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Posted: 18 years ago
YAY!!!!!!!!!! piya(O) doesn't get to see the triplets and i hope she isn't declared stable by her therapist.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww you guyss are sooo sweet...im gonna update right noww...in about an hour...i first have to type it on microsoft...thanks guyss yourr sooo nice

Reeha 😊

PS....sorry for keeping you guys waiting...but blame jerri/starcity...her evilness has rubbed offf on mee 😉 ...just kidding...im much nicer 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
Okeayyy im all set and readdyy too update for you guys!!!.....
RECAP: the court case in Canada...Prema and mukti get the custody of the kids for now....

In celebration of winning th ecourt case prerna thow a huge party for prem and mukit and the kids...everyone was coming ever Dr.Mehra....

BEFOR THE PARTY....

Mukti had just taken out nice dress suits for the twins...and a dress for piya...and another for riya...finally shee was going to get readyy...she walked into her bedroom and saw prem staring at himself in the mirror..he was wearing an all white suit with a white brown shirt...with his hair stylishly gelled up.....Mukti went to th cubord and pulled out an amazing brown sarree...to go with prems clothing...and took out a nice pair of matching earings and changed her simple mangalsutra into a much more pretty one....mukit hadnt talk all the way back from canada...her throught still hurt....prem took advatage of that one....
Prem: soo basanti darling...do you think you should have anymore kids?....
Mukti just gave her 'signature' dirrty look ...(trust me all moms have one...one to tell you to shut up...one to give to their husbands...my moms scares the hell out of mee...)
Prem went and held mukti from the back: soo jaan tell me...i want two more...another boy and another girl...you know soo we can have three of each....
Prem just smirkjed mukti was silent....
Prem: jaan...should i take your silence as a yess...
Mukti: nodded her head side to side proclaming 'NO'...
but prem just turned his head...pertending he didnt see....
Mukti knew how to get his attention...she snuck up behind him and messed uppp his perfectlyy gelled hair....
Prem was dumbfound: BASANTII!!! that TOOOK MEE FOR EVER!!!!.....
Mukti smirked...nothing hurt prem more...then his hair....( that reminds me of this guy i know...'Sihota'....it was soo funny... 😆 )....
Prem grabbed mukti's wrist and pulled her into his arms...mukti made an expression that showed they were getting late and that she needed to go get readdyyy....
prem: basanti...you do know im not goning to let this goo right?....
Mutti just stuck out her tung like a little kids and ran off into the washroom to go and change....

THE PARTYY....

It was all going great prem and mukti were arm in arm heart by heart...and smile for smile...the twins finally came down./...muk,ti gave a really dirrty look to prem....the twins werent in the suits she had put out...they were in Nike oddies and jeans...jai in black and aryan in white....
Prem: its okeay...dont eat me alivfe...i dont want my boys looking like geeks!
Mukti would have givin him a good lecture but...her throt hurt...soo piya(Y) did instead...
Piya(Y): pappa..if you keep on dressing my twoo idiot brothers like that...they'll mostlikely end up in some type of gang...they already think there soo cooll...which by the way there not...and the last thing we need is more members to the uderworld...
Mukti smiled and kissed her daughter...prem didnt get it....
prem: Mukti? how the hell did my daughter learn that?...did you make her watch the discovery channel?.....
piya(Y): noo pappa...i was the only triplet born with brians.....
Prem just laughed...while jai and aryan shot piya a dirty look....

Soon afeter Dr.Neal arived with his wife and kids....as soon as he stepped in prerna felt somthing strange...somthing odd about this boy....jai and aryan were getting along great with the twin boys Rishi and Krishi.....Piya was in total hell...it was bad enough having one pair of obnoxious twins....another was even worse.......Riya just stuck around with prem and mukti she was on prems shoulders...stuck to him like glue....

prerna: neal beta...were are your parents?
neal: oh...dad is in Canada...
Prerna: no....i mean your real parents...
Neal: i dont know they left me when i was four...
Prerna: im soo sorry sweetheart...they're missing out on a great son.
Prem: Maa...Come on lets eat...
Prerna: prem..did you go to prems samadi and give him flowers for his birthday?
Neal: hey! its my birthday too!
Prerna's eyes welled up in tears...: yeahh today would have been prem's birthday too...he would have been around your age....he would have kids....and married....
Neal grew confused....
Prem: dont worry maaa i'll go and give big brother his flowers....
Neal: prem...your brothers name is prem too?
Prem: yeah...my big brother..he past away when he was around four (i think that was the age right?..if im wrong just correct me..)....maa just named me after him....
Neal got a strange feeling....somthing he couldnt discribe......

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TO BE CONTINUED....

Okeay i know i most likely gave a way the suprise...but lets see if you guys can figure it out!lol...anyways doo leave your thoughts and tell me what you thought! i know its really slow.....i just dont wanna goo too fast!i hope you liked this update...i promise i'll update soon!!! promise!

Reeha 😊

PS: soory it was soo shortt...i'll make it longer next time!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice update but could neal be da 1st prem heck if ekta could pull sumthin lik dat i think u can 2 also since prena felt sumthin when she saw him he could be related 2 em rite 😆 i no i'm thinkin along ekta's line but wat da heck 1 more member in da bajaj family won't make a difference continue soon lookin 4ward 2 ur next update
Edited by mandy07 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Greatt update.. and no you are not going slow at all.. you update every day, sometimes twice a day.. and this story is great.. its not too short and abrupt.. and its really interesting.. please continue soon..a nd dont worry you are doing a great job.. 😃 😃 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
are u bringing prem (no 1) back from the dead Reeha, very good- nowadays ur mind is getting more and more like ekta mai 😆
Anyways good update, I really liked Piya's maturaty
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Posted: 18 years ago
well done reeha...k, plz continue soon, i just read it today, relly cool, way better than my fanfic 😉 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
I have a feeling that this Neal is the 1st Prem..Are u planning somthing like that?
Well..that was fantastic! 👏
Plz cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 fan fic..... 👏 👏 ..cont soon

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