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Posted: 17 years ago
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K guys, first of all really sorry for not updating in a long time, second of all 'RAMADAN MUBARUK'!

RECAP: prena and Mr.Bajaj let mukti go to the U.S.A uni on prem's say, prena tells anurag about prem and what he said, prem & anurag have a little father and son moment and talk, prem & mukti have a little talk and mukti goes back to the kitchen wondering to herself if she likes Prem or not?

CONTINUING 4RM THE SCENE IN THE PREVIOUS UPDATE............

M,S & V: LUNCH IS SERVED!

Everyone had gathered round the long table that the girls had setted out in the garden. Sitiing down and settling themselves on chairs, they merrily chatted and ate happily. One who was especially enjoying the meal was Prem. He had just tasted the hand-made halwa made from Mukti and was enjoying it immensely. While Mukti had to go to post the letter, which made Prem sad a bit but was cheered up by..................

S: lelo Prem, take some more, Mukti made this as well
V: yeah Prem, here take this, she made this as well.

Prem just sat there eating as his two sisters and filled up his plate with food made by Mukti. Laughing away at his sisters as they his mouth filled up with food, he had a hard time swallowing it as they had fed him at the same time. When finally being able to swallow, he asked

P: if Mukti made all this, then what did you two make?
S: well um...........
V: we made absolutely nothing, you see, mukti has had this thing for cooking ever-since she was a kid. So, she wanted to make lunch 2day and we let her.
P: oh i see, well then i might as well take everything then and asked Anurag for the paratha who had heard everything. The girls had gone away. They had purposely done that so he would eat as he hadn't eaten nothing since last nite
A: Prem, you really don't believe them do you, about Mukti making the entire lunch.
P: of course not dad, but it was the only way to stop them two from loading my plate with food.

Anurag laughed while his son gave some of his food to his mum (Prerna) and Anurag himself. Everyone enjoyed lunch, especially Prerna, who was so happy to see her family all together again. Only one person was missing and that was Mukti. She knew that Mukti had gone to go and post her letter, she had told her that she would be back in less than an hour or so, but she still hadn't come and prena was getting worried. Just then, Mukti walked in through the gate and went towards everyone. She had livened up the spirit and Prena was relieved that nothing had happened to her daughter. Prem was happy as well. Mukti was back and now was the perfect time to tell her about his feelings. Hopefully, she would feel the same way about him too. Telling his dad about his plan to bring mukti in the house, he excused himself from the table and went inside. This Mukti saw and as Prem and Anurag expected, she too excused herself and went towards the direction that Prem went in. This made Anurag happy and he told everyone else. They all prayed for Prem , to make his love being successful and hoped that the two (Prem & Mukti) would become happily married and have a wonderful life. But destiny had other things installed for them (well guys, since i'm writing this ff, i will be making their destiny, so hope you guys don't mind 😆😆)

M: prem, where are you?
P: huh, oh hey mukti. what happened?
M: oh nothing, just came to ask why you left so early, that's all.
P: oh well i had some work so i just came inside.
M: oh okay

She was about to leave when prem stopped her........

P: Mukti, how would you feel that you love some-one but you don't know how to tell them? you can't tell that person how you feel about them?
M: well it depends doesn't it, you should never take so long in telling ur dil ki baat to some-one. why u ask?
P: nothing just asking.....
M: prem, you are lying, i know u r. u cn't lie to me u knw that.
P: fine, u caught me
M: i knew i would and she grins

Prem couldn't help but grin back at her

P: well, u see.......
M: no i dnt see
P: he he, very funny mukti, just listen will u?
M: okay so tell me, wht were u saying?
P: thank u, now where was i, oh yeah, well, i met this girl and i really like her more like love her. it was love at first sight for me but i dnt know how she feels about me. I dunno how to tell her
M: wht did i say be4 huh, "you should never take so long in telling ur dil ki baat to some-one", so just get on with it and tell her, the longer u take in telling, the harder its gonna becum and u neva know, she might becum some-one elses.
P: dnt say that
M: i'm not sayin anything but the truth. u should tell her that u love her.
P: fine, mukti i wanna tell u who i love
M: tell me then
He closed his eyes praying in his mind and said
P: the person i love is.................

Just then mukti's fone rang and excused herself to answering it leaving a prem who was about to say "you" but when opening his eyes he found that no-one standing there. He wondered where mukti was and saw that she was on the fone laughing away. Cursing his luck, he walk towards her and....................

Precap: "i love you" - who will say it? Prem or Mukti, wait for the next part.

Sorry guys, gonna have to stop there. I'm fasting and its really hard rite now. Feeling so tired and have h/w to do. Please comment guys, good and bad. Criticizes are welcomes as well.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
wow that was realllllly good! poor prem, haha i hope he will get the chance to tell mukti his feelings before its too late! continue soooooooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
nice FF continue soon.... 😛 👏
i wonder who said that.... 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks guys for comment. need more to continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
It really good and i wonder wat happened next now... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Sum ur ff was..................... fantastico! 😃 👏 well dne man u can b a writer man 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
👏 u knw wat sum it was............................fantastico 😛 well dne man
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey that was a great update plzzz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
okay people here is the next update

RECAP: Prem is about to tell Mukti his feelings when.................................

Mukti's fone rang and she excused herself to answering it leaving a prem who was about to say "you" but when opening his eyes he found that no-one standing there. He wondered where mukti was and saw that she was on the fone laughing away. Cursing his luck, he walk towards her and.................... turned her towards him. Seeing the laughter on her face had only increased his hopes. Mukti saw prem and told her friend

M: Tia, i'll call back later okay. bye
and she cancelled the call facing a prem who's face a lighten up by her laughter.
I'm so sorry prem, it's just that my friend phoned up and I had to talk to her. Sorry for leaving you there. So sorry and she held her ears as if asking for forgiveness.
Prem on the other hand thought that it was cute. Such a cute face that she had made that he just had to 4give her.

P:yeah, yeah okay ur forgiven.
M: thanks prem. Now what was it that you wanted to tell me? Something about Love. You love someone yh?
P: yeah and I think its about time that she knows
M: well go for it, but to find out be4 she does, who do you love?
P: well, i think you she is gonna find out the same time as you are.

Mukti was confused. Had he given her a hint or something coz she was completely clueless right now.

M: prem, no time for jokes. Come on, tell me who it is please?
P: i told you, she will find out the same time as you will. The girl i love will find out the same time as you.

Mukti slowly began to realize what he was saying and widened her eyes. Was the girl he loved............her? She wasn't that stupid, she could put two and two 2gether.

M: do you mean...........ummm........ me?

Prem was glad she picked up the hint but somewhere felt afraid in his heart that she wouldn't respond just as he hoped she would.

P: well.......yeah. Mukti, I LOVE YOU. U knw, i grew up my whole life being one big bad boy, who didn't know what it felt like to have parents, who didn't have anyone before and who didn't know what it felt like to be loved or to be in love at all until.....until you came into my life. The moment I saw you, i knew that you were the one for me, the one i wanted to share my life with and start a family with as well. before i met you, i used to treat mom and dad as if they meant nothing to me. I was UD until the day i met, u made me become the person mom wanted me to be: you made me into PREM. I know that this is all really shocking for you (which she did look shocked as it what all just so sudden) and I know that i had just met you but you are the ONLY one that I LOVE and will always continue on doing so until the end of my life. I'm willing to wait for you until you return after University and all but please Mukti, i really love you and i love you alot. i don't and won't be able to live without you, please mukti just give me one chance to prove to you how much i love you. You don't need to tell me anything right now, you can think about it.

Mukti hadn't said a thing since then. She had let prem do all the talking while she herself kept quiet. She was in TOTAL shock rite now and above all that she knew that her choti ma knew all of this as he was her son so of corse she would know.
She quietly left the room and headed out to the front to the doors of the out-house. Prem on the otherhand, was relieved that he had told her about his feelings but was quite upset as she didn't respond the way he had expected too. He turned around to find his mother and father looking at him crying. He walked up to them saying

P: i know wat you are gonna say but don't. All that matters is that i told her how i feel towards her. She doesn't need to give an answer that early. I gave her sometime to think it through and if were destined to be together, then we will be and if we are not then....... we'll just see what destiny has in store for us okay mom...dad.

His parents looked at him and simply nodded and prem made his way upstairs to his room.
He opened the door and shut it locking himself in there and went down onto the floor crying.

Anurag, prena and the whole family was sitting in the living room. Some were standing up and the others were sitting on the sofa's. Neither prem nor mukti had come back after their incident. Anurag felt helpless as he couldn't help his son get his love so he told everyone that he was gonna go and talk to prem. They all agreed and so Anurag went up the stairs leading towards prem's room.

On reaching there, he noticed that the door was locked and called out to prem. Prem who was inside heard this but didn't open the door. He just sat there on the floor crying silently. Anurag didn't give up but continued to call out prem's name.

A:prem, prem. Darwaaza kolo prem! (open the door prem)
prem, darwaaza kolo!

Everyone downstairs had heard him calling prem's name and immediately ran towards Prem and Anurag. Prena reached the landing and faced towards the door seeing anurag trying to open the door but wasn't succeeding. She ran to him and also shouted 'prem mera beta, darwaaza kolo na. Prem' but no-one would reply from the inside. Mr.Bajaj and Tushar went to go and help them. Prena moved back and the 3 men knocked down the door finding a boy sitting there on the floor crying hysterically. Anurag and Prena ran towards their son.

Pr: prem, kuch bolo beta. Kuch to bol? aapni is ma se kuch to bol prem?
A: prem, prem kya howa tumko? bataona prem kya howa?

Prem on the other hand looks up and starts to hug his parents crying so much. Prena and Anurag comforted him but prem on the other hand couldn't take it

P: (crying) why doesn't she love me dad? why? what did I ever do to her that she couldn't love me? I love her so much that i would rather die than live without her!
A: (crying) aisa mat kaho prem. Mukti tumse pyaar zaroor karti hain bas woh to ehsaas nahin hogaye beta.
P: lekin usse to kab ehsaas hojayenge dad? app bhi bataono. i can't live without Mukti ma. Mein mar jaonga unke bina. I feel so alone
Pr: (crying) nahin beta, aisa mat kaho. woh tumse zaroor pyaar karti hain bas usse ehsaas nahin hain. Hum usse baat karlenge tekhe. Tumhare papa hain ha, dekho tumhare papa ko, woh bhi hain tumhare paas aur mein bhi prem. prem dekho mere taraf se, (prem looks at his mom), woh tumse bahut prem karti beta lekin aisa mat kehna ke to marjayega. Bheese sal (20 yrs) humne apni prem keliye intazaar kiya. Tum abh humhe chorne kahin nahin jayega tekhe. Mein apni prem ki bina jee nahin paongi (won't be able to live without my prem). To agli baar aisa nahin kahinga ke tu akela hain kyunki tu akela nahin hain beta, samajhagye meri baat
A: haan beta, prena ne jo kuch kaha sahi kaha. Hum apne prem ko doobara nahin khona hain (dnt want to loose our prem again) lekin beta, agar tumhe aise tarha yunhi rorenge na aur haar manega, to tumhe Mukti ko kabhi paa kar nahin kar payega.
Pr: haan beta, sunno tere papa ke baat.

Prem just nodded and hugged his parents again. Wiping his tears and standing up, he faced his family and parents too

P: yh mother, you are right. dad you too, i shouldn't loose my Mukti. She does love me only hasn't realized it yet, but i'll make her realize and one day she herself would come up to me and say those 3 words that i want to hear from her.
A: yes beta, that's right. she would do just dat. we are right here behind you and with you all the way.
Prena and the entire family nodded 'yes'

S:prem, dnt worry, you will get her and if it is the last thing i would do, it would be that my brother gets his love one way or another. Anyone who comes in between you and mukti will have to go through me first.
P: thanks sister and the two hugged each other.

Sneha turned towards prena and anurag and said

S: maa (she hesitated) papa.........
Anurag looked up to see who she was talking to and found out that she was talking to him. He smiled at her to which she smiled back.
S: i have an idea that will help prem to get his Mukti.
Prem blushed a little to which Sneha noticed and so did Anurag.
She continued to tell everything but we can't hear it as it is all in mute mode.
S: so everyone, ready?
They all nodded
S: Operation prem getting mukti is in process!

Anurag was really happy. Not only had he found his son but also found his daughter as well. He truly was the happiest father that day and no-one would be able to take that away from him - not even GOD!

PRE-CAP: mukti opens up to her choti ma & operation prem getting mukti has started and holi is celebrated.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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hey people, i have changed the name of my ff. Now it is called 'Sacha Pyaar'

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