Fan Fic-Prem Mukti-Updated 19 page 18 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
awwwwww those last couple of updates were cute cntinu sn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
Part 13

K.T.:mommy why well u be worried daddy is coming with me
Prem:ofcourse beta but u know ur mom she is so worried all the time
Mukti:ok ok ok ok now u can leave ill show u how much worried i am

Prem holds K.T.'s hand and is about to leave when mukti grabs tulsi's hand and pulls her towards her and gives her a super long hug.

Prem:o god now how long well they take to finish their hug

ok now prem and k.t. are in the car

K.T.:daddy why did u tell mommy to take a chill pill ?
Prem:a chill pill is a medicine for ur mom she has to take it to be more strong(he laughed-
and k.t. also laughed

5 min later

Prem:ao lets go in side ur new school

Inside K.T.'s New School:

Prem was talking to the teacher and after the conversation was over and prem went outside he could't find Tulsi ne where then when he looked at the playground he saw his K.T. playing with lots of other children

Prem:Tulsi im leaving now (he screamed to tulsi)
K.T.:bye bye daddy

Prem went to his office and now were back at prem and mukti's house

im sooo sorry i have to go to school now bye and ill update soon promise 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
Part 14

Its been a whole day since k.t. was at school

Mukti:Prem hasn't come yet i well have to go pick her up

Mukti leaves to the school

Mukti:Excuse me have u seen my daughter her name is k.t.?
Principle:No we haven't someone just came a few mins ago and picked her up
Mukti:was it a man?
Principle:yes
Mukti:ok thank-you

Mukti:Prem mein abhi tumhe phone karti hoon mujhe phone karne ke bina tumne k.t. ko pick up kar bhi liya

Mukti calls Prem

Prem:hello
Mukti:hello pathidev
Prem:Mukti tumne kyon phone kiya
Mukti:u picked up k.t. and u didn't phone me
how could u
Prem:mukti u have been mistaken im coming right now to come pick her up
Mukti:KYA
Prem:what happened Mukti:tum pareshan lag rahi ho?
Mukti:Prem agar tum abhi a rahe ho tho phir pehle kisne K.T. ko utiya
Prem:Kya u mean Tulsi's not there
Mukti:haan i mean tulsi's not here where could she be (mukti feels her head spinning)
Prem:Mukti mukti kya hua where could she be
Mukti:She could be(and she fell to the ground)
Prem:Muktiii

Prem gets there he sees mukti on the ground.He runs to her
Prem picks her up puts her in the car and takes her to the hospital

its been 15 mins since mukti was with the doctor



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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
no body else liked it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Part 14

Doctor:congrats Ur going to be a father your wife it pregnant
Prem:Kya
Doctor:yes and miss Mukti would like to meet u
Prem:ok

Mukti:Prem did u find anything about k.t.
Prem:no bu...
Mukti:KYA use doondo abhi mein uske bigar nahi gi sakti plzzz prem plzzz (she broke down crying)
Prem:Mukti.....tum maa banay wali ho
Mukti just lifted her head up in shock
Mukti:prem lekin k.t.
Prem: mein use doond lunga

Prems phone rings

Prem:ek minute mein abhi ata hoon
Out side

Prem:hello
Prerna:prem tum kahan ho tuldi ro rahi hai tumhara liye
Prem:KYA Tulsi App Ke pass hai
Prerna:haan
Prem:MAA APP NE HUMAI PEHLE KYUN NAHI BATAYA HUM USE DOOND DOOND KE PAGAL HO GAYE THE
Prerna:kya mujhe to yeh pata hi nahi tha muj..
Prem:maa ab app yeh karna bandh karjeya aj se sirf hum use lay ayege
Prerna:beta meri bat to suno
Prem:nahi maa ab hum app se koy thalok nahi rakna chate mein araha hoon Tulsi ko utane use tayar rakna

Mukti:(she screamed to prem)PREM PREM KYA HUA TUM CHILA KYON RAHE HO?
Prem comes back
Prem:mukti from now on were not going to keep in touch with ur "Choti Maa"
Mukti:prem kyon nahi
Prem:(almost yelling at her)nacause she is the one with our K.T.
Mukti:KYA
Prem:haan lekin ab vo humare tulsi se dhoor rahe gi bohot dhoor hum america ja rahe hein
Mukti:lekin prem ek hi to galti ki thi choti maa ne to use kyon itni badri sazza de rahe ho?
Prem:Nahi ab nahi mein tumhari baat nahi sununga ab hum ja rahein hein

Prem goes to get tulsi
Prem:TULSI
Tulsi:daddy app ay gaye
Prem:tulsi beta hum ja rahe hein
Tulsi DIsney Land?(excited)
Prem:no America
Prerna hears this and come down stairs
Prerna:beta mujhse ek bohot badi galti hui hai plzzz mujhe maf kar dena
Prem:nahi maa hum ja rahe hein Mein,Mukti,K.T. aur...
prerna:aur kya
Prem:humara aney wala bacha
Prerna:kya(shocked)
Prem:haan ab hum ja rahe hein bye
K.T.:papa plzzz mein yahan rehna hai plzzzz papa PAPAAA

Hospital

Mukti:TULSI(she runs towards her
Mukti:Tulsi beta tum teek to ho
Prem:mukti:mein doctor se baat karke ata hoon
Tulsi:mommy plzzz tell daddy to let us stay here i want to stay with dadi


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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
i just luved it plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
GREATT HUN!!! and dont you ever think that no one likes it! I LOVE IT!!! thankss jaan! continuee soon!

Reeha 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
its great I loved it!!! I can't wait till u continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
Part 15

5 Years Later

Girl:Mama Aap Kahan Hai Mein Late Ho Rahi Hoon
Woman:PREM tum bhi help karo
Prem:Mukti mein kya kar raha hoon mein Kiran ko tayar kar raha hoon(Kiran is their daughter she is five and she has a twin)
Mukti:Tulsi tum kake gadi mein bato
Tulsi:teek hai mama
Then someone comes and runs to mukti saying:Mommy Jasper is chasing me(he grabs onto mukti's sari paloo)
Mukti:Manoj beta tum jake Jasper ko Kamre mein baandh karo(Jasper is their dog)
Manoj:okay mommy(Manoj is their son hes the twin ok Kiran)

thats all ill write today i know im writing short updates but ill keep trying to write longer ones and im on my sis's account(again) 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
thats so cuteee plz continue soon cant wait to read the next update 👏

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