Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 70

OOPs... for me, horrible weekend, sorry for the late reply Pargzs...just cant seem to get my act together..😕😆

okies to the Part: well i have to say officially the Queen of Romance writing is back!!!👏 I'll start with that part cuase i found it to be very subtle yet intense, passionate embraces moon lite skies, mmmm lovely setting for roka, totally loved it... its the magic of the moments that you have wonderfully captured into amazing words... stand up and take a bow!!! i remember you had said that in Kashmakash you werent happy with the way that camping trip had penned out, well if that were the case (which when you said it didnt agree, but now have to say that i see the subtle changes and you seem more relaxed in writing this camping part out then in kashmakash..) I have to say that even in a years time your writing has only improved to raise your own bar of high standards...

I'll start with one of my fav. characters Ajay, for some reason i just find his character flaws, and his quiet personality just very appealing, I'm looking forward to his love story more so then robbie's Yeah tell me about it!!! (thats a huge credit to you!! You've protrayed him soo soo very well..) and ajay looking back at alaana, was was exactly how i think he would react.. i really hope to see more dialogues btw ajay and robbie and ajay and Alaana, (though i find it really hillarious that Ajay is falling in love with his nemesis's sister) talk about stuck in a hard place.poor Ajay..

Gia was amazing she's a truly quick thinker, in my wildest imagination i wouldnt have come up with that excuse.. way too go gia.....

kasturi boy when Ajay was walking towards her i was like will ajay blast her for lying... i was expecting a huge showdown. but didnt happen...😆

Robbie's a man of Honor i loved how he told kasturi not to tell him the conversation she overheard btw her mother and Ajay.. he's a man of integrity. Furthermore, i feel Both robbie and Ajay live life with the same rules but just are playing differnt games.

the ending part had me on the edge of my seat pulling out my hair, please dont make us wait too long for the next part...that would tortureous...

But my prediction is some how Ajay wont see them together cause then that would ruin Ajay's whole trip and then he wont be in the mindset to be wanting to get close to Alaana.(just my feelings..will be waiting.....)

take care..

robina

Originally posted by: lwfw

pragz : let me ask a question 😆
what is the inspiration for FF and scenes 😆 😉 Sorry....I did not understand the question 🤔.................😉 🤣
you can PM too 😉 😆 although i know the answer i would like to confirm 😆Ha Ha.....since you know the answer.......😛

👏 👏 very nice part yaar and you spiced it up with last scene ended once again at a high BP cliff hanger BP cliffhanger! Next part I promise, there will not be a cliff hanger! I will end it smoothly.........😃
dear please join ekta's creative team dear you will stop at the perfect cliffhanger and TRP will zoom 😆 😉 Will definitely keep that in mind! 😆 😆

hehe loved the count of 73 😆 He is really smitten by her!!!
robbi and zadugar kasturi 😳 Both of them together are just magical!!!
love the robbie character in here yaar 😳 Me too!!! 😆

waiting for the next part. but yup please do take care of your health that is important 😃 Next part.......I first thought I will post it by Sunday evening, but it is slightly delayed, it will be now Monday evening. But I will post a teaser! 😃

Originally posted by: Kay

Hey Prag 😃 Hey Kay! 😃

Glad you are feeling better 🤗 Thanks dear!

This part was amazing Prag.....so detailed, i could imagine everything 👏 Very happy to hear that!!

The new charactor introduction was cool.....Raunak can be busy showing them around instead of trying his luck with Kasturi 😉 😆 😆 Poor Anand......trying to get in between them 😆 He is never gpong to give up!!! 😆 😆 And I agree about Raunak............but something is going on, he is also trying to get close to Kasturi!

Ok Prag im glad that Ajay has his mind distracted else where......him and Alaana might make a good pair 😉 but im not satisfied with the reason Gia gave ....please dont use this for future misunderstandings.....i hate it when friends are accused wrongly of coming in between lovers As of now, I have no plans to create misunderstandings between them both but future.................don't know! 😳

So Ajay and Alaana do share the same feelings....him constantly turning around, and her counting it as 73 times 😆 😆......i was trying to imagine Ajays curly hair blowing in the wind 🤣 🤣 OMG.........what a sight that would be! 🤣 But he does not have curly hair in my FF! He has hair the way he used to have at the start of the serial!

Whats the police part for prag?....in somthing going to happen next 😕 Yes! Something will happen........in the part after the next!

Liked the temple part.....Robbie so sweet and naughty 😉 😆 lifting her up...but teasing her at the same time 😳 He is such a sweetheart!

The whole part did flow Prag 😃 Thanks!! 😃 I was really concerned about that!

and what a way to finish the night 😳......finally RoKa get to spend some quality time alone.....im sure the degrees outside must have shot up suddenly 😳 😆 😆 They sure did!!! If there was snow on the mountain, I am sure that would have melted too! The romance was mindblowing 😳 😆....hope the aas paas creatures and other living things had their eyes and ears closed 😉 😆 Thanks Kay...........glad it could make that impact on you!

I understand its hard to write the romantic stuff......hats off to you.....you really do write them so well, including every detail 👏 👏 👏 Thanks!!! 🤗
awwww RoKa lying in eachothers arms fast asleep 😍 😍 Glad RoKa can understand each other...all it took was Robbie to look at Kasturi and realise she is tensed 😳 I am soooo happy that you noticed that!!!! He is really tuned into her!

But ye kya Prag........what a cliff hanger 😲 😆 why do you stop at these moments when RoKa are in close positions? 😆......hope Ajay dosnt see them......he better make a u-turn and go back to the tent 😡 😆 😆 leave RoKa alone......they are sound asleep 😳 I agree cliff-hangers kuch zyaada ho gaye.............next part will end smooth! 😃

Waiting for next part 😃 Kay

Originally posted by: stars_shine

PRAGZ!!...well glad to hear ur feeling better! Hey Star!!! Thank you very much for the concern and wishes! 😃

thnchu for the wonderful and looong part! read it last night but it was late so i cldn't comment! Tried to make it as long as possible! 😆

ok...wow! GIA!!! 😃 ...she's soooo sweeet....taking the limelight off of kastur like that....aww....loved her for that...but why do i think that it mit ecreate probs in the future? just a feeling! LOL A very valid feeling............but nothing of that kind will happen as of now! 😛 Maybe in the future.........😉

aww and AJAY looking back 73 times...LOL...had me ROTFL
and Alana noticing dat!....n chipku Sameer...LOL Ajay is really falling for her and Alaana herself cannot help feeling attracted to such a handsome man!
aww I think Raunak is developing feelings for Kas! Not good! Yes he is............and there is a reason for that........will be revealed soon!

Robbie helping her ring the mandir bell....cho chweet...i cldv't gone up and hugged him right there for that! Star.........I would have too!!! 😆

ooooooh but u ended in the wrong place!!!...noooo....guess what? I actually had a dream about that!!!No, you did'nt!!! 😲 😆 LOL...but in my dream Kas left Robbie sleeping there and Ajay never saw her!...Ok....good! 😆 but i kinda want him to see them...ya he'll be mad but atleast he'll know! I can't wait for them to tell everyone! because when people don't know it creates probs! Very true.........and he will come to know in a little while.......but first someone else will come to know!

LOL...now update soooon! Love, STAR ⭐️Thanks for the wonderful comments Star!!! 😃

Originally posted by: Herman_4u

hey Ppp di, God Hermoo........I have not had this lengthy comments from you in a while!!! 😃 I sure am very glad to see them today!!!
gia is very smart , man. kya plan banaya, but seems like this plan will be a hurdle in their way later on. ajay will be obviously upset with her for lying to him. Actually by the time Ajay comes to know about this........something eslse will happen! i now like alaana too 😃 i really admire the way, how she was just herself, and didn't try to be one of them by dressing up like them, or showing enthusiasm about going to temple. i admire it like the way ajay does. 😆 Well, I am very very glad!!!! 😃 She is a very simple and sweet person and I have tried hard to project her so!!! she even counted how many times he luked back to luk at her. 😆 Shows how much he is smitten by her! poor ajay, seems like, she's realizing his feelings towards her. and i think she might also kind of like him, not like roka, but she might attracted to him cuz she was also luking at him. You are absolutely right!!! They will not be like RoKa but they will be very much in love too! and this trip is very exciting, man. wen they were going up, i was getting excited just by reading it, imagine wat'll happen, if i really go there. 😛 You should do it!!! Writing it was also a lot of fun! I enjoyed it very much! 😃 it'll be so much fun, man. some other guy also have crush on alaana, voho. i'm glad, that alana, is receiving something in ur ff, that she never got in the serial. even her own husband was interested in someone else. Very well said Hermoo.........😆 😆 😆 She deserves way more than the bimbo image they have given her in the serial!!! anyways, chutki way to go girl. Well, we all know why you like chutki, don't we???? 😆 and robbie picked her up and called her shorty, 😆 that was very funny, reminded me of my mom, even she asks me to do her work, wen she has to lift off something that's placed on a higher shelf. I know what you are saying..........it had happened with me and my mother too!!! 😃 and that baba's part was also very nice. kya sachmuch mein yeh log future dekh sakte.Haan, hote hai! 😊I myself had the good fortune to meet some babas and swamis! and kasturi is soooooooooo girlish, i swear, choti choti batein pe rone legati hai, she did the same in that comedy theater. Actually she is very concerned.........several things have been bothering her! and when she finally heard them from the mouth of the baba, she just could not take it anymore! but she's cute at the time, u know how she said, jo enke liya la rahe hain vohi mere liya le ayaa, at the restaurant, i thought that was very cute, and very chalot kudi, 😉 She sure is very cute 😆 ghar pe bhi sabaki naak mein dum kar diya, her parents are fighting because of her 😆. OMG Harman.....you cannot blame her for that!! 🤣 Poor thing........she does not even know her parents fight about her!!! seems like it's really the first time she's receiving love from anyone, i mean, u know how jp said that she'll go out luking for that love from someone else. seems like that's robbie , and that's why she's too afraid to lose him. don't u think i'm talking too much, Actually you exactly got the point!!!! Ajay surely loves her a lot but still not as much as she needs! i have nothing else to do now, that's why, i'm bringing in everything even from the previous parts. 😆 that i didn't tell u cuz lack of time. I am glad you share your thoughts with me!!! 😃 You are amazingly insightful for a 16 year old!!! 👏 👏 and u know, at times robbie is very sensible, but then he completely losses it wen he sees kasturi. but it makes me happy wen kasturi steps back first, chalo kabhi kabhi to vo samajhdahri ki batein karti lol.Both of them know their limits and I am glad about that! bechchara akela mountain ke ooper ayaa, 😆 and no one was interested in accompanying him except kasturi, if i was part of that trip, i would have been in divya's group, or alaana's. i like them more. and seems like more fun there. alright, i'll stop now. 😆 now, u better not get sick again, luk at me, i'm threatening u not to get sick wen i never told u to get well soon, yaar mujhe baad mein pata chala , that u were sick, sorry haan. well, i really hope that u don't get sick again. aur meri tera tandrusat ho jau 😆 and continue soon.Thank you very much for the wonderful wishes and all the concern!!! 🤗 😃 love harman 😛

Actually by the time you read it, I added the extra part. Only Krishi, Mani, Payal had missed it! 😊

Originally posted by: GAPS

Hi Pragalbha dii....Hey Jaanu!! 😊

Just read u are not well.... how are u feeling now and do take good care...😊Thanks sweety! I am feeling much better now! Coming to the part.... Good gods it was another lil bomb of talent i shud say.. every ounce of the line in proper proporsion.. Ahaa..........thanks for that compliment!!! 😃 Made me go a flight in the world of imagination.. IT WAS SUPERB and undoubtedly ROCKING..!!You are too kind with words, Jaanu!!!

Pragalbha dii lemme congragulate u for having such a cute Gia and tell u that the new juniors who came to the schl a week ago call me Gia ...😳 So i'm kinda ..u know PROUD reading Gia so brainy😳 Ahhh do they??? That's cute 😃 And I really like Gia a lot too!!! Well you, me and Star are going to confuse the users with our Gia, Sia and Pias......🤣 It was the braniest thing anyone can come up in just 1 micro second😳 GIA.... MWAH u r a sweeet heart..😳She really did not have much time to think!!! 😊

Ajay... Hi Ajay....... Are u ever going to tell Allu that U love..er.. i mean u admire her? If yes Do it now or never..😆 She'll get a better guy than u if u stop turning 73 times😆 That is too cute!!!!🤣 But I agree he needs to do someting before everything is out of control!!! Now & is lucky for Ektha nd 3 is my lucky no in a way..😆

OK fine Allu u really are a genius and i just admire u for what u are..👏 Just cant finda reason to hate u in anyways...😳 and BEWARE 'A guy in the hand is better that two in the bush.'😆What a way to say that............🤣

The new new guys are gonna do some job.l.. atleast our Ajay will confront something😳

Okkie coming to the Robbie Kasturi couple.. only heaven knows how to describe them.. Tell me recite my Chemistry scheme i may do..But to describe my feelings abt ROKA... Neva damn i can do it... So not wasting any more time...They are sizzling..............always, in every FF!!! 😳 😉 😃

pragalbha dii ok if there is a tiny space up in CS3 just lemme know.. i'll come up the whole way with my tent..😉 I know u'll neva lemme go in .. so i booked CS2😳Theek hai............apne exams khatam kar aur aajaa!!! 😉 😆

And do i smell a mysery somewhere??? A kidnapping i heard.. i wanna see how RoKA re getting involved in.???Yep, you did smell it right!!! You will know in the part after the next!

OK i'm still a kid to comment whole part.. So just HATS OFF Dii.....It was excellent job done with extra ordinary craftsmenship and quality.... A neatly cut diamond..😳 Yes you are still a kid and sorry that I could not make it more kid-friendly 😳.........varnaa the adults reading this FF will be mad at me!!! 😆 😆

KEEP rocking dii and Thanks sweetheart!

PS: ALLLU .. where are u man?? It is UR duty to get Ajay out of RoKa's way... so just get up before its too late...😉Aahh Jaanu........excellent guess 😉 😆

Dii am I gonna see anything by-chance as a Gia-Ro affair??? i know Ro is extra decent... but i dont beleive u😆 Just kidding...Nah.........Gia's has something else going on in her life 😉, you will come to know about it soon.........

LUV U
JAANU

Originally posted by: nrasheed

OOPs... for me, horrible weekend, sorry for the late reply Pargzs...just cant seem to get my act together..😕😆 Oh No! Robina......what happened??? And inspite of that you posted your next part 👏 👏. I will read it soon and comment!

okies to the Part: well i have to say officially the Queen of Romance writing is back!!!👏 OMG Robina............that is a HUGE compliment!!!! Thanks a lot 😳...not sure how much I deserve it!!! 🤗 I'll start with that part cuase i found it to be very subtle yet intense, passionate embraces moon lite skies, mmmm lovely setting for roka, totally loved it... its the magic of the moments that you have wonderfully captured into amazing words... stand up and take a bow!!! Thank you very very much!!!! I am extremely glad you liked it!!! 😳 😃 i remember you had said that in Kashmakash you werent happy with the way that camping trip had penned out, well if that were the caseActually I meant it more in another FF of mine called Bhagya Rekha..........I had a picninc situation in that FF that did not turn out the well I wanted it to! 😛 (which when you said it didnt agree, but now have to say that i see the subtle changes and you seem more relaxed in writing this camping part out then in kashmakash..) I have to say that even in a years time your writing has only improved to raise your own bar of high standards...Thank you!!! What else can I say when such a compliment comes from you who writes an amzing FF herself! 😳

I'll start with one of my fav. characters Ajay, for some reason i just find his character flaws, and his quiet personality just very appealing, Very well said.........he has a quiet personaltiy! I'm looking forward to his love story more so then robbie's Yeah tell me about it!!! Ooooh!!!! Wow, now that is really a huge compliment!!! 😳 😃 (thats a huge credit to you!! You've protrayed him soo soo very well..) and ajay looking back at alaana, was was exactly how i think he would react.. i really hope to see more dialogues btw ajay and robbie and ajay and Alaana, (though i find it really hillarious that Ajay is falling in love with his nemesis's sister) talk about stuck in a hard place.poor Ajay..Much more will happen betwen Alaana, Ajay and Robbie.............I am sure you will get very involved with them soon! 😃

Gia was amazing she's a truly quick thinker, in my wildest imagination i wouldnt have come up with that excuse.. way too go gia.....She is a smart cookie and a great friend!!! 😆

kasturi boy when Ajay was walking towards her i was like will ajay blast her for lying... i was expecting a huge showdown. but didnt happen...😆Showdown will happen a little later and what a showdown it will be!!! 😕

Robbie's a man of Honor i loved how he told kasturi not to tell him the conversation she overheard btw her mother and Ajay.. he's a man of integrity. He very much is...............just like your Robbie and Devika!!! 😳Furthermore, i feel Both robbie and Ajay live life with the same rules but just are playing differnt games. Very true, they are simply at different ends ot the pole! If they join forces, they will achieve a lot!!! 😛

the ending part had me on the edge of my seat pulling out my hair, please dont make us wait too long for the next part...that would tortureous...I will try to update ASAP!

But my prediction is some how Ajay wont see them together cause then that would ruin Ajay's whole trip and then he wont be in the mindset to be wanting to get close to Alaana.(just my feelings..will be waiting.....)Good prediction.........😆 Thanks a lot Robina for taking time to read this inspite of a busy schedule!!! Really appreciate it! 😳

take care..robina

Friends...............next part is slightly delayed and hence here is a teaser!!!

Thanks Star for this idea!!! 😃 I am following your style here! 🤗

Pre-cap:

The impact of the raft roughly hitting the tree trunk on the water edge will push Alaana off her seat and she will fall back into the water, head first!!! 😲 😲 😲 All the rest of the passengers are buy controlling the raft from toppling over and nobody notices her going over!!!! 😲 Fear floods Alaana's mind and heart and she splashes her hands around wildly!!!! 😲 😲 The water was entering her ears, mouth and lungs as she was trying to breath desperately and shout out at the same time!!!!

Aaaargghhhh Wat a teaser is tat??? I wont be soooo shocked if Kas is drowning instead of Alaana😆😆

Chalooo yaar, Iam luving Ajay-Alaana couple very much now... Dont bring a heartache😆, My small heart wont be able to bear it😆

U didnt tell me wen u r gonna post it??? Kab post kar rahi ho???😆 and abt the missing part, It was already there wen I read it dear... So I didnt miss anything, But thank u for informing us😃