updated pg.177: FINALLY FINISHED :D! - Page 17

omg wat happened to mukti u have to write another part today cant wait 👏

awwwwwww prem is sooo cute i luv mukti n prem's little arugments n i luv it when he grabs her from da back 😳 she totally gets scared 😆 continue soon lookin 4ward 2 ur next update luks lik she'll end up pregnant

i'm hoping mukti is preganant and i bet prem won't eat until mukti wakes up 👏

she is pregnant again????????? 😊 😊 😊

awesome yaaar!! but do try to update soon! we'll all be waiting eagerly!!!!!

Soha

this was one of the bestt updatessss.. omg what happened to mukti.. are u planning to kill her like ekta did. 😆 ... i hope not.. or i'll suffer from trauma.. please continue soon..

Hurry and update! It's really good! 👏

awww... i just love ur fanfic....continue soon plzzzzz 👏

guysss i feel sooo terrible i broke my promise...i didnt update twice....i got in sooo much trouble from my papa (i know...it was my fault...) soo he didnt let mew touch my computer...but im back now...sooo i'lll make this update verrrrrrrrryyyyyy long...PROMISEEE!!! and thanksss for being sooo patiant...im sooorrry i keppt you guys waiting!!!!

RECAP: its Karva chauth...mukti juts broke her brhuth...prem was goning to give her water when she colllapsed......

Prem didnt know what to doo...he juts held her in his arms...he finalllyy snapped himself out of it...he called...
prem: MAA!!
Prerna came running up to the balcony...she saw mukti in prems arms...
Prerna: OH! GOD!! this happens every KARVA CHUATH!! she always FAINTS WHEN SHE"SS STARVING!!!
Prem just laughed......in confusion..
prerna went up to mukti...
prerna: just splash water on her face...she'll wake up...i got scared the first time she did that...
Prem splashed water on mukti's face...but she didnt wake up...he got tensed...he carried her down the stairs and told prerna to go call the doctor and thats what she did....

Prem was taking mukti upstairs when the doctor came in...
prem: you came soo fast?....
Doctor: oh...Mr.Prem?....i came to drop off the reports of you and your brother...
Prem: oh?...im sorry there some confusion...i he's not my brother...he's just a family friend...
DoctoR: HUH?...okeay i'll double cheack....
He was about to leave...
Prem: WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU GOING???
Doctor: huh....to go cheack the reports...
Prem: NO! you moron...my wifes UNCONSIOUSSS SEE WHATSSS WROnG!!!
And so the doctor did...and prem left the room......

Prem was strolling up and down the hallway...neal watched prems expresion...soo worried soo concerned soo tense....riya had gone too sleep...jai and aryan and risshi and krishi were in the next room fighting over who won in 'sorry'..and piya was sittinng in the hall with neal, nish and prerna watching prem all tensed...

piya: PUPPA!! dont worry...mom always falls when she's hungry..i've seen her...then she''ll get all embrassed, when i make fun of her and say 'just wait tell you have to do it'......
prem laughed at his daughters innocence...
Nisha: well piya sweetheart...you will have to do it right?....
piya: uh ahhh...im not stupied...and im like mom...i cant stay hungry....
prem laughed: eyy jaan....why does your mom stay hungry do you know?....
Piya: of course...soo she can get skinny 😃
prem couldnt stopp laughing: wait tell your mom hears this one......

the doctor came out....prem got serious....and went up to the doctor...
Prem: whats wrong.....? did she fainted cause of hunger right...?
Doctor: YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOUR SELF!!!
Prem: huh?
Doctor: DONT "HUH" ME!!! letting your wife starve herself when she's a month PREGNANET!!!!

Prem was both...angry..suprised..happy...and feeling guilty...he just went into the bedroom...well prerna went too get sweetss...neal and nisha were happy for prem and mukti...

He walked to the bedroom..she was laying on the bed fast asleep...he smiled and kissed her forhead....sat besihed her...and held her hand and started too talk...
Prem: soo i wonj....i get the football team right?.....
your soo evil...you knew didnt you...you knew i wouldnt let you starv yourself otherwise....im not going to forgive you for this one basantii....

She woke upp all confussed and hungry....seeing prem holding her hand and looking like he was gonna kill her...but still happy looking...she couldnt describe the expresion.....
Mukti: prem im hungry....did i faint again this year...?
Prem: yess....and another reason too....
Mukit didnt know what he was talking about ( seriouslyy she didnt...): huh?....prem no dont go confusing me when im hungry.....
Prem just smiled his wiked smile and picked her up and twirled her around the room...
Mukit: AHHH!!! PREM WHATSS GOTTEN INTO YOU!!! LETT MEEE GOO I WANNA EAT!!!!!
She was winnning like a little kid...prem didnt let her goo...she was getting annoyed...
Prem: soo...what do you wanna name the new football player?....
Mukti: HUH?? what...?
Prem: oh?....sooo you didnt know?...
Mukti: know what?....
Prem laughed: Sooo basanti...did you know that i won?....
Mukti: PREM!!! STOPPP CONFUSSINGG MEEE!!! TELL MEE WHAT AREE YOU BABBLING ONNN ABOUT!!!!
Prem: Football...
Mukit: Its not football season yet...what are you talking about?
Prem: oh god...its true...woman doo loose alot of there memory when there pregnant....
Mukit: PREGNANT!!!?? how'd that happen...
Prem just laughed: you should know...we've dont that before...
mukti pounched him....
Mukti: it's not funny...now i know why i felt really hungry...
Prem: omg what am i going to do with you...?
Mukti: FIRST FEED MEE!!!!!
prem laughed and carried her down the stairs...and feed her...adn his soon too bee baby....

MORNING:

Prem woke up he saw mukti sleeping sounly.....he didnt want to disturbee her soo he went downstairs..he saw nwal sitting on the couch with the doctor there...prerna was there to..neal went up to prem and hugged him tears were rolling down his face....
Neal: your my brother......

TO BE CONTINUED....

im sorry it wasnt 'extreamlyy long' like it too wanted too bee...but i have to cut out the fabrice for my textiles project...sorry i'll update tommorw...i hopped you enjoyed...and once again im sorry for the delayed update! do post you commments!

Love
Reeha 😊

That's soooooooooooooooooooooooo good plz continue soon and don't make us wait too much= ) Your a very good writer= )Awesome Job as always= )