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Posted: 18 years ago
It was a nice update... lemme tell u smth hun, if u r planning to kill Prem or Neal [specialli Prem] plzz dun cuz im alredy stressed out with Mukti's dead.. and wen i read Pm both living together in a fanfic it atleast cheers me up.. now reeha, i know im sounding selfish and im realli sry abt it, but hun tht doesnt mean i dun lik ur fanfic.. i realli like it and itz gr88... a big hug for u 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
no prob
since its a double update 😉
great continue soooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
It's really good! 👏 Continue soon. I can't wait for the double update! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
update soon yaar..... ur fan fic is wiked!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 awwwwwwwwwwww thanks guys i'll update by 12 (canadian-pacific time) ans then later on again! you guys are sooo sweeet....and patiant 😊

Reeha 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
cant w8 4 ur double update...post asap
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Posted: 18 years ago
ya,,it definitely was a nice update but is prem and neal going to die....continue soon... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
thats really gud plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
alright guyss im back with an all new update! hope yous like!
RECAP: prem and neal have gone to prem #1 samadii and just left...when the bad weather made them crash....

HOSPITAL:
Prem woke up...his head was throbbing...he noticed mukti sitting beside him...simling...his head hurt....mukti was just happy to see him alright...she hugged him tightly...even though his ribs hurt..he didnt mind...
mukti: Prem your okeay! and who told you to drive so fastt you idiot!!!! what the hell it wrong with you! you know how worried we were!
Prem just smiled at mukti scolding him...: jaan were are my kids?
Mukti; they were asleep...there at home with choti maa...they dont know about the accident....
Prem: weres neal?....is he okeay...
Mukti: yeah he's fine...the doctor just took your blood samples and other test...just to make sure there arent any other injuries...prem your verrry lucky too be alive...the car was complety toltalled...
prem: of course....im not going anywere...after all i have to see you do the karva chuath breahth right?
mukti just gave a dirtty look..the thought of starving herself made her mad...before it was alright...casue prem wasnt there to make fun of her...now he wouldf crak a joke at every little thing...but it was alright as long as he was with her....

THE NEXT MORNING...
( I know carva chuath was like on tuesday...but i went really slow soo...just pertent its today and doo me a favour 😃 )....

Mukti woke up bright and early...she saw prem sleeping like a baby beside her... she went and took a quike shower...and went down to the kitchen to stuff herself...she wouldnt get anything else to eat otherwise...she saw Nisha (in case you forgot neal's wife....there still staying a t the bajaj house...prerna insisted on it...)

Nish: awww mukti you look soo pretty....
Mukti was is in a light pink saree...her hiar opend and wet...
Mukti; thanks nisha you look pretty too...ready to starve yourself..?
Nisha: hahah yess...and neal is too...
Mukit didnt get it till she saw neal sitting at the table stuffing himself...
Mukti: neal you keep a brhuth too>?
Neal: ofcourse...if my lovly wife stays hungry all day for me cant i do it for her?
Mukti smiled: you should teach prem somthing like that....

Alll of a suddent mukti felt somone grabb her from the back...seh wasnt expecting it...soo she screamed...

mukti: AHHHH!!!
Prem: hahahahha omg....basanti..you gt scared wayyyyy tooo easily....
Neal and Nisha were wayy to bussy laughing there hearts out...mukti just gave a dirrty look...prem held mukti by the waist and smiled.....
Prem: eyy jaan were you comparing mee to Dr.Neal hear?
Mukti:ofcourse you should learn sothing from him you know...he stays huingrey for Nisha Bhabi all day...you just make funn of mee!
Prem laughed: i dont force you to do it...you do it at your own will...if it were up to me i wouldnt let you starve yourself...
Mukti: you just like seeing me in hunger...
prem laughed: yess...and that too....it is funny...
MMukti talked to neal: did you know he'll most likely eat extra slowly today?....
Neal: now prem thats not fair...
Prem: NO! i eat slowly all the time...she just never notices....
Mukit just pigged out for the time being..and prem smiled watching herr....
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Prem was in his room...mukit had told him not too leave the house...she didnt want to wait for him when the moon came out...mukti nisha and prerna were gone to the mandir....prem was on his laptop doing some work when piya (Y) came in....
Prem:eyy princess...whats up...
Piya: puppa...im hungrey...
prem laughed: yess jaan you are....but less then mom
piya: this is stuppied why does mommy stay hungrey all day..
prem frowend: heyy i didnt eat either...
piya gave him a funny look: your liying...
Nopee he wasnt...he hadnt eaten either....
Riya then came in....
Riya:: nooo piya Di..puppa didnt eats anythings eithers!
Piya looked at them funny...laughed and walked out of the room....riya just shrugged in confusion....

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THE MOON....

It was night mukti was getting restless..prem just looked at her..she looked soo cute...stroling back adn fourth on the sundeck...in her hot pink sarree with her hair all tied up...her eyes filled with huger...nisha and neal were patiantly waiting....finally aryan came up...
Aryan: MOM! the moons out!
Mukti: were!? were? i cant see it...
Aryan: hahah its behind the tree...pappa told mee
Mukti looked like she could kill prem..prem just laghed....
Mukti: okeay prenm hurry get changed...and hurry im hungrey...
Prem: i am readyy
Mukti looked at him in sweats,Armani exchange t-shirt....
Mukti: you look like your going to the gym!
Prem: well its not like im goping to the club either!
Mukti: ERR! fine just hurry up....look Nisha and neal are already done.....
The did all the rituals....quick and fast...prem was just about to give mukti was water...she had it in her hand...when she collapsed.....

TO BE CONTINUED....

Sorry about the 'not soo long up date' but hte second one will be longer! i hope you liked this one....and you'll like the next! Soo type to you soon..and do leave your thoughts and comments!

Love
Reeha 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG Mukti's pregnant!!!
😆 One of my guesses 😉


Edited by starcity - 18 years ago

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