THE MIRROR - A PreRish TS (ch2, Pg10, Uptd. 31/12/2019) Completed - Page 10

Originally posted by: MishtyShona

You did complete justification to the story and characters. I am happy that Prerna realized her mistakes and took steps to rectify it. Kukki is the hero of this story and love the fact that she behaves her age and is her father's angle since he has only her and none. The last morning scene was cute. Each ordering the other to close the curtains. Kukki is the real Cupid. Loved her playful and naughty side. This plot had so much potential, but alas the CV's threw away a real diamond for glass shards! Anyways loved reading your TS. It was realistic and believable. Much much much better than what paid professional writers are churning out in the name of plot!

ah what a lovely ending. very satisfying.

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

koto degree angle? 180?? 😆

angel!

Originally posted by: MishtyShona

angel!

Originally posted by: MISTInew

Prompt kab dogi?

Main prompt?? Uske experts Ankie and Cassi hain 😳.. amazing prompts le ate hain..

Originally posted by: 456

Awww,I don't have words.i have a big smile on my face while reading this.😃 Ab kya kahu sun ji,tussi great ho 🤗

Prerna ko finally apni mistake realize ho hi gayi.& i love this kukki.she says that she is dada's angel.l love this & rishbh he is love❤️

& their happy family Now i always keep this image of their happy family in my mind.

A imperfectly perfect happy family ❤️

Aur aap ke toh kya kehne, tussi great ho.kinna shona gift ditta tussi, sannu new year Pe❤️

Bas ehdi hi changi changi stories dete raho, assi logan nu🤗

Tohanu jhappi pan nu jee kar da h🤗

❤️❤️

Thank you much Pooja...A smile on your face brings a wide one on mine.. thats one the best compliments.. 🤗

Yeah they are nowhere perfect individually but together they look picture perfect atleast in our stories they do

I am not getting enough time these days so really really sorry for the delay..

Happy New Year 2020 to you too

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Thank you so much meenakshi for putting my chaotic thoughts in the most beautiful manner. The best part of this story is that Kuki behaves like that of her age, having expectations fr her parents just like any other child which unfortunately we didn't get in the show. The father daughter scenes were amazingly awwdorable. And the biggest of all Prerna's expectations as a mother's and her realisation of what is to be important to her as she is a mother was amazing. Thank you for putting my prompt into words. And also making my two little pulaos into the world bestest biriyani ever. what a gifted writer you are. Love you. More prompts your way 🤗

Jahanpanah🤗

This coming from you is ❤️ It means so much

Your prompt and your help was just perfect to create this Biryani.. Thank You..

While finding the Prompt the other day I realised how many PMs we exchanged just for 2 stories.. so thank you for all your time and help 🤗

Originally posted by: cassiop

Perfect..

so Prerna didn't have to do much to maanao Kukki coz Bajaj the Papa can't let his little girl hater her Mom.. parvarish goals how lucky can Prerna be to be a part of this "Imperfectly Perfect Family" that you have created in your story..

Ankie that surgey scene is just ❤️.. I could imagine the whole thing while reading.. each and every detail.. his failed attempts to put the thread through the needle 😳

And when Kukki says Main Dad ki angel hu and God aapko new angel de denge .. oh my God.. I love this Kukki.

Her ather asked her to apologise and she did..every little detail like Bajaj looking at his rashes in the mirror..

And how cutely you have used the scene from show where Kukkki selects suits for his success party and he asks for Kukki's help.. tab he asks her when her color preference changed.. something similar happened here with milk flaour it seems.. may be I am just over thinking but I could see the relation..

I can go on and on..

Beautiful work girl..🤗

Cassi you are gonna make.me cry 🤗

Thank you so.much for showering me with your love expressed in.such beautiful words..

You must try writing stories..

Originally posted by: cassiop

@bold- yohoooo.. this means more stories our way

You two are perfect partners in crime..

PS.. whats the status on other story you working on with Avni and Niyati?

@bold- I am not sure if I am her perfect crime partner or not... but she has been for me.. learnt so much in such a short.span of time.. aise hi thodi jahanpanah banaya hai

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

😆 i hope she feels the same too. 🤣

It was great working with her.

The other story with Avni and Niya is progressing well. But will take time to come as Niya is busy.

@bold-Hey bhagwaan.. you have doubts on me 😒

Ye kya pad lia maine 🥺

Working with you was/is/will be my pleasure and beautiful learning experience 🤗