Feeling you cant Deny-Fan fic - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow tht was rly gd
count soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats really gud keep it up
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Part 10

Prem is in his room lying down and Prena comes in wearing plain white shawwaal kameez and sits beside Prem and Prem looks up at her smiling and gets up

Prena-Looks like ur in love?
Prem-No Mom no way , you know i dont belive in love , i flirt with girls just for fun , but i don't have true feelings
Prena -You tld me a lot about Mukti but even though you say you hate her , you still talk about her
Prem-That doesnt mean i like her , im ust saying she follows me evreywhere i go and im not in love with her mom
Prena(Smiles and teases Prem)-You do i can see it, evreytime you say the bad things like shes annoying , irattating and you say shes beatiful but close your mouth because its shows clearly you have feelings
Prem(smiles and blushes)-Mom thats it im going (gets up and goes out of the room leaving Prena laghing)

Next Anurag Prena ,Bajaj plan to get Prem and Mukti to hook up
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderfulllllllllllllllllll do continue soooooon!please please plz!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prena ,Bajaj(wearing a grey suit and grey tie)and Anurag(wearing black suit and red tie)are all sitting down drinking tea in white mugs and plates discussing Prem attraction of Mukti

Prena-Its so obvious he likes her , he never really was into girls but i think Mukti has all the qualities which Prem is spellbinded with
Anurag-He tells me many times he hates her , but i can see clearly he is really fond of the girl.
Bajaj-They sound like they are made for each other ,perfect jodi , atlast Prem has found someone to make relise he is actually a caring person ,why dont we get them together
Anurag-Great idea
Prena-Im with you
They can hear footsteps and Prem comes in and they are all quiut with tea mugs in their hands
Prem-What is going on here ?
Bajaj-Uhhh
Anurag-Discussing buisness matters with tea
Prem(LOOKS SUSPICIOUS but when he goes they laugh gently)
Prena-What a stupid excuse Anu
Anurag(smiles)-atleast he was convinced though
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 12

Prem is walking on the pavement and Mukti s walking along the pavement too wearing plain but atractive red shawaal-lameez with black sequins , but when they spot each other , they both stop and are both opposite eah other and look into each others eyes for 10 minuites, Prem is admiring the beauty of Mukti,Mukti is looking at the love in Prems eyes.But Prem snas out of his dream and Mukti smiles.

Mukti-What was that i just saw then?
Prem-What you saw ws nothing , pagal kudhi , i just wanted to prove to you that their is no chemistry between us when we look at each other ,when i look at you , it means nothing
Mukti -It looked to deep to me
Prem-You can think what you want
Mukti dupatta drops and both kneel down to get it but their hands touch each other and both look at each other but Mukti picks it and gets up and Prem does too , and Mukti turns her face the other way smiling and walks off leaving Prem standing and watching her go
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 13
Prem is in bedroom aslep wearing a black robe and has flashbacks of the stare with Mukti , and smiles in his dream and then wakes up and says in his head

"Whats happening to me?why didnt i just walk away from her?what is it?could this be love?No i cant love anyone but why does one person look so good!

Mukti is in her room looking at the window wearing the same clothes saying in her head

"You can denie it as much as you want Prem , hurt me as much as you can , but i really know deep down you have feelings for me.You can run away from me but 'll always be in your thoughts " and has flashbacks of the stare with Prem
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 awww soo gd ..count soon yaar 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it so sweet i luved it cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: *marhabbagurl*

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it so sweet i luved it cont soon 👏 👏 👏

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