updated pg.177: FINALLY FINISHED :D! - Page 12

wooooow...i hope it will get more addicted soon..lol i m alredy m..lol.....i love it....cont soon

that was really good.. please update soon.. and i know what it's like, i get yelled at for being on the computer all the time too.. lol..
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wow..continue soon! i hope jai gets better 👏

HEHEHE i took the key and opend my door 😃 ...no im not that rebelious...i asked 😃 anyways soo i thought i should squeeze in an update 😊 .....thanks for all your great thoughtss....
RECAP:Jai's doctor has refused to give him treatment unless prem gives up custody of the triplets...piyas (O) dad is a friend of the doctor.... 😡

Prem and mukti were on the morning flight to Dehli....anything to make Jai better....They were tired but prem wouldnt stop acting like romes( which i swear by god he is...and most likely better looking...then again i havent seen romeo myself? 😆....mukti was tired...she was the one who had been packing everything for the week long trip while prem slept like a baby...she was fast asleep on prems shoulder...her eyes soo innnocent...looking at her like this made prem realise why he had fallen in love with her...her hair was getting in her face..he slowly brushed it off...mukti who is a very light sleeper woke up....
Mukit: PREM!!! LET ME GO TO SLEEP!
the whole plane was looking at them...prem just laughed...mukti was too tired to care or notice...
prem: eyyy basanti darling are you asleep?
mukti sarcastically: yess prem darling thats why im talking too you...
prem laughed: sarcasim isnt your thing jaan...
mukti: yupe its your and jai's
prem: noo...jai's not like that....
mukti:just wait until he starts talking.....

they plane landed and prem and mukti waited outside for the car the Dr.Neal was supposed to send.....finally a tall man with glasses with a sighn saying 'Prem and Mukti Bajaj' appered....(you know ahbay from 'kkusum'?...i dont know his reall name..tehn again i barely remember my own... 😆 )
Prem went up to him and introduced himself....
Prem: hello i'm prem Bajaj and this is my wife Mukti
the person smiled and introduced himself: Nice to finally meet you...dad told me you'd be coming Im Neal Mehra...

He seemed very nice...and he was.....prem sat in the front with Neal and mukti was in the back....
Neal: soo prem what happened to your son..jai i beleive right?
Prem:ummm...well he got shot....
Neal: oh!?...umm okeay...he's four right?
Prem: yess....
Neal: well if you brought him that be great....
Prem cought him off: noo...he'd get all grumpyy..he wont leave his sibbling for one second....
Neal:thats no preoblem you could have brought them along too....
Mukti: your verry nice...because of the huge confrence in Dehli all the hotles are booked...your letting uss stay over thats very sweet...we dont want too give you a hug problem by bringin our kids over...
Neal laughed: i have kids too...i love kids...Nisha and i cant have any more...we're lucky we had twins the first time around....
Prem: See basanti...some people in the world wanna have more kids....we only have four....
Mukti just shot prem a dirrty look while neal laughed
Neal: you have four?
Prem: yeah...dont worry....the first time we got three for one....
Neal: soo jai is one of the three?
Prem: yeah...jai is a twin with aryan and a triplet with piya...then we have riya..she's two...
Neal smiled: your luckyy...i have two boys...Rishi and Krishi....i always wanted a daughter never got one though....
prem: it's okeay....next time piya and riya will come...my angles...you should meet them.....piya's just like me soo logical...riya's like mukti...very vilolent....he laughed....
Mukti: NO! Piya went on choti maa...she's very logical and smart...and riya went on YOU!!! she's REALLY STUBBORN and can SLEEP THROUGH ANYTHING!!!
Prem: basanti remind me the last time we actually slept?
Mukti gave another dirty look...knowing what he ment...poor neal didnt get prems joke....

MEHRA HOUSE:

It was a nice house...big but not as big has bajaj house...Nisha was nice too (neal's wife...and she is played by the girl that plays 'ganaga' from KSBKBT)
As sooon as prem entered the house...the two boys wouldnt stop following him....Rishi and Krishi...they were cute...aroung 7 years old....both with black hair and big brown eyes.....

Rishi: UNCLE!!! can we call you chachu???....
Krishi: YEAHH!!! I always wanted a CHACHUU!! Anku (ankita) Bhuha's verry mean...
Neal laughed....
Prem: suree thats no problem little buddies....
Neal: sorry...they always wanted an 'chachu'...i have no brother...and nisha is an only child....
Prem: no preblem...i love kids...remember i have for....and maybe more in the future......he winked at mukti....

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Mutkti was in the shower freshinging up...and prem was in the bedroom...looking at the kids pictures on his laptop...when neal came in...
neal:prem?
prem: oh yeah! neal come in....
Neal: prem i got jai's reports faxed to me...i studied them...we can have the surgery done next week....and then i'll do the theropy....
Prem eyes were filled with tears of joy: thats great...i dont..i dont know how to thank you...you dont know how much this means too me....it means soo much...
Neal: noo its no preblem....i understand...i have to sons too....i promise jai will get better.....

Saying that he left....leaving prem happy as can bee....he decided this was some good news....he opend the bathroom door..saw mukti enjoying her bubble bath as she sang 'fanha' from the movie 'fanha'...she looked soo calm..he decide it was time to make her angrey...he shut the bedroom door...to make sure there were no innturruptions.....turned on the tv in the bedroom...so mukti couldnt hear him coming...he carfully took off his watch...he knew it was gonna get wet...and tip toed into the washroom...her back was too the door...she couldnt see him..soo he thought......he was just about to goo kiss her neck..when she pulled him into the tub....

prem: OMG!!!!!!!!
mukti just laughed.....
mukti: soo romeo you thought you were gonna come and scare me eyy?
Prem: bu...bu..bu...how'd you doo that?
mukti went and put her arms on an extreamly wet, soapy and suprsed prem....
mukti: jaan....maybe you didnt notice....the wall if front of mee has a mirror on it....
prem smiled: soo miss basanti is very sly eyy?
mukti: ofcourse...afterall i am your wife...
prem: ofcourse that you are...now you know im going to have to do somthing to get you back you know..?
mukti: oh really?
Prem: but ofcourse...
mutki laughed: okeay jaan lets see what you can come up with....

saying that she left in a soft white towle...leaving prem in the tub alone....

She was in the room in her cute little silk and lace nighty finishing blwdrying her hair....while prem was enjoying the bubbles in the bubble bath.....

Mukti walked into the washroom...prem smilled....

prem: see basantii even you couldnt resist you hott husband...sseee you came back your self...
mutki laughed:....no romeo i came to get my mangalsutra....
Prem: well technically since the mangalsutra represents me..you still came back for meee....
mukti laughed and went over to the tub to go get her mangalsutra...boy oh boy she shouldnt have done that...prem got the perfect oppertunity for revenge...and yess he used it .....

He grabbed mukti by the waist and pulled her on top of him...getting her all wet...like shee did to him!
Mukti: PREM!!! YOU GOT ME ALL WETT
prem: dont worry i like you wet!
Mukti: ERRR!!!
Prem: Sorry jaan...i told you to watch out....i did tell you i was gonna get back at you...
mukti: prem your never going to change!
prem: yess i am...i have too get changed into my pyjamas other wise i'll catch a cold..speaking of which you should change too....
mukti:ERRR!! thats not the kindda change i MEAN!!!!
prem:hahaha i know i just love seeing you annoyed...he kissed her cheeck, and got out of the tub.....

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TO BE CONTINUED....

I hope this update was alright, i know that the storry is a bit slow right now...but i swear i have a HUGEEE twist coming up...i have one word to help you guys think...'PREM'.....but i garenttee you wont figuer it out....(even you jerri/starcity...you keep me waiting...now its my turn 😃 )...do leave your thoughts and comments....i hope this udate was satisfying...i'll update soon PROMISE!

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Reeha 😊

lolll.. that was a really cute updateee.. can't wait for more.. and dont worry.. the story is good right now too.. don't have to apologizee.. its great work.. 👏 👏 👏 please continue.. soon.. loll.. 😃

hey reeha not fair, ur using my own weapon against me- suspense. Don't worry I'll get u back 😆 cos not only do i have one, but i have 2 amazingly huge twists in my story, after we find out who is at the door 😉
Anyways reeha, this part was really sweet and cute i really liked it, at least we're getting PM scenes from somewhere

ahhhhhhhhhh tht was rly sweet very inneuendic though neways cntinu rly sn

yeah its really good, i love all the pm scenes..u can realy visualise what is happening 👏

tht was soo good....continue soon

that was great
i love pm scenes...........
updates soon
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