives and the group of 5 get in. Only 2 more people can get in. Kasturi looks at Robbie indicating that they should take this and starts walking. Robbie is about to follow her when he hears Alaana call out........"Bhaiyya!" He stops and turns to look at her. She was looking very tensed! He thinks she is not comfortable going with an unknown person like Ajay.......Robbie stands there confused as to what to do ......he turns to look at Kasturi who is about to get in and is staring at him! Hiding his disappointment, Robbie says........"Alaana, tum Kasturi ke saath iss raft mei jao. Mei aur Ajay agle waale mei aayenge......"
The coordinator who is looking at the paperwork interrupts him and says : Nahi Sir, both of you men in the same raft will raise some weight issues. Its best that you go in this raft!
Ajay says to Alaana : Arre, aap darr kyun rahi hai..........mei aapko khaa nahi jaungaa! 😛
Alaana smiles and says embarassed : Nahi nahi.....aisi baat nahi hai! 😊
Ajay : Toh phir mere saath chaliye na!
Alaana says hesitantly : Theek hai.......
Robbie asks Alaana : Are you sure, Alaana.......yaa mere saath....
Alaana says : No, its ok! I will go in the next one.
Robbie looks at her intensely trying to understand if she is genuinely ok or not. He sees her smile and he is reassured and he goes to get into the raft. They settle in. Both Robbie and Kasturi sit on the same edge, Kasturi in front of Robbie and the second raft takes off too. The third one arrives and the rest of the people get in. Alaana walks towards that raft slowly. Ajay, who is behind her, walks past the coordinator and says softly...."Thanks for the help!" He shakes his hand with the coordinator slipping him a few 500 rupee notes in the process and the coordinator winks back and says......."You bet, Sir!" 😉 😃 Ajay walks past Alaana and gets into the raft. He turns to her and extends his left hand towards her! Alaana hesitates a little but finally gives her right hand. The moment when they touch each other for the first time is etched in both their hearts and they stare at each other, both of them feeling the intensity of that simple touch!!!! 😳 😳 Alaana quickly looks away while he wraps his hand around her's and helps her into the raft!

Rules are explained. People sitting on either sides of the rafts have to row on the sides while the navigator in the center steers the raft in the right direction. Ajay and Alaana sit adjacent to each other, one on the left side and the other on the right side. As they start off, Alaana cannot take it anymore and turning to Ajay says....."Mujhe....mujhe tairnaa nahi aata!" 😔 Ajay is amused at the fear on her face and eyes and he says with a smile 😊 ......"No problem! Rafting ke liye zaroori nahi ke tairnaa aanaa chahiye! Don't worry at all! Aur phir aapne life jacket bhi pehnaa hua hai! 😊
The man in the couple sitting in front of them also assures her and tells her that both he and his wife did not know to swim too! Alaana relaxes and she looks at Ajay and smiles. Ajay says...."Aur phir mei hoon naa.......aapko kuch nahi hone doonga!" 😳 A blush spreads on Alaana's face at the way he has said that and she quickly turns away from him and tries to concentrate on what the navigator cum guide was saying ☺️☺️

The river starts to get rough and the pace of each raft increases. The rafts follow one another at a safe distance. In raft # 2, Kasturi and Robbie hit it off very well with the other group who were visiting from Mumbai. They all row vigorously to keep the raft from getting out of control. After a few minutes, they hit more placid waters and the group relaxes while the navigator is telling details of the history of those mountains and the river. The roaring river, splashing against the banks and rocks was deafening. Robbie leans towards Kasturi sitting right in front of him and asks........."Having fun?" 😛
Kasturi replies excitedly : I am loving it!!! Aur tum? 😃
Robbie says : I am loving the person loving it! 😳
Kasturi turns to look at him at that dialog and raises her eyebrows and says playfully........"Really?? How much do you love her?" 😳
Robbie winks at her and says : Paas aao toh batau! 😉
Kasturi throws her head to her left side biting her lip and looking at him with an expression of ....."Is that so??" Robbie holds her stare and raises his eyebrows kinda asking her...."Don't you want to know?". (Guys.....remember the rain scene when Kasturi is walking away from him and Robbie raises his eyebrows and kind of questions her, this expression of Robbie is similar to that)
Kasturi moves back slightly towards him and Robbie says....."Aur paas!" 😳
Kasturi stops a smile that was spreading on her lips and she moves back more closer to him. Robbie glances at the rest of the group, nobody was looking at them. He extends his left hand and wraps it tight around Kasturi's waist and pulls her back even more close to him till she is leaning right against him! Kasturi wraps her left hand on top of his and holds it tight afraid that their balance might slip.
Robbie leans down and whispers into her right ear........"Daro mat, tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga!" 😳
Kasturi turns to look into his eyes. It was so exciting to be held by him so close and knowing how much she meant to him! And she could see the same excitement in his eyes too!!!
Suddenly they hear Roshan tease (one of the guys in the Mumbai group) : Haye, haye....Heer-Ranjha ki jodi ko toh dekho! Sabke beech mei bhi romance soojh rahaa hai! Bhai wah, koi inse seekhe, romance kaise kiyaa jaata hai!! 😉 😆
Kasturi quickly turns away from Robbie turning red with embarassment! ☺️ ☺️ Robbie is embarassed too but quickly recovers and says........"Kal seh hi classes shuru kar rahaa hun, seekhne aa jao!" 😉 Everyone laugh in reply. 😆 😆 😆

Soon the river broadens and all the rafts come adjacent to each other! Robbie glances at both the rafts to check up on his sisters. He is very happy to see Alaana look very relaxed and smiling! 😃 And Divya.........she had no time to look at anyone, she was having a blast with Rajat by rowing the heck out of the river! 😆 Shivani is very excited too and was enjoying the trip very much! Soon a spirit of competition sets into the groups and they all compete to reach the next rapid first!!
Competition was what Robbie, Divya and Rajat lived for, and raft #1 and raft # 2 row fiercely! They work hard, very hard to beat each other and in the process leave raft # 3 behind. Nobody wanted to compete from raft # 3. Robbie gives Divya a tight run but she and Rajat together win the race!! 👏 👏 👏 They high-five each other on the victory and shout excitedly!! 😆 Robbie has a wide grin on his face......the happiness on Divya's face at having the won race was worth loosing the race a million times!!! 😃

Soon raft # 1 and # 2 pass through the narrow pass, turn around and move forward. When raft # 3 is attempting to pass the narrow pass, the rafters are a little slow and the raft gets caught in the rapid and is hurtled towards the river bank!! 😲 The impact of the raft roughly hitting the tree trunk on the water edge will push Alaana off her seat and she will fall back into the water, head first!!! 😲 All the rest of the passengers including Ajay, are busy controlling the raft from toppling over and nobody notices her going over!!!! Fear floods Alaana's mind and heart and she splashes her hands around wildly!!!! 😒 😔 The water was entering her ears, nose, mouth and lungs as she was trying to breath desperately and shout out at the same time!!!! She is sinking deeper and suddenly her mind goes blank with fear and shock!!! 😲😲😲 And she is about to pass out when a set of hands grab her feet and another set of strong hands, grab her hands and pull her up!!!

Ajay pulls her up, shocked at the accident! 😲😲😲 He calls out to her......."Alaana, Alaana!!!" But Alaana does not respond! He quickly turns her over and making her lie on her stomach against the edge of raft, he presses her back till Alaana coughs up all the water she had swallowed!!!! After some violent coughing she turns around, her eyes still closed and tries to sit on the raft! Ajay quickly sits besides her and holds her from slipping down again!! She just sits there limp with shock!!! 😲 😲 Everyone is relieved to see her come to her senses, specially Ajay! For a few seconds he was completely overwhelmed with worry! 😔

Alaana slowly gets her focus back and she sees that the raft has been pulled out of the overhanging tree branches and was slowly making its way back into the mainstream flow. She slowly turns around and looks at Ajay right next to her! He was staring at her!
He asks concernedly : Are you OK?
Alaana nods her head.
Ajay says : Agar aap theek ho toh, if you don't mind...........meraa haath nochnaa band karengi? 😛
Alaana looks at him puzzled 🤔 and follows his glance down to her hand. She was clutching his left hand so fiercely with her right hand that her nails were digging deep into his skin and had already left deep marks!!!! 😲 She releases his hand instantly, shocked at what she had done!!! 😲 Ajay winces in pain and shakes his hand! Alaana turns to look at him shocked...........she had been digging into his skin for 3 minutes before he had raised a flag!!! 😲
She whispers : I am so sorry!
Ajay smiles in reply : Koi baat nahi!! 😊
Alaana says again : Thank you very much!!
Ajay says : You are very welcome!
And then adds brightly : Agli baar, muh kholne seh pehle sau baar sochungaa! 😃
Alaana again looks at him puzzled!
Ajay says : Haan, trip ke start hothe hue, meine kahaa toh zaroor tha, ke "Mei hoon naa.......aapko kuch nahi hone doonga!" Lekin aap itni jaldi mujhe aazmaayengi, iskaa andaaza nahi tha mujhe!!
Alaana laughs slightly and Ajay joins her!! 😆 😆 😆 He is glad she is recovering! They continue sitting like that with his arm around her till they reach the end of the trip.

(Check out some rafting photos)

After the trip, everyone share their experiences and everyone gets very concerned with what happened to Alaana!! 😲 😲 Specially Robbie and her sisters! It is decided that no more excitement is needed for Alaana and so they all decide to do something mellow for the rest of the day. There is a museum and a couple of waterfalls that they all visit for the rest of the day. Then they have dinner and make it back to the camp.
Sameer tries to give company to Alaana but she had no ears or eyes for him! She could not see or think beyond Ajay! 😳 She is advised to turn in and take rest. And so Alaana is walking towards her tent when she turns to look at Ajay who was standing in a corner leaning against a tree and seeing her go. 😳 She smiles and thanks him with her eyes again and Ajay wishes her goodnight from far. She goes to her tent and Shivani accompanies her as she is very tired and wants to turn in too!

A campfire is built and the rest of them change into bedclothes and come and sit around it! Divya is disappointed! She had wanted to play a game but nobody seemed to be in the mood for a game! All of them will be just chilling out when the talk turns to the excitement of the day and Kasturi says to all of them
Kasturi : Congratulations guys! Tum log aaj race jeet gaye! 👏 👏 😃
Gia says : Why won't we win?? With 3 girls in that raft, we were bound to win!
Rajat says : Excuse me!!!! What about us?? Didn't we have any role to play??? 😲
Raunak says sarcastically : Rajat bacche.....you will learn it soon enough! With girls and women around they are always the winners! You cannot fight them!! 😉 😆 😆
Gia says : Excuse me.....what is that supposed to mean?? 😛
And a friendly gender argument arises! They argue it out and Robbie says......."Let me illustrate this situation better with a joke!!" And he tells them a joke.......

The FBI had an opening for an assassin. After all the background checks, interviews and testing were done, there were 3 finalists: two men and a woman.
For the final test, the FBI agents take one of the men to a large metal door and handing him a gun they tell him........'We must know that you will follow your instructions no matter what the circumstances. Inside the room you will find your wife sitting in a chair . . . Kill her!!'
The man says, 'You can't be serious. I could never shoot my wife!'
The man is told, 'Then you're not the right man for this job. Take your wife and go home.'
The second man is given the same instructions. He takes the gun and goes into the room. All is quiet for about 5 minutes. Then the man comes out with tears in his eyes and says.........'I tried, but I can't kill my wife.'
He is told 'You don't have what it takes. Take your wife home.'
Finally, it is the woman's turn. She is given the same instructions, to kill her husband. She takes the gun and goes into the room. Shots are heard, one
after another. They hear screaming, crashing, banging on the walls. After a few minutes, all is quiet. The door opens slowly and there stands the woman, wiping the sweat from her brow.
'This gun is loaded with blanks' she says. 'I had to beat him to death with the chair.'

MORAL:
Women are crazy. Don't mess with them!

All the guys burst out laughing 🤣 and Raunak and Robbie give each other a high-five!! The joke was very funny! The girls wanted to laugh too but they control themselves. And faking anger Gia says 😡 .........."We might be crazy but atleast we are not stupid like you lover-boys!!! Let me tell you a joke now!" And she tells another joke

One night a guy took his girlfriend home. As they were about to kiss each other goodnight at the front door, the guy started feeling a little in the
mood. With an air of confidence, he leaned with his hand against the wall and smiling, he said to her "Honey, would you give me a kiss?"
Horrified, she replied, "Are you mad? My parents will see us!"
" Oh come on! Who's gonna see us at this hour?" He asked grinning at her.
"No, please. Can you imagine if we get caught?"
"Oh come on! There's nobody around, they're all sleeping!" .
"No way. It's just too risky!"
"Oh please, please, I love you so much?!?".
"No, no, and no. I love you too, but I just can't!" .
"Oh yes you can. Please?" .....................
"No, no. I just can't"
"I'm begging you ... "
Out of the blue, the light on the stairs went on, and the girl's older sister showed up in her pajamas, hair disheveled, and in a sleepy voice she said,
"Dad says to go ahead and give him a kiss, or I can do it. Or if need be, mom says she can come down herself and do it, but for God's sake and all our sakes....TELL HIM TO TAKE HIS HAND OFF THE CALLING BELL!!!

The girls burst out laughing this time 🤣 and the argument continues a little longer and then everyone settles down to discuss other things. While Robbie and Kasturi are sitting with everybody else, they only have each other in their thoughts. They keep glancing at each other and suddenly Robbie mouthes a "I love you" - i.e only his lips are moving, no sound is coming out. Kasturi blushes and lowers her eyes. ☺️☺️☺️ She worries that her state of mind will become too obvious to everyone and so quickly gets up and excuses herself and goes to her tent.
After a while Robbie also gets up and walks in the direction of his tent. But from there he goes searching for Kasturi. He finds her leaning against a tree and staring at the moon showering silvery light on the whole earth. She hears Robbie coming and turns her head to see him. He slowly walks up to her and stands next to her. They are looking at each other. 😳 While the outside environment is peaceful and serene in the moonlight, their hearts are beating wildly and it is a riot inside!!!
Kasturi turns to him and whispers : I love you too! 😳
Robbie asks : Kitnaa? 😛
Kasturi says mischievously : Paas aao toh batau!
Robbie chuckles at her repeating his dialog! 😆 😆 😆 He puts his arms around her waist and draws her closer. Kasturi puts her arms around his neck and Robbie asks again......"Kitnaa?"
Kasturi : Kuch prashnon ke jawaab diye nahi jaate, liye jaate hai! 😉
Robbie smiles his trademark dimpled smile and says : Tum jaanti ho mujhe kis tarah ke jawaab pasand hai! You know me too well!!! 😃
And he leans towards her to get the answer for his question of how much she loved him!!! 😳 😳

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago

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Yams

@HobbitButt

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Posted: 17 years ago

#706

Ajay and Alaana are so cute. That is just adorable!! 👏

The 1st joke was funny. BTW while RoKa were sleeping next to each other, didn't Alaana notice them since she was up early?

Last part was a nice romancing part of RoKa, this one is really cute for AA!

Nice Work! :)

-Yams

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Manpreet

@sahib29

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#707

Pragg sorry for late yaar ...and maine read kiya hai ki tum bimaar thi ? ..kya huya ? ..ab kessi ho tum ??..i hope ab tum thee hogi 😃😳

Both part bahit hi aache hai 😳👏.....God gia ne baccha toh liya kastu ko ..lekin kahi yee jhooth ..unke future meh problem na create kar de 😕..please essa kuch na karna ..cos kastu ko mandir meh kisi admi ne kaha bhi hai ki bahut mushkil aayegi raste meh ..toh mujhe toh wo mushkile saaf Nazar aa rahi hai 😭...essa na karna ..cos serial se toh hum sab bahut pareshan hai ....FF ki khushi hum nahi khona chahte 😭

Alanna aur ajay ka pair bahut hi cute hai ..tumhari FF meh RoKa ke baad mujhe yee pair bahut aacha laga 😳...dono ke dil meh bahut armaan chipe hai ..kehne ki himat nahi 😆 ..and 73 times ajay ne alana ko murd kar dekha 😆 ..arre ab murd matt aa kar usse keh de 😆...i really like this jodi 😳 ..and jis tarah alana ko ajya ne bachaya ..mujhe uss waqt laga ki jab alana hosh meh aayegi toh ajay harbarahat meh keh dega ki main bahut pyar karta hoon ..tumhe kuch ho jaata toh mera kya hota ...par usne toh ..yee kaha ki aage se kehne se pehle sochunga ..arre budhu jaldi kar tu kuch karega toh kasturi aur robbie ka rasta saath hoga 😉😆 500 de kar alana ke saath toh baith gaya ..ab jaldi se bol daal jo dil meh hai 😉

Robbie kasturi scene mindblowing 👏 kitne din baad read kiya hai love scene 😳 ...yaar tum best ho ...hum toh pehle se hi pyar meh hai .. esse scene read karke humhe aur bhi pyar ho jaata hai teri FF se 😳

and pragg mujhe bahut aacha laga ki robbie ne kasturi ko kaushi aur ajay ki discussion batane se rok diya ...cos office ki problem ghar aur personal relation meh aane se pyar ke rishte bhi kharab ho jaate hai

Tumhara robbie bahut hi caring hai ... shayad main pehle bhi keh chuki hoon .😳

Joke bahut funny the mujhe first joke bahut aacha laga 😆

everything is perfect .. pragg tum bahut aachi writter ho yaar ..tumne likha hai ki robbie meh jaddu hai ..lekin main kehti hoon ki robbie meh toh hai lekin tum bhi jaddu gar ho 😳...

ab tum kab post kar rahi ho next part ? ...jesse hi mujhe time milega aate hi read karungi 😃 take care 😳

Manpreet

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#708

hi praga..one more amazing part....👍🏼👍🏼

alaana's breakfast....tea and veggi noodles...yummmy..mouth watering...

ajai paid only RS500...phew...lol i am ready to pay $500 to get a place in raft#2...😳😉

edited: oh....it is few RS 500 bills 😡😡...never mind sowdhaa manzoor hai.i can also add few to my $500..firbhee raft#2 seat kay liyeah sowdhaa sastha hai...😍

lol ladies ithnay bhee crazy nahee hai..par lover-boys zaroor stupid hain..i luv both the jokes.👏👏

pics of raft added more clear idea to ur FF👏👏

robbie in knee length cargo ,cotton tee...kasturi in short denim shorts and tank top...ufff..my BP shooted up..thank god alteast u made the RoKa romance bit thandaa so that i can keep my BP in control...ufff...

ajai alaana set up was massth..if u little bit work on that pair i am sure they will zoom out.since ajai is eyeing alaana he cant appose RoKa luv👏👏

last but not the least i would like my husband to enroll himself in robbie's romance coaching center..i will be thankful to u if u add the address of that center too.

Edited by robbii - 17 years ago

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pragalbha

@pragalbha

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#709

Mannu, Robbii....will answer you in detail later but just wanted to mention that you did not get the 500 rupees part, right! I said 'few 500 rupee notes'! Few could be 5, 10, 15 or 20!

By saying a few I wanted to create the impression that Ajay never checked his money as that was not important! He could have just grabbed whatever was available on his wallet and handed it over to the coordinator! And they could have been any amount! 😃

Hope its clear now! And thanks for liking the part guys!!! 😃

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storyteller

@storyteller

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#710

wow praggzz.. this part was sooo sweet... am loving ajay and alaana's pair as well 😳 ... soo sweet of alaana to prepare breakfast for everyone.... 😊 .... loved the jokes as well especially the assassin one... 😆 ... do update soon

Fari

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