Mired Into Whist: PreRish/AnuPre Dark FF (Teaser for ch-3 pg 14) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Tranquility07

Rishabh Basu actually.They all are on the same page anyway.

Oops yeah, Rishabh Basu 😛

Originally posted by: Tranquility07

I can feel that, past has always a memory struck where the conflict of 'done that or shouldn't' stays suffocating. Everyone has that. Trust me, I too have moments I feel broken about but being alive and still fighting the demons is the true motivation to keep those monsters at bay. Monsters of pasts never sleeps but with your insides fighting against they get tardy and retire to let you live momentarily.

True that, no love is unconditional as we call so. It's rather we begin to give in to it's demand that it eventually feels unconditional.

True. We need to soldier on and we are braver than we gives ourselves credit. That constant struggle seems like a battle initially but then with the passage of time it just becomes an unconscious fight but one day, I hope it gets better. For all of us ❤️

I think we are wired to be a little selfish, have heaps of expectations especially when we’re in love and come with our own share of insecurities. Laying conditions and boundaries then becomes inevitable.

OMGG...this is awesome..beyond that..'monsters of past never sleep' . I'm totally using the quotes you use in your fictions in my every day language.Where do you get such awesome quotes and dialogues from. Loved it. Please continue soon.

lots of love❤️

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

True. We need to soldier on and we are braver than we gives ourselves credit. That constant struggle seems like a battle initially but then with the passage of time it just becomes an unconscious fight but one day, I hope it gets better. For all of us ❤️

I think we are wired to be a little selfish, have heaps of expectations especially when we’re in love and come with our own share of insecurities. Laying conditions and boundaries then becomes inevitable.

The battle is unending but I am already a winner for not giving in, that's what hits me hard everytime an incident like such over power me. We all have expectations to fulfill and demand, without it we have nothing to give or earn. It's completely meaningless in fact to spend yourself into something than investing into something. A great change altogether with mere difference.

Originally posted by: Phoenix_75

OMGG...this is awesome..beyond that..'monsters of past never sleep' . I'm totally using the quotes you use in your fictions in my every day language.Where do you get such awesome quotes and dialogues from. Loved it. Please continue soon.

lots of love❤️

Thank you! ❤️

That feels great to hear from you. I ain't into reading and stealing quotes but yeah there are few that I used from Google. This is extracted originally by me, credits to the little philospher in me.🤣 About dialogues, I write them myself to maintain natural attitude of characters and relablity of readers for them. This means a lot. Do continue to drop in reviews❤️

Originally posted by: ilazyair

Teaser:

This is so full of suspense and my fingers are literally itching to complete this review and jump onto the next.

Is it RB or Anurag?

The writing is exquisite btw.

Riya.

Heyya, extremely sorry! I didn't realised that I missed to reply you until now.

Thank you so much! This feels ecstatic to hear. Gosh, the hard work finally paid off.

That's for you to discover in future;)

Loads of love ❤️

Originally posted by: ilazyair

Chapter 1:

The words are weaved so beautifully that's it's a treat to read every sentence. ❤️

So it was Anurag!!? My money was on Bajaj.😲 that was really surprising.

What's up with the injection and why is Anurag injecting it himself? Something weird is going on.

And man! Prerna is actually with RB and betraying Anurag.

The mystery and the premise is killing me. 👏

Riya.

Thank you! I am glad to have got amazing readers like you. I hope the language was lucid and not too complicated.

Hahaha, that's the twist 1 of all.

Well, there is a background story about Prerna and Rishabh teaming up for which will be revealed in chapter 3 or 4, most probably.

Thank you! Your reviews and appreciation matters a lot for my improvement.

Loads of love ❤️

Originally posted by: ilazyair

Chapter 2:

My oh my, Rishabh is Anurag's brother. 😲

The descriptions are so gorgeous that it literally puts you in a trance so you could imagine every. single. detail.

So Anurag was somehow responsible for RB's wife's death and now he is seeking revenge?

I have to say I am loving the RB here. He is so vindictive and yet so innocuously vulnerable, teetering on the edge of falling into darkness yet somehow relating to Prerna. Like dude, the perfect grey character? I am all in! ❤️

Waiting for the next update.

Riya.

The dream come true moment for any amateur writer is to put readers in the trance of scene pertaining emotions. Thank you so much for gifting me that precious moment of achievement.

I won't say anything, RB is maddening and crazier than one would believe.

Woah, I wanted all the three characters in Gray and getting the someone up for a notorious stage seems so cool. Thank you so much! This is probably the happiest comment since a while.

☯️Author's note☯️

With the motive and thrill I chose to begin this piece of literature has now subsided crediting to the loss of connection with the characters and drift from the actual plot. I despise the way they have developed characters into and too see such potential actors being prey to the hypocrisy I seriously can't imagine my characters fit into them. With that face and emotions to be potrayed through. This story was destined to be intense and to bring out the villian in each of the protagonists. The mystery attached to it had other side effects to make it go forward but I am over the edge to quit this series.

It was longer as I imagined but the tight schedule and loss of connection with characters I am choosing to restrict it with a three shot story followed by an epilogue and a different storyline than from the beginning. Hope it seems as fruitful as the previous but before that I really need to know if you are comfortable with villainous Rishabh and the fact of cutting the storyline.

Do leave your comments below along the suggestion.

PS: I would love to continue it further if I could get a co-writer too. Anybody volunteering for that?

After watching today's episode, will you be inspired?