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he y guys, I thought of starting of prem & mukti. I have another one of them two but i haven't continued it meaning that its not finished.
Here is the link for it:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=680858
So it starts before they even meet each other. Prem has found out who his parents are and has moved into the Bajaj Residence and mukti has just come back 4rm graduation.
Oh and in this fan-fic, mukti is not the boring one that she was in KZK. she puts on make-up and is the most beautiful girl in her college. she wears short clothes like jeans & mini-skirts but still is sankari. She is NOT her usual chatterbox but is a quiet, shy kind of girl. BUT she can shout when she wants to and can get into tiny tantrums with someone wheneva she wants to.
The day starts with Prena doing the cleaning of the table after breakie & prem comes down just wakening up shouting:
Pr - prena
P - prem
P: MOTHER INDIA!!!!!!
Pr: beta prem your are so much more better than this. Why do you call me "mother india"? i don't understand. mein tumhare maa hoon, mother india nahin.
P: whteva mother india! i will call you whteva i want. Afterall, like u said, you are my "mother". So u being my mother, i can call you whteva i want. okie?
Pr: okie dokey.
P: good then. rite, mein bahir jaraha hoon ( i am goin out)
Pr: tekhe, par jaldi wapas aao na.
P: whteva mother india.
Prem exits the house and sees a someone stannding by the outhouse door shouting
Girl: tekhe baba, mein jarahi hoon choti ma ki ghar. phir ooske baad mein apni dost se milna jarahi hoon. bye baba
Prem walked over to the girl. Just then her blue duppata flew across her face. She lifted it down slowly. First we see her eyes, then her earings, then her nose which had a little nose-stud on it, then we see her lips, then her bangles which were blue mixed with silver and lastly we see her payal on her feet. We see that it is MUKTI. she was wearing a blue long skirt with a white vest top. She had a bag in her hand which was a creamy white. Fixing her duppatta, she then made her way towards the house not noticing a guy staring at her like a idiot
Prem on the other hand just stood there shocked. No girl in this entire world could be that beautiful he thought. It was love at first sight for him. He wondered what her name was as & what she was doing there at the house. He looked at her with admiration, wanting to know more about her. he then remembered that she called someone "choti ma" when she was talking to her baba.
P: who is this choti ma? and how come i have never seen her before. Does mother india know that a girl is living on her premises. I have to find out everything i can about this girl. She is just so beautiful. Could it be my dream-girl? Its not love at first sight is it? It is, it is. UD your in love. Wait that just means that you have lost your challenge with mother india init? Well, a challenge that you loose to your mother can't be at all that bad can it now PREM. And with that he walked back inside the house dreaming about the girl of his dreams (whom he just saw)
Pr - prena
M - mukti
Meanwhile, in Bajaj residence, while prem was outside, mukti entered the house yelling
M: CHOTI MA!!!!!!!!!
P: haan haan beta bolo, kya hain? aare, aaj tu bahut sunder lagrahi hain. Kyun, kahi jaar rahi hain kya? kisi larke se milne nahin jaarahi hain na?
M: pehle choti ma, good morning. doosre, kuch bhi nahin, soochti thi main aapse milon, thisre, aaj mein kyun bahut sunder lagrahi hoon, har din nahin lagti hoon kya?
P: are nahin beta, bas yunhi kehrahi hoon aur ha good morning.
M: tekhe choti ma. chodi (fourth), haan main bahar jarahi hoon piya ke ghar par. maine baba se keh chuki hoon ki mein unki ghar par jarahi hoon & lastly NAHIN, mein kisi larke se milne nahin jarahi hoon okay.
P: okay beta, par saamhal karke chalna.
With that Mukti left the dining are and was about to exit the door when.......
P: ma...... i mean mother india
M thinking who is mother india & who is this guy? Choti ma????????
Pr: kya hain. are prem, tumne to kahan tha ki to bahar jaraha hain to ohir itne jaldi kyun wapas agaya aur mukti, tumher kyun bolarahi thi?
M: choti ma, yeh larka koun hain.
P: yes mother india, was about to ask you the same thing
Pr: prem, yeh mere beti Mukti hain aur mukti, yeh mere beta prem hain. jiske bare mein to batare wali thi.
M: oh haan, hi prem, I am mukti
P: i am prem i mean UD.
They shook each other hands. prem felt a strange feeling running through his body. After all, he was in love and thought this must be the after-effect of falling in love.
Mukti was thinking that why he wasn't letting go, prem didn't want to let go & prena knew that something had happen to prem when her saw mukti. he was her son after all she was his mother. So she understood wht had happen. Prem had fallen in love and had lost the challenge. Loosing the challenge, this she found out, when prem said "hi i am prem i mean UD". She knew he had changed and it was becoz of mukti but the thing was that did Mukti love him or not. She had to find out.
On the other hand, Mukti was trying to get her hand out of prem's grasp. Giving up she asked
M: uhhhh, excuse me but could you let go of my hand please?
Prem then realizing what he was doing let go. 'Oh sorry'
Mukti left with prem running his hand through his hair, smiling away. This prena saw and decided to tell Mr Bajaj and Anurag about prem falling in love with Mukti. She left prem over there to himself and went up the stairs towards Sneha's room as she knew that prem would only listen to sneha & would only talk to her about anything.
SHOULD I CONTINUE OR NOT???????????????
Here is the link for it:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=680858
So it starts before they even meet each other. Prem has found out who his parents are and has moved into the Bajaj Residence and mukti has just come back 4rm graduation.
Oh and in this fan-fic, mukti is not the boring one that she was in KZK. she puts on make-up and is the most beautiful girl in her college. she wears short clothes like jeans & mini-skirts but still is sankari. She is NOT her usual chatterbox but is a quiet, shy kind of girl. BUT she can shout when she wants to and can get into tiny tantrums with someone wheneva she wants to.
The day starts with Prena doing the cleaning of the table after breakie & prem comes down just wakening up shouting:
Pr - prena
P - prem
P: MOTHER INDIA!!!!!!
Pr: beta prem your are so much more better than this. Why do you call me "mother india"? i don't understand. mein tumhare maa hoon, mother india nahin.
P: whteva mother india! i will call you whteva i want. Afterall, like u said, you are my "mother". So u being my mother, i can call you whteva i want. okie?
Pr: okie dokey.
P: good then. rite, mein bahir jaraha hoon ( i am goin out)
Pr: tekhe, par jaldi wapas aao na.
P: whteva mother india.
Prem exits the house and sees a someone stannding by the outhouse door shouting
Girl: tekhe baba, mein jarahi hoon choti ma ki ghar. phir ooske baad mein apni dost se milna jarahi hoon. bye baba
Prem walked over to the girl. Just then her blue duppata flew across her face. She lifted it down slowly. First we see her eyes, then her earings, then her nose which had a little nose-stud on it, then we see her lips, then her bangles which were blue mixed with silver and lastly we see her payal on her feet. We see that it is MUKTI. she was wearing a blue long skirt with a white vest top. She had a bag in her hand which was a creamy white. Fixing her duppatta, she then made her way towards the house not noticing a guy staring at her like a idiot
Prem on the other hand just stood there shocked. No girl in this entire world could be that beautiful he thought. It was love at first sight for him. He wondered what her name was as & what she was doing there at the house. He looked at her with admiration, wanting to know more about her. he then remembered that she called someone "choti ma" when she was talking to her baba.
P: who is this choti ma? and how come i have never seen her before. Does mother india know that a girl is living on her premises. I have to find out everything i can about this girl. She is just so beautiful. Could it be my dream-girl? Its not love at first sight is it? It is, it is. UD your in love. Wait that just means that you have lost your challenge with mother india init? Well, a challenge that you loose to your mother can't be at all that bad can it now PREM. And with that he walked back inside the house dreaming about the girl of his dreams (whom he just saw)
Pr - prena
M - mukti
Meanwhile, in Bajaj residence, while prem was outside, mukti entered the house yelling
M: CHOTI MA!!!!!!!!!
P: haan haan beta bolo, kya hain? aare, aaj tu bahut sunder lagrahi hain. Kyun, kahi jaar rahi hain kya? kisi larke se milne nahin jaarahi hain na?
M: pehle choti ma, good morning. doosre, kuch bhi nahin, soochti thi main aapse milon, thisre, aaj mein kyun bahut sunder lagrahi hoon, har din nahin lagti hoon kya?
P: are nahin beta, bas yunhi kehrahi hoon aur ha good morning.
M: tekhe choti ma. chodi (fourth), haan main bahar jarahi hoon piya ke ghar par. maine baba se keh chuki hoon ki mein unki ghar par jarahi hoon & lastly NAHIN, mein kisi larke se milne nahin jarahi hoon okay.
P: okay beta, par saamhal karke chalna.
With that Mukti left the dining are and was about to exit the door when.......
P: ma...... i mean mother india
M thinking who is mother india & who is this guy? Choti ma????????
Pr: kya hain. are prem, tumne to kahan tha ki to bahar jaraha hain to ohir itne jaldi kyun wapas agaya aur mukti, tumher kyun bolarahi thi?
M: choti ma, yeh larka koun hain.
P: yes mother india, was about to ask you the same thing
Pr: prem, yeh mere beti Mukti hain aur mukti, yeh mere beta prem hain. jiske bare mein to batare wali thi.
M: oh haan, hi prem, I am mukti
P: i am prem i mean UD.
They shook each other hands. prem felt a strange feeling running through his body. After all, he was in love and thought this must be the after-effect of falling in love.
Mukti was thinking that why he wasn't letting go, prem didn't want to let go & prena knew that something had happen to prem when her saw mukti. he was her son after all she was his mother. So she understood wht had happen. Prem had fallen in love and had lost the challenge. Loosing the challenge, this she found out, when prem said "hi i am prem i mean UD". She knew he had changed and it was becoz of mukti but the thing was that did Mukti love him or not. She had to find out.
On the other hand, Mukti was trying to get her hand out of prem's grasp. Giving up she asked
M: uhhhh, excuse me but could you let go of my hand please?
Prem then realizing what he was doing let go. 'Oh sorry'
Mukti left with prem running his hand through his hair, smiling away. This prena saw and decided to tell Mr Bajaj and Anurag about prem falling in love with Mukti. She left prem over there to himself and went up the stairs towards Sneha's room as she knew that prem would only listen to sneha & would only talk to her about anything.
SHOULD I CONTINUE OR NOT???????????????
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