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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 5

Prem is in he temple wearing white shawaal kameezand prays saying
Please Lord give me such a girl that is beatiful , listen to what i say and not folowing me around all the time and plus a housewife who will respect my privacy , give me a girl who would stand beside me.I think shes coming .When he close his eyes Mukti comes beside him and he opens it to find Mukti wearing a red shazwaa kameez with silver flowers by him and she smiles while he looks at her with an anoyed face.

Prem-You?not again evreywhere i go you never leave me
Mukti-Eh mister , i have come here for my prayers not for you and by the way why are you so bothered , is this your temple ?
Prem-Forget i said evreything
They both pray silently and MUkti has her eyes closed and Prem looks at her and gazes at her and then looks at the bagwaan and Mukti opens her eyes and smiles at pRem and goes but says somthing
Mukti-i come here because i may be mordern but i am a true believer in my principles , i dont come here for anyones purposes.She goes with a smile leaving Prem having a huge smile on his face but then has an annoyed face saying and Says in his prayers

Prem-Stupid Girl , wherever i go this pathetic girl comes , what is it with her , is she obsessed ith me , please dont say that we are a jodi because that will never happen.And dont say that im in love because im not


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Posted: 19 years ago
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I forgot one bit that Mukti says
and my prayersvare important to me and parents taught to do the right thing in life
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 6

There is a party at Prems freinds house ad he is wearing Black suit and black jeans looking trendy and suddenly stops when he sees Mukti wearing maroon embroidary suit with silver flower earings and flower necklace looking beatiful and stares at her for a moment and then Mukti bumps into him and they bot h have a anoyed face but then Mukti gives a charming face

Prem-What are you doing?
Mukti -accuactually i was invited here ,did Raj ever told you that
Prem-No i didn't and how do you know Raj
Mukti-Hes my dads freinds son
Prem-Ok fair enough , you want to come
Mukti-Sure Mr attitude

Raj joins evreyone together and says
Thank you for coming to my party and know all couples dance on the floor but i think the first couple who should dance is Prem and Mukti , they both look at ech other and Prm looks frustrated and they both are on the floor dancing to Daya Daya re romantically and both look at each others eyes

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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
aww cute!
Mr.Attitude!!
Plz cont soon!
Awesom Part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Edited by sweety567 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz plz contiue !!i Luv ur fan-fic!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 7

When the dance is over Prem drops her on the floor and Prem gives a wicked smile to her and evreyone claps of their wonderful dance and Mukti looks annoyed.

They are sitting in a table together and Mukti smiles at Prem and he looks irratated.

Mukti-You dance well
Prem(not bothered)-You too
Mukti-By the way through the song you kept on loking at me
Prem-It was a dance , it was supposed to intense and passionate , like i said about rescuing you .
Mukti-It felt real
Prem-To you it did , but for me i danced with emotion and wanted to make it realistic , i didn't do it becuse i(he was going to say he likes her but his mouth opens and then closes it)i didn't do it for you , i did for my freind and for the sake of it
Mukti-Ok why dont be become freinds (gets her hand out and Prem looks at her hand and her charming smile and he walks away leaving her upset)




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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 8

The dancefloor is filled with people dancing in full party mood and Prem is in the centre and Mukti is sitting down having a dreamy expression on her faceand he does a wonderful dance of reheja re from golmal and Mukti comes in the girls bit and Prem smiles and Mukti and Prem both dance extidley.When the dance is over Prem and Mukti were going to hug but Prem backs off leaving Mukti close to tears.Prem walks and sits on the table and Mukti sits by him.

Mukti-You dance really well
Prem(bored face)-You too Mukti
Mukti-Nice name Prem , Prem the lover ,pRem the handsome krishna,Prem the passionate
Prem-Ok i get the point , what sort of name is Mukti ,it suits you because it rhymes with pagal kudhi.prem walks off with a grin on his face and Mukti blushing.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prem is soft in the inside realy
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 9

Prem is sleeping his bedroom listening to his mobile phone and black sony headphones listening to the song kabhi alvida na kehna and wearing plain white t-shirt and black jeans and has flashbacks of Mukti and is thinking in his head saying

Why do i think about her a lot?am really fallng for her ?no this cant be i dont fall for girs that easily but why i feel werd whenever im around her , what is it about her that makes me want to with her?nt oly shes beatiful but its somthing else.........

Mukti os wearing red shawaa kameez wearing glasses reading Hearts of Golds n her bedroom that her cousin from England London gave her and she says while shes thinking

Whenever im around him i cant stop looking at him ?but why does he go far from me ?is in love wit me but his sef obsession come in the way?who knows what hes feeling?but i know that i started having feelings for him

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