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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
Can't wait to see next part....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
just caught up with you ff, and its really good! can you post a pic of this sharman if you can, i dont know what he looks like! anyways, do continue soon, its great!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
a picture of sharman, dhruv, siya:



(just pretend Neeti is not there)


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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
kool pics plzz continue soon!!!! its great!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP: Mukti goes to Wadhwa's house and is spending the night there

It was late at night and Kumkum had come to check on evryone to make sure that they were fast asleep. When she entered Mukti's room, she found that Mukti was there standing by the window looking at the moon, which was shining brightly that night.

BM: mukti beta, tum abhi tak soyi nahin?
M: nahi badi ma woh neend nahi arithi.
BM: tekhe par beta sojao. (got to sleep)
M:tekhe badi ma.

Kumkum is about to go when Mukti stops her
M: badi ma tumse ek baat pocho?
BM: poocho beta
M: mom, jab aap papa se pyaar howa tha to aap kaisa laga
BM: mein, mein to aisi lagi thi ke mein cloud 9 par hi hoon. Mukti jo insaan humse bahut pyaar karte hain na, to woh insaan is duniya ke sab se lucky insaan hain, kyunki humare paas woh hain jo kissi aur ke paas nahin hoga aur woh hain pyaar.
Mukti is silent.
BM: kya to kisse si pyaar karti hain
Mukti was shocked. How could her badi ma know what she was thinking at this very moment.
M: i have no idea. I have this one guy who is deewana ki tarah mera peecha jarahe hain and i have no idea how to react at all! He told me his dil ki baat today and i had no idea on how to react towards him
BM: who is this guy?
M: choti ma ka beta...........prem

Kumkum who knew that prem was in love with mukti (as prena had told her 4rm day one - be4 prem confessed his feelings) acted shocked.
Mukti looked at her badi ma's shocked face and noticed the expressions she put on.
M: i knw badi ma shocking na?
BM: yeah beta it is. Beta what have you thought of him? I mean do you have any feeling for him or not?
M: mom i have NO idea. i mean he just falls in love with me and i make friendship with him. For him its love but for me its friendship. Choti ma asked me the same thing just today and i didn't answer her coz i had no answer as it was all just so sudden. He said that he is ready to wait for me, until i finished off my studies that's when we will get married (which will happen folks but u have to wait a bit more - waaaaaaay bit more)
BM: Mukti, you have wonderful guy who is ready to give everything for you. Like you said woh tumhe "deewana ke tarha" chahta hain. Don't loose this chance. He is ready to wait for you until u finish of ur studies. He loves you that much. Some girls aren't so lucky to have a guy madly in love with them. You are really lucky to have someone like that.
M: badi ma stop copying me (remembering what she had told her badi ma that evening at dinner time)
BM: lol. Enough tlk now beta, go to sleep now. Its very late now
M: tekhe mom
Kumkum headed towards the door and switched off the lights and quietly closed the door only to find sumit behind her smiling away. Sumit had heard everything of course. After-all he was a father to Mukti and did care for her as much as he had cared for his own kids.
Sumit: kya howa kumkum?
KK: kuch nahi sumit, bas bechari to neen nahin ari thi. baat kya uske saat aur abh woh sogayi hain araam se.
S: chalo achi baat hain. abh hum bhi sojayenge biwi. he starts getting naughty with her.
KK: sumit not here, bacha soorahe hain.
She pulls sumit by the shirt and takes him into the bedroom which he closes the door and then they start getting all naughty (he he he)
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys, really need some
comments please
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
😆 😆 omg da last bit was hilarious when i read it i couldn't stop laughin
She pulls sumit by the shirt and takes him into the bedroom which he closes the door and then they start getting all naughty (he he he) dat was so random 😆 😆 omg i hope mukti starts 2 fall in luv with prem lik asap 😳 but i definetely wanna c sum more mukti/sharman scenes 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP: Mukti and Kumkum talk after everyone goes to bed

While Mukti was having her talk with her BM, in the bajaj house, prem was looking at the moon having silent and dry tears down his cheeks and remembered the scene he had with Mukti a few nights before.

Prena who was walking back to her room saw prem out of bed standing next to the window looking out. She went inside and touched his shoulder. Prem turned around drying his tears and looked at his mom

P: kya howa mom?
Pr: beta to abhi tak sohi nahin?
P: nahin ma woh mukti ki yaad araha tha isliye.
Pr: beta dnt worry about her. She will be urs someday. I promise you son.
P: i know mom, i wasn't thinking about that but i just remembered the little scene we had the other night.
Pr: u mean the one when u 2 were staring at each other through the window?
P:how do you know ma?
Pr: i saw it and she giggled

Prem blushed and prena noticed it.
Pr: beta don't worry she will come back 2morrow ok now u just go to sleep will you please?
P: ok ma.

Prena was heading out when prem stopped her
P: ma could you please me to sleep?
Prena smiled at nodded. She headed towards him and sat down on the bed while prem moved his head towards his lap. Prena patted his head while prem slowly closed his eyes dreaming of mukti & himself dancing.

Here is the dream sequence they have (just imagine prem with short hair which is nicely cut and 5 yrs younger)

http://www.badongo.com/vid/213148

Prena saw her son fast asleep ans slowly put his head on the pillow. Prem started to smile in his sleep and prena felt happy to see her son smiling once again.

She closed the room door silently and headed towards her room to find Mr.Bajaj wide awake sitting in bed.

MB: prena, kaha thi tum?
Pr: MB i was with prem putting him to sleep. Bechara woh rora that (was crying). thinking of mukti he was. i dunno how long it will take mukti to realize. well all we can do is just support prem haina?
MB: yeah we can just do that or we could................

He starts getting naughty with her and pulls her to the bed and they both do it (hehe - looks like it another suhaag raat for parents at wadhwa and bajaj house huh guys)


Sorry no PM scenes today. I was actually planning on getting the plan part in today but couldn't coz i had to add in prem's view and a few scenes with Prem and Prena
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
damn luks lik da rents r gettin it on even in their ol age 😆 😆 jus hope PM will be lik dat soon 😳 omg i can't wait 2 find out wat da plan is update soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP: prem and prena talk and parents get naughty.

Kumkum woke up in the arms of Sumit. She smiled when she saw the look on her husbands face. She slowly moved his hand away from his and went to the bathroom

In Bajaj residence, the same thing was happening, only Mr.Bajaj didn't want to let go of his wife's hand. Giving up, Prena slowly took the glass of water 4rm her bed-side cabinet and sprinkled some water on her husband's face. He woke up with a start leaving prena to run away into the bathroom.

Kumkum came out of the bathroom only to find her husband still sleeping and she tried to wake him up. He woke up reluctantly and went to the bathroom after trying to romance with his wife - which she didn't let.

Kumkum went towards the kitchen only to find the kids all there preparing the meal.
Sharman and Mukti were making aloo ki paratha with the help of Meethi chacha, Dhruv was cutting onions and Siya and Aashika was frying in the pan. Kumkum looked at the sight and smiled. Her kids were always so helpful, especially mukti and siya - though they weren't her kids, she still treated them as her own. She went forwards and asked

BM: kya baat hain? sab loogh intni subah subah utgaye hain kya?
Sh: are ma, we wanted to make the breakfast today........
M: so we thought that we would just sneak into the kitchen.........
D: prepare the table............
S&A: and make the breakfast!
BM: do you want any help?
M: no mom, its okay, Meethi chacha is here to supervise us. You can go and wake up pa - we all know how he is at waking up
BM: he is already awake but i'll just go and see if he is in bed or not. You nva know with ur pa
The kids nodded and went about their jobs while kumkum exited making her way towards her room.
She smiled. She was so fortunate to have such a loving family. Her kids were always helping her and her husband had always loved her to bits. She thank god for giving her such a wonderful and loving family.

In Bajaj house, everyone was in the kitchen discussing the plan sneha had made. Prena had called ova Basu pariwaar since they were in on it as well.

S: rite so the plan is that we have to make Miss Mukti jealous, so jealous that she will eventually have to confess her love to Prem. And to do that, we will need someone who can play Prem's lover and I know just the person.
Everyone: kaun???????????
S: the person who will always help me in my plans.......Pragati Agarwal (pragati 4rm KGGK).She is my school friend but had to move to America when we were small. We have stayed in contact for like ever and i told her bout Prem's situation. She has agreed to help. I knw that Mukti has met all my friends but she hasn't met Pragati so she will neva find out about all this. She is coming soon ova here Pragati is

(pic of pragati for those who don't know who she is)



Pr: that's good, the sooner we get this done the better and after that Prem and Mukti can get married - (Prem blushed). By the way Sneha, Pragati se kehna ki jaldi aao kyunki Mukti bhi wapas arahi hain aaj or mein nahin chati ke yeh sab planning barbaadh ho jaye.
S: Mom, Pragati is already in the country, she just has to meet prem and get to know him be4 they can start "pretend dating". I met her just yesterday and told her about all this. So don't fret.
Pr: tekhe tekhe, i won't "fret".
S: good mom now i will take prem to go and meet Pragati and the 2 can get to know each other and then the plan will start.......

M; kaunsi wala plan

Everyone looked back at the person and had a shock look on their face. How long was Mukti standing there they didn't know? Did she even hear anything?

M: are, sab loogh itne shocked kyu dekhrahi hoon? maine kuch kaha kya? acha yeh batao ki aap kaunse wala plan ke bare mein baat karahethe? (wht plan were u tlking about?)
Pr: nahin mukti aise koi baat nahin hain, lagta hain tumhe koi ghalat phamie howi hain. acha yeh batao ki tum itni jaldi wapas agayi?
M: nahin woh kya hain na i came to change my clothes and then after that me, sharu, dhruv bhaiya and siya and aashika are going to the arcade and after that beach. okay choti ma?
Pr: okay beta, sharman aur sab loogh kaha hain?
M: woh loogh to ghar par hi hain, they are gonna cum and pick me up.
Pr: okay beta, who dropped you of?
M: sumit pa did be4 he went office. k choti ma i'm going to get ready and then i'm going ok. bye
Pr: bye beta

Mutki left the house while prena turned towards the family.
A: if mukti found out about this then everything would have been ruined. Good thing she didn't hear anything.
S: ya papa, a good thing as well. Prem we have to go now. Pragati is waiting for us down the coffee shop.
P: okay sister, bye mom bye dad bye daddy kool and bye everyone else.
Everyone: bye Prem and goodluck
P: thank you i need it

Sneha and Prem drove off in Sneha's car after waving a goodbye.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago

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