updated pg.177: FINALLY FINISHED :D!

After watching todays episode (sept 26th😭) i finally came up with another fanfic idea...ill post the first part...but you guys tell me if i should continue or not...alrightyy😊

We all know what happend...mukti Deshmuk died..leaving her choti maa, family, friends, and love..prem all alone.....

A month had past...prem hadnt uttered a word to anyone.....he'd moved back in with prerna..she was the only thing left living for......he went to his office, attended meetings but never spoke...the whole office knew why..so they never dared ask why.....

BAJAJ HOUSE ...(prem gave eveything back...)

prem came back from work tired and quite as usual never sharing his sorrow with anyone...everyone had tried...even sneha...but nothing would make his expression change...ever....

he was walking up to his room that was collaged with muktis photo's...all her memories.....he walked past snehas room and heard her and prerna talking.....

prerna: i dont know what to do sneha...he wont talk...cry...scream...yell...how will he live?how can he live? my prerm changed, because of mukti...everything was going to be perfect...but just as everything was in the palm of his hand...it was all snatched away....

sneah (crying): maa dont worry i've been talking to a therapist in newyork...he says prem is in 'an expreame stat of shock...and says he needs extensive therapy...its not that prem cant talk..he just choses not too......

prem walked to his room...and opend the door...went up to muktis huge engament photo of her byherself.....he touched her face...and looked carfully...he thought....

'your not gone..i know your not...your hear...some where...i'll find you some way some how.....i wont utter a word till i see you....and i will see you...i will....'

He turned around to see prerna at the door crying...she walks up to him and touches his face......and starts to sobb....

prerna: prem.......everything will be okeay..........

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TO BE CONTINUED

alright guys ill contiue if you want me too.....thankss

Reeha😊

hey reeha!!!!
great start to a fanfic...........thnks.......

man ryt now v all need a fanfic to cheer us up
a fanfic wid happy ending

plz pm this link 2 mainekhasina ak Jul so tht she can add ur ff link on 1st pgae of mpkdh secion 😊

please continue soon.poor prem 😭 😭

Originally posted by: Manoj_Tina fan

plz pm this link 2 mainekhasina ak Jul so tht she can add ur ff link on 1st pgae of mpkdh secion 😊

i dont know how tooo😳..could you do it?😕....i'll update today after school😊 thanks guys😊

reeha

alright tankss guys...hears the nextt part...sorry bout the delay 😳 :

RECAP: mukti has been dead for over a month... prem gave everytyhing back to prerna.....but he hasnt uttered a word since her death.....

BAJAJ HOUSE EARLY MORNING:

prem was packing everything into his suitcase, and catching the early morning flight to new york...he had agreed to see the thrapist....just to keep prerna happy...but no doctor in the world could cure him.....only mukti could....

he carfully placed his pricless album of muktis photo's and gentlly folded her red duppata and he thought to himself....

'mukti one day i'll give you back your duppata.....and i know that will happen...soonn'

prerna inturrupted his thoughts...she see's him holding the duppata and began to cry...she walked up to him and said ...

prerna: prem its time to go.....

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NEW YORK:

It was a long and tiyring flight...but he didnt complain...he checked into his hotle....the driver speaking for him.....and then he left with the driver to the world famious therapist 'Dr. Prakash Kapoor'.....

DOCTORS OFFICE: (prem is not there yet)

Doctor: Piya, i need your help on this very important case....

the girl laughs: Omg daddy you always need my help on all your cases...and i always doo...whats soo 'important' about this one.....

Doctor: he's young...he's not some sinior that lost there rebilious child in an accident....this guys lost the love of his life....
piya got a serious look on her face.....

piya: but how can i help...in all your other cases i just act like there child...how can i help this guy..who is he?

the doctor showed her prems photo...a picture of him and sneha at her wedding.....(sneha had sent it)

doctor: thats him around 5 years ago, at his sisters wedding.....

piya : he's a pretty good looking guy....he dosent look like the 'love type'......whos the lucky girl...?

doctor: her name was Mukti Deshmuk...she was killed in an accident....they were going to get married....

piya: dad...thats soo sad...but how can i help him....

doctor: you can.....
piya: but how....?
doctor: your going to become Mukti Deshmuk........

Piya didnt get it at all...until she saw the photo of prem and mukti at snehas mehndi rasam......piya looked just like mukti....there were only a few differances.....Piya had green eyes...longer hair..and was a bit thinner and taller....but every other feture ....was exactly the same....

just then the receptionest comes in.....
receptionist: sir Mr.Prem Bajaj is hear.....
doctor: ok send him in, in five minutes..no sooner....
receptionist: alright .....

Doctor: Piya beta i know this is going to be hard...but i have looked at prems cat scans.....and weve talking many tests...i think that prem beleves that mukti is still alive....he's in a perminante dinial....he wont utter a word...i cant cure him...only mukti can.....but shes gone....your his only hope...... if he find out that there really is no mukti...he might become suicidal...we cant have that happening...

and with that he handed her brown contacts....and she went out the door..into the next room...and prem came throught the other door...not knowing what was happening......

Doctor: AH! This fine young man must be Mr.Prem Bajaj! Nice to finally meet you....he extanded his hand....prem silently shook it......

Doctor: So prem..... i heard you havnt said a word since you got hear....id like you to meet my new assistant... She was in an major accident last month, i just cured her.....i bet shed like to meet you....i dont like her name soo i call her Miss. D.....shes around your age...would you like to meet her?.....

prem just shrugged..he wasnt interested in anything or anyone else besides mukti.....

just then Piya came in: sir.....

As if instinct had called him...he recodnised the voice...he turned his head around......There he saw her...his mukti...she was in pinstripe pants..and a green dress shirt....but it was her....he couldnt help himself he got up and ran the long way to the door....and hugged her....piya didnt know what to do she just hugged back....

prem: m...u..kti....he was crying his eyes out....
Doctor Kapoor just had a smile on his face and gave piya a thumbs up.....

prem: mukti dont ever leave me again....i cant live without you...everyone thought you were gone...but i knew it...you wouldnt give me such a big punishment...u love me too much....dont ever leave me agaian.....

He looked into her eyes...he noticed somthing different...he didnt know what but he didnt care...he was too happy.....

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TO BE CONTINUED....

Alright guys do tell me what you think....and post your replies.....

Thank you

Reeha😊

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keep it up!!!!!!!!!

keep up ur good work 😊

gra8888888888888888 but i miss mukti plz bring her back but not homshakal KOI CHAKAR Chala do