Originally posted by: MishtyShona
You did complete justification to the story and characters. I am happy that Prerna realized her mistakes and took steps to rectify it. Kukki is the hero of this story and love the fact that she behaves her age and is her father's angle since he has only her and none. The last morning scene was cute. Each ordering the other to close the curtains. Kukki is the real Cupid. Loved her playful and naughty side. This plot had so much potential, but alas the CV's threw away a real diamond for glass shards! Anyways loved reading your TS. It was realistic and believable. Much much much better than what paid professional writers are churning out in the name of plot!
Happy New Year Mishty🤗
@bold- this is ❤️ Keeping things a bit close to reality is what has been the biggest point for me ....I have troubled Ankie so much asking if ye theek.hai so theek hai.. When you as a reader feel its realistic and believable .. ohh I reach on 7th sky 😳
Apni Kukki is Dad's angel like how Ankie imagined her in her prompt and I did in my other forever pending story..
I am soo soo happy you liked it. Thank you so much for always sharing your thoughts that only encourage me to get better🤗