updated pg.177: FINALLY FINISHED :D! - Page 15

That was a really good update. Keep up the good work! 👏

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u should join ekta... u both think alike
dead ppl coming back....... 😆

great update 👏
u update fast this time
thanx for that 👏

OMG is neal prem#1???????????????? prem died at the same time as his parents! omg!!!! it is possible! i hope so 👏

thats really gud!!!! plz continue soon
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hahaha i knew im too nice...i give everything away! anyways thanks for being soo patiant with meee soo now i guess you guys deserve an update...im warning you it wont bee long tought SORRY!!! i dont do it on purpose...if it were up to mee I'dd bee on the computer forever...but heyy who says i have a choice? (that mean i have no choice...my dad does 😭 )...anways hear yous goes.....

RECAP: there is a huge party for the winning of the court case...prem is going to prem 1's samadi ...( i know it's destroyed...but lets just 'imagine' prem ristored it...just so i can continues 😃 )

Prem got into his car...and justr turned on the engine when Neal came out...prem decided that neal could come too....
Prem: neal? you wanna come?.....
Neal: OH! no thanks...its a family thing...im fine....
Prem: Come on...your family too now...your doing soo much for uss...you should meet our other family member too...
Neal: sure....
He sat in the car...feeling like he shouldnt be there...but he came..he didnt want it to look like he was insulting prem.....they drove there the play ground was empty..it was getting dark all the kids were gone...prem walked up with neal to the samadii...the wind wildly blowing throgh there hair...as if some wild storm were about to approch....a stormm that wasnt ment to come...and un invited one...one that changed the path of lives......

Prem walked upp to the samadii a rose in his hand..neal silently followed....prem got down on one knee onto the damp grass...and placed the red rose on the ground...

Prem: heyy big brother...happy birthday....i know you most likely dont know me...i dont know you that well either....anyways enough of this..meet Neal...he's like my big brother too...it's his birthday today too...you know he's gonna make my jai talk...i wish you were hear...maa would bee soo happy....you would have loved beeing a uncle...i would have loved having you as a brother....we miss you ....i miss you....

a tear rolled down prems face...he silently walked to the car..neal just followed...he felt somthing strange...he didnt know how to discribe it...he didnt know how he could...he just folled prem into the car...and they drove out into the storm aheand...the rain started to pour...and wind blew harder..trying to tell the ears a certian message...that they would never know of...they only realised somthing wasnt right..when the car crashed......

TO BE CONTINUED.....

Im soo sorry for the really reallly short update.....i real soo terrible...but i will update tommorow..TWICE! just to make up for it! PROMSIS!!! do leave your thoughts and comments i love getting your feedback!

Reeha 😊

omg how could u jus leave us hangin lik dat 😆 hope nothin will happen 2 prem n neal 😭 but i think neal is gonna end up bein prem 1 😊 continue soon will be lookin 4ward 2 ur next updates 😉

Thankss you.. and i will be looking forward to ur updates tommorrow 😃

yay twice!! i;m happy now 😃 😃