Mired Into Whist: PreRish/AnuPre Dark FF (Teaser for ch-3 pg 14) - Page 8

Originally posted by: lovefk

OH MAN OH MAN! Like I can't even.........This was so raw and gritty I had chills as I was reading this, didn't want it to ever! I'm so intrigued about Maneka's death and the pain that has festered within Rishabh, quite frankly I just cant bring myself to like Prerna although here we don't know much about her but still I harbour this deep dislike for the character in general.

That outburst of RB's emotions though, your RB is so brutal and fierce yet that moment of vulnerability, that moment of losing control so poignantly written definitely struck a chord with me. Can't wait to read further as to how Anurag is involved in the mess. AAAANNDDD "BHAAIII" yikes don't know how I feel about that at all, let's see though because your narrative is so gripping!

This feels great to know that you could relate with the characters and emotions so intensely. Maneka's death is a turning point for Anurag and Rishabh's relationship and holds very important role for the doom to engulf them all, specifically Prerna.

It's ohkay! I can understand your frustrations with silly Prerna working on screen, has effected our mindset a lot. I won't say she is different but this Prerna is mature and better than her in many ways. You will realize with time.

RB is a classic example of how destructive and mending a broken heart could be. As you know, many readers have chosen for Star crossed PreRish it would be even more amusing to see him fall back for love. Thank you so much! I hope the language was fine enough to understand and maintain the flow. I later realised of the blunder I made

Originally posted by: Rexana19

To be very honest, I still don't understand what is going on here. The only thing I gathered was that Rishabh and Anurag are clearly brothers, Prerna is Anurag's wife and Anurag had a hand in a tragedy or a conspiracy that ended in Rishabh's wife-Menka's death. And both Menka and Prerna were with child. The rest is....jumbly...confusing....but very intriguing. Update soon.

-Love, Rekha

Is it due to the complexity of the language or the twists involved?

All of what you figured out is the track for now rest is yet to reveal. I made the initial chapters a bit more confusing than it should be so that when I begin with revelation it falls rightly in brain.

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Not sure how I feel about the fact that RB is a Basu here. 🤓

Anyway, the narrative is gripping and loaded with mystery. The last chapter revealed that RB's wife died and A had a significant involvement in the latter's death. And Prerna is siding with Rishabh against her husband. Still too many questions remain open. I wonder what's the future of PreRish.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Hahaha, being a Basu isn't a crime. It's individuality of character as a whole which strengthens them. RB here is RB re-defined in my fiction lining the grey shade as a character.

Thank you! I was slightly scared when I revised the chapter, for many of the readers couldn't understand and were confused by the mystery unveiling. I won't call it Prerna siding against her husband 'cause she isn't but there is a back story I would involve in chapter 3 describing why Prerna chose to betray Anurag and what was PreRish's Plan B actually.

I have conducted a poll for this story previously asking readers if they want a Star crossed PreRish or AnuPre story and the bars were high for star crossed PreRish as lovers, of course. So they are star crossed lovers here but with tinge of beauty to it.

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: Tranquility07

Is it because of the language? I am sorry if it had the confusing aura, I actually intended to let readers have a face of 'he' as per their wish before I actually reveal who he is—the reason for excessive use of pronoun before shifting to noun for reference. As the scenario clearly describes of their home and particularly their room. I guess you missed the paragraph or the line. Through he-&-she 's action it was evident that they are Anurag and Prerna when revealed later. It's Anurag who injected Prerna, no doctor involved until now.

Hahaha, vampires seems a great idea though I recently started watching Vampire Diaries and have very little knowledge about them. But I will try writing an OS on them, at least, soon.

Thank you for taking out your time!❤️

Just caught up on this and my goodness, your use of vocabulary is so vivid. You paint such a descriptive picture for the reader. But I have to say your Rishabh is my favourite, the unhinged, maddening, frustrated, angry man. I love it so much!

Intense. Rishabh is taking revenge for his wife's death. But what did Anurag do? As they are brothers, he wouldn't hurt his brother's wife willingly. If he did, what can be the reason? Prerna helped Rishabh but looks like she wants to save Anurag here. But can she save him? Will Rishabh kill Anurag?

Waiting for the next update. Please do update soon.

Oh my gosh. Give me a moment. Or several actually. I got sucked in so bad and wanted everything to unravel quickly because it made me sit upright and guess the dynamics.

Monsters of past never sleeps. They just let you live for a moment and come rushing back to destroy you more than the last time.

This filled me up with indescribable emotions and everything is so raw and intense here.

Looking forward to reading more ♥️

Originally posted by: najma123

I got it after you told me. Your language is beautiful, it is just that, vivid descriptions are incomprehensible for someone with an unimaginative brain like mine. So I didn't understand. What about Twilight? Every girl reads Twilight in her early teens. 😆 And then, we go on to bash it saying it is Oh So Cheesy and stuff

Thank you!❤️

Naah, I haven't read twilight ever. In fact, I ain't into reading stuffs and it's just limited short stories and prose I get myself involved in.

So I finally got the time to comment..😃

Firstly, what the hell is going on? Rishabh and Anurag are brothers? Where is Sneha? Did Anurag kill menaka? This is too intriguing. The plot is so fresh.

Secondly, your writing. The way you weave words. The effortless way you weave a web. The suspense and thrill was maintained throughout. You're an incredible writer.

Thirdly, update soon.

Love,

Aparna

Teaser:

This is so full of suspense and my fingers are literally itching to complete this review and jump onto the next.

Is it RB or Anurag?

The writing is exquisite btw.

Riya.