Mired Into Whist: PreRish/AnuPre Dark FF (Teaser for ch-3 pg 14) - Page 9

Chapter 1:

The words are weaved so beautifully that's it's a treat to read every sentence. ❤️

So it was Anurag!!? My money was on Bajaj.😲 that was really surprising.

What's up with the injection and why is Anurag injecting it himself? Something weird is going on.

And man! Prerna is actually with RB and betraying Anurag.

The mystery and the premise is killing me. 👏

Riya.

Chapter 2:

My oh my, Rishabh is Anurag's brother. 😲

The descriptions are so gorgeous that it literally puts you in a trance so you could imagine every. single. detail.

So Anurag was somehow responsible for RB's wife's death and now he is seeking revenge?

I have to say I am loving the RB here. He is so vindictive and yet so innocuously vulnerable, teetering on the edge of falling into darkness yet somehow relating to Prerna. Like dude, the perfect grey character? I am all in! ❤️

Waiting for the next update.

Riya.

Originally posted by: vena.cava.

Just caught up on this and my goodness, your use of vocabulary is so vivid. You paint such a descriptive picture for the reader. But I have to say your Rishabh is my favourite, the unhinged, maddening, frustrated, angry man. I love it so much!

Thank you so much! This means a lot to an amateur writer. I have always fantasized RB the same way and feel ecstatic to find others acceptive towards him.

Originally posted by: MR21

Intense. Rishabh is taking revenge for his wife's death. But what did Anurag do? As they are brothers, he wouldn't hurt his brother's wife willingly. If he did, what can be the reason? Prerna helped Rishabh but looks like she wants to save Anurag here. But can she save him? Will Rishabh kill Anurag?

Waiting for the next update. Please do update soon.

Well, more of it will be revealed in chapter 3. You will realise the background of this scene and a little peep into the past. Obviously, Anurag Basu is a good boy who does no bad but sometimes it doesn't apply to practical life for what we intend to. There's lot more to unravel. Hope you like it!

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Oh my gosh. Give me a moment. Or several actually. I got sucked in so bad and wanted everything to unravel quickly because it made me sit upright and guess the dynamics.

Monsters of past never sleeps. They just let you live for a moment and come rushing back to destroy you more than the last time.

This filled me up with indescribable emotions and everything is so raw and intense here.

Looking forward to reading more ♥️

Damn, this has raised bars for me to work better than the last time. The Dynamics are slightly complicated but I hope it will all set in a beautiful picture as we proceed towards the end.

I would love to know the emotions in words particular that the line filled you with. I have a great magnet for words and newly found emotions to discover. In your case, at least I might have a name to that feeling and understand the feel.

I believe in raw, passion, dark and drunken love where everything is so demanding that it might consume you whole in the process. After all nothing is unconditional.

Originally posted by: aryapdane

So I finally got the time to comment..😃

Firstly, what the hell is going on? Rishabh and Anurag are brothers? Where is Sneha? Did Anurag kill menaka? This is too intriguing. The plot is so fresh.

Secondly, your writing. The way you weave words. The effortless way you weave a web. The suspense and thrill was maintained throughout. You're an incredible writer.

Thirdly, update soon.

Love,

Aparna

Ahha, I await for your comments like a buzzing bee.

Everything is fragmentary lighter version of what's in store for three of them. The consuming darkness is yet to cease their movements. Yes, Rishabh and Anurag are brothers but background to it will be revealed later. Sneha is very much alive and hearty. About Anurag and Maneka, I guess you have to wait until I unravel.

This feels ecstatic to hear that coming from such a refined writer herself. You weaved me into the storyline of Tender encounters. I really love the series.

Hopefully soon!

Originally posted by: Tranquility07

Damn, this has raised bars for me to work better than the last time. The Dynamics are slightly complicated but I hope it will all set in a beautiful picture as we proceed towards the end.

I would love to know the emotions in words particular that the line filled you with. I have a great magnet for words and newly found emotions to discover. In your case, at least I might have a name to that feeling and understand the feel.

I believe in raw, passion, dark and drunken love where everything is so demanding that it might consume you whole in the process. After all nothing is unconditional.

I think you’d do a great job and I’m really excited to see how everything unfolds.

So I’ll try to be articulate and get my jumbled thoughts in some coherent form. At the risk of oversharing, the monsters clung on to me for the past 9 years and no matter how hard I try to shrug them off or suppress the hold they’ve over me, they find me in my weakest moments and take away a part of me. They fill my head with these “should have done this or shouldn’t have done that” and I just felt that line reverberate in my head.

I am sorry if that sounded like gibberish. I’m really groggy and have had a crappy night.

Oh absolutely. Love comes with its own set of conditions in some way, shape or form and we’d be simplifying it if we just label it as unconditional.

Damn I love this AnuPre VS Rishabh Bajaj! Take your revenge RB, drown them in their own blood.

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

I think you’d do a great job and I’m really excited to see how everything unfolds.

So I’ll try to be articulate and get my jumbled thoughts in some coherent form. At the risk of oversharing, the monsters clung on to me for the past 9 years and no matter how hard I try to shrug them off or suppress the hold they’ve over me, they find me in my weakest moments and take away a part of me. They fill my head with these “should have done this or shouldn’t have done that” and I just felt that line reverberate in my head.

I am sorry if that sounded like gibberish. I’m really groggy and have had a crappy night.

Oh absolutely. Love comes with its own set of conditions in some way, shape or form and we’d be simplifying it if we just label it as unconditional.

I can feel that, past has always a memory struck where the conflict of 'done that or shouldn't' stays suffocating. Everyone has that. Trust me, I too have moments I feel broken about but being alive and still fighting the demons is the true motivation to keep those monsters at bay. Monsters of pasts never sleeps but with your insides fighting against they get tardy and retire to let you live momentarily.

True that, no love is unconditional as we call so. It's rather we begin to give in to it's demand that it eventually feels unconditional.

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Damn I love this AnuPre VS Rishabh Bajaj! Take your revenge RB, drown them in their own blood.

Rishabh Basu actually.They all are on the same page anyway.