Mired Into Whist: PreRish/AnuPre Dark FF (Teaser for ch-3 pg 14) - Page 7

Wow... It's awesome ... Really enjoyed reading it ❣️❣️thanks for the PM☺️

Thanks for the pm. Its so intense, the pain anguish everything felt so real.❤️

I just read Chapter 1! The only thing I understood was that P is with B and they are teaming up against A. I really couldn't gauge anything else. Are they in a hospital? Or is she dreaming? Or she narrating a story? And then she's in a washroom? Anurag was putting the injection? Have they come for some check up? I like your writing and the way you describe, but I think if you tell what the setting is in the beginning it would help, and maybe use nouns instead of pronouns at least in the beginning. Coz I only understand He and She, and idk whether that's the doctor or what.

I'll read Chapter 2 very soon! But if you can try explaining what's happening here. 😆 The injection thing so seemed like she's being turned into a vampire. Trust me, if you write that, where RB is some hot vampire, I'd love it. Please please. Someone write a vampire story on them. 😆

OH MAN OH MAN! Like I can't even.........This was so raw and gritty I had chills as I was reading this, didn't want it to ever! I'm so intrigued about Maneka's death and the pain that has festered within Rishabh, quite frankly I just cant bring myself to like Prerna although here we don't know much about her but still I harbour this deep dislike for the character in general.

That outburst of RB's emotions though, your RB is so brutal and fierce yet that moment of vulnerability, that moment of losing control so poignantly written definitely struck a chord with me. Can't wait to read further as to how Anurag is involved in the mess. AAAANNDDD "BHAAIII" yikes don't know how I feel about that at all, let's see though because your narrative is so gripping!

To be very honest, I still don't understand what is going on here. The only thing I gathered was that Rishabh and Anurag are clearly brothers, Prerna is Anurag's wife and Anurag had a hand in a tragedy or a conspiracy that ended in Rishabh's wife-Menka's death. And both Menka and Prerna were with child. The rest is....jumbly...confusing....but very intriguing. Update soon.

-Love, Rekha

Originally posted by: ShumiM

At first I must confessed that I still can't grasp what exactly is happening there?their(prerna,anurag and rishab)actual equations with each other.so I'll hold myself to say anything at this stage.but definitely the story is very intriguing.plz update soon. Thanks 👏

Is it because of the language or the story sequences and episodic reference is confusing? I am sorry if it's for the language. I would edit it after I post chapter 3.

Thank you for liking the story!

Originally posted by: isha123asya

Wow... It's awesome ... Really enjoyed reading it ❣️❣️thanks for the PM☺️

Thank you so much!❤️

Originally posted by: mitras

Thanks for the pm. Its so intense, the pain anguish everything felt so real.❤️

Glad you could feel the palpable emotions. It feels great to know. Thank you so much!❤️

Originally posted by: najma123

I just read Chapter 1! The only thing I understood was that P is with B and they are teaming up against A. I really couldn't gauge anything else. Are they in a hospital? Or is she dreaming? Or she narrating a story? And then she's in a washroom? Anurag was putting the injection? Have they come for some check up? I like your writing and the way you describe, but I think if you tell what the setting is in the beginning it would help, and maybe use nouns instead of pronouns at least in the beginning. Coz I only understand He and She, and idk whether that's the doctor or what.

I'll read Chapter 2 very soon! But if you can try explaining what's happening here. 😆 The injection thing so seemed like she's being turned into a vampire. Trust me, if you write that, where RB is some hot vampire, I'd love it. Please please. Someone write a vampire story on them. 😆

Is it because of the language? I am sorry if it had the confusing aura, I actually intended to let readers have a face of 'he' as per their wish before I actually reveal who he is—the reason for excessive use of pronoun before shifting to noun for reference. As the scenario clearly describes of their home and particularly their room. I guess you missed the paragraph or the line. Through he-&-she 's action it was evident that they are Anurag and Prerna when revealed later. It's Anurag who injected Prerna, no doctor involved until now.

Hahaha, vampires seems a great idea though I recently started watching Vampire Diaries and have very little knowledge about them. But I will try writing an OS on them, at least, soon.

Thank you for taking out your time!❤️

Not sure how I feel about the fact that RB is a Basu here. 🤓

Anyway, the narrative is gripping and loaded with mystery. The last chapter revealed that RB's wife died and A had a significant involvement in the latter's death. And Prerna is siding with Rishabh against her husband. Still too many questions remain open. I wonder what's the future of PreRish.

Waiting for the next chapter.