Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93

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pop77

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Posted: 17 years ago

#681

prags kaun sa part ki baat kar rahi ho..tumne jo update kiya hai vo highlight kar or bold font kar..

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stars_shine

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Posted: 17 years ago

#682

PRAGZ!!...well glad to hear ur feeling better!

thnchu for the wonderful and looong part! read it last night but it was late so i cldn't comment!

ok...wow! GIA!!! 😃 ...she's soooo sweeet....taking the limelight off of kastur like that....aww....loved her for that...but why do i think that it mit ecreate probs in the future? just a feeling! LOL

aww and AJAY looking back 73 times...LOL...had me ROTFL
and Alana noticing dat!....n chipku Sameer...LOL

aww I think Raunak is developing feelings for Kas! Not good!

Robbie helping her ring the mandir bell....cho chweet...i cldv't gone up and hugged him right there for that!

ooooooh but u ended in the wrong place!!!...noooo....guess what? I actually had a dream about that!!! LOL...but in my dream Kas left Robbie sleeping there and Ajay never saw her!...but i kinda want him to see them...ya he'll be mad but atleast he'll know! I can't wait for them to tell everyone! because when people don't know it creates probs!

LOL...now update soooon!

Love,
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Harman

@Herman_4u

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#683

hey Ppp di,
gia is very smart , man. kya plan banaya, but seems like this plan will be a hurdle in their way later on. ajay will be obviously upset with her for lying to him. i now like alaana too 😃 i really admire the way, how she was just herself, and didn't try to be one of them by dressing up like them, or showing enthusiasm about going to temple. i admire it like the way ajay does. 😆 she even counted how many times he luked back to luk at her. 😆 poor ajay, seems like, she's realizing his feelings towards her. and i think she might also kind of like him, not like roka, but she might attracted to him cuz she was also luking at him. and this trip is very exciting, man. wen they were going up, i was getting excited just by reading it, imagine wat'll happen, if i really go there. 😛 it'll be so much fun, man. some other guy also have crush on alaana, voho. i'm glad, that alana, is receiving something in ur ff, that she never got in the serial. even her own husband was interested in someone else. anyways, chutki way to go girl. and robbie picked her up and called her shorty, 😆 that was very funny, reminded me of my mom, even she asks me to do her work, wen she has to lift off something that's placed on a higher shelf. and that baba's part was also very nice. kya sachmuch mein yeh log future dekh sakte. and kasturi is soooooooooo girlish, i swear, choti choti batein pe rone legati hai, she did the same in that comedy theater. but she's cute at the time, u know how she said, jo enke liya la rahe hain vohi mere liya le ayaa, at the restaurant, i thought that was very cute, and very chalot kudi, 😉 ghar pe bhi sabaki naak mein dum kar diya, her parents are fighting because of her 😆. seems like it's really the first time she's receiving love from anyone, i mean, u know how jp said that she'll go out luking for that love from someone else. seems like that's robbie , and that's why she's too afraid to lose him. don't u think i'm talking too much, i have nothing else to do now, that's why, i'm bringing in everything even from the previous parts. 😆 that i didn't tell u cuz lack of time. and u know, at times robbie is very sensible, but then he completely losses it wen he sees kasturi. but it makes me happy wen kasturi steps back first, chalo kabhi kabhi to vo samajhdahri ki batein karti lol. bechchara akela mountain ke ooper ayaa, 😆 and no one was interested in accompanying him except kasturi, if i was part of that trip, i would have been in divya's group, or alaana's. i like them more. and seems like more fun there. alright, i'll stop now. 😆 now, u better not get sick again, luk at me, i'm threatening u not to get sick wen i never told u to get well soon, yaar mujhe baad mein pata chala , that u were sick, sorry haan. well, i really hope that u don't get sick again. aur meri tera tandrusat ho jau 😆 and continue soon.

love
harman 😛

Edited by Herman_4u - 17 years ago

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#684

Krishi, Payal........I am talking about the part that starts with
"Both the groups reach the Camp Panther main office. Its almost 3 PM.........."
and ends before the blue message that I was giving in the brackets. Somehow that did not get posted before! 😊

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pop77

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Posted: 17 years ago

#685

prags i read again i think i don't missed anything..or just bold that part which update later..
i am waiting for sunday night..

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Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: pop77
prags i read again i think i don't missed anything..or just bold that part which update later..
i am waiting for sunday night..

same here Ppp... I checked again wat u said but looks like I read tat temple/mela waala trip😃 If u r talking abt something else then let us know😆

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Harman

@Herman_4u

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Posted: 17 years ago

#687

@Pp di, the blue message was there wen i read it. 😳 so i think everyone have read the entire part.

love
harman 😛

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pragalbha

@pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#688

Payal, Krishi and Hermoo.............I have italicized the part I missed yesterday!
Maybe now it will be clear to you all. But never mind.........this is not that important. I casually mentioned that I had missed it before. 😃

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: robbii
hi pragal..huuummm..after reading robbie's magic i forgot every thing what i read 😳😳....cuz of the magic of ur writing👏👏.woffoo..i have to read again to write my comment... Woh Robbie ka kamaal hai!! 😉 😆 Jab woh paas mei hotaa hai, toh baaki aur kuch yaad nahi rehtaa!!
i luv the way u explained ...out side the camp in the moon light when robbie sat beside kasturi on her right and u keep on narrating along with their position left ,right...that gave a very clear idea to the reader like me to imagine the scene..Thanks a lot! 😊 But I always fear that I might be overdoing it and actually take away the magic in the part by explaining too much! previously also in one of ur part....i dont remember which part it is..when robbie goes to meet kasturi while she was dancing...the way he sat down on the floor and kasturi sat beside him..ur narration along with left side right side pose was gud...once in the bus too when they r returning back from a village trip..👏👏👏Thanks Robbii!!! 😛

ajai turned and looked alaana 73 times...poor man he might have got sprain in his neck..sprain in the neck!!!! 🤣 i luv the way u portarying alaana..to be frank i like alaana more than kasturi...it is worth turning back and looking alaana 73 times...👏👏👏Oh wow.....I am very happy that you like her that much!!

if robbie want to carry kasturi to ring the bell let him carry her.we luv to read that... i hope that time she was wearing short skirt..😳😉😉OMG....you guys are too much! No she was not wearing a short skirt! ...par isliyea thum nay kasturi ko shorty banadiya...poor kasturi..and u made robbie to tease her too🤣🤣.🤣.....hamaari serial ki kasturi ithnee bhee short nahee hai lol..she can ring the bell on her own...Actually, iss mandir mei bell bahut upar bandha tha 😉 😆

u r camp panthan map was very gud and gave a clear picture of the location...i like the wooden hanging brigge between the temple and CS3.i would like to read a romantic part while robbie-kasturi,ajai-alaana have a 15min walk on it..Ahaa.......romance while walking on the bridge....ok will think about it! 😃

gia said to ajai she luv robbie...the saint said to kasturi...teraa raasta kaantnseh bhara hoga..these two things giving me an ill oman...to this story..Good guess..........but I can't reveal anything yet!!! 😃

last but not the least robbie ka magic amazing...i hope he will show his magic frequently almost all the parts...no..no.. no..dont think like that... i am not at all greedy...😳😉😊oh yeah????? Not greedy, huh??? Lets see how far he can go!

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Jaanu

@GEETH20

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#690

Hi Pragalbha dii....

Just read u are not well.... how are u feeling now and do take good care...😊

Coming to the part.... Good gods it was another lil bomb of talent i shud say.. every ounce of the line in proper proporsion.. Made me go a flight in the world of imagination.. IT WAS SUPERB and undoubtedly ROCKING..!!

Pragalbha dii lemme congragulate u for having such a cute Gia and tell u that the new juniors who came to the schl a week ago call me Gia ...😳 So i'm kinda ..u know PROUD reading Gia so brainy😳 It was the braniest thing anyone can come up in just 1 micro second😳 GIA.... MWAH u r a sweeet heart..😳

Ajay... Hi Ajay....... Are u ever going to tell Allu that U love..er.. i mean u admire her? If yes Do it now or never..😆 She'll get a better guy than u if u stop turning 73 times😆 Now & is lucky for Ektha nd 3 is my lucky no in a way..😆

OK fine Allu u really are a genius and i just admire u for what u are..👏 Just cant finda reason to hate u in anyways...😳 and BEWARE 'A guy in the hand is better that two in the bush.'😆

The new new guys are gonna do some job.l.. atleast our Ajay will confront something😳

Okkie coming to the Robbie Kasturi couple.. only heaven knows how to describe them.. Tell me recite my Chemistry scheme i may do..But to describe my feelings abt ROKA... Neva damn i can do it... So not wasting any more time...

pragalbha dii ok if there is a tiny space up in CS3 just lemme know.. i'll come up the whole way with my tent..😉 I know u'll neva lemme go in .. so i booked CS2😳

And do i smell a mysery somewhere??? A kidnapping i heard.. i wanna see how RoKA re getting involved in.???

OK i'm still a kid to comment whole part.. So just HATS OFF Dii.....It was excellent job done with extra ordinary craftsmenship and quality.... A neatly cut diamond..😳

KEEP rocking dii and

PS: ALLLU .. where are u man?? It is UR duty to get Ajay out of RoKa's way... so just get up before its too late...😉

Dii am I gonna see anything by-chance as a Gia-Ro affair??? i know Ro is extra decent... but i dont beleive u😆 Just kidding...

LUV U
JAANU