Feeling you cant Deny-Fan fic

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prem and Mukti are made for each other ,Mukti is madly in love with Prem but Prem gets cold -hearted with her whe she tries to get close,Prem is also in love with herbut his ego comes in the way and tries to ignore his feelings for her,Will these two ever be together?

Mukyi-A beatiful , kind , loving girl who cares about peoples feelings and always an easy person to talk to you,shes in love with Prem but is waiting for the day he declares his love for her.


Prem -A rich , attractive , stylish dude who is spoilt and selfish and always hurs Muktis feelings , but deep dow he has fallen for her?

Chapter 1
Mukti comes out of the car where she has parked it by the shopping mall Lucys and is wearing a plain red dupatta and wearing sun glasses and is going towards the shopping mall but then she spots Prem talking o his mobile wearing blue jeans and armani t-shirt , she takes of her glasses and gazes at him and walks towards him , and she walks by him and swtiches te mobile of and looks at her with a annoyed face.Prem says coldly"What are you looking at ?don't you know its rude to stare ?get lost!
Prem walks of leaving Mukti with a weak smile and she says and turns towards him sayoing Sorry !Prem looks back and carrys on walking off!In the car Prem is driving and has flashbacks of pretty Mukti and shakes his head trying tonblock out Mukti from his head , but has a small smile on his face .

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PREM AUR MUKTI FOEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
join the squad yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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VERY GOOD!!! 👏 👏
PM 4 EVA!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow plz continue it
❤️ ur fan fic
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Chapter 2

Mukti carries some shopping bags and puts in the back of the car and drives off.Mukti is driving on the lonely road and stops when 2 thugs are standing in front of her.Looking terrified she gets out of the car and tells them to move out of the pavement politley

Mukti-please i need to drivee my car so can you please (They suddenly grab and pull her hai ,Prem stops and looks shocked and instantly seeing her screaming for help and gets out of the car and beats the thugs and punches them both and kicks them , the thugs run of leaving Mukti in tears and looks at Prem smiling ,but he looks at her with a cold expression)

Mukti-Thank you
Prem-Its ok , are you all right?
Mukti-Yes , (She come towards him)-My name is Mukti
Prem-My name is Pre just because i saved your life doesn't mean we have to be freinds.
Mukti-Im just being freindly
Prem-Well i don't like freindly people(he leaaves Mukti and goes in her car leaving her smiling )
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow !! Good.. 😊
Continue... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 3

Prem is lying in his bed wearing a white vest and black trousers , he sleeps peacfully bu has flashbacks of Mukti , and tosses and turns and suddenly wakes up and has a tense look on his face saying to himself "shes really beatiful", Mukti is in her room drifting away thinking about Prem thinking how cute he is when she first saw him and how he saved her life and lies on her bed having a smile on her face and gets the pen and writes on her hand Prem in big thick leters and smiles to herself .
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 4

Mukti walking on the pavement (wearing plain white but attractive shawaal kameez)but accidently gets pushed by someone and then Prem suddenly catches her wearing black jeans and white t-shirt saying attitude in red letters and catches her and they both at each others eyes and Mukti suddenly gets up and his hands of her hips

Mukti-How many times will you save my life?
Prem -Its my duty , i dont do it for personal reasons, and i didnt do it for you
Mukti-Why are you so angry
Prem-i'm not , its just that i find you annoying
Mukti-THe why did you stare at me
Prem(Turns around with a awkward expression)-I was confused at why you were looking at me that way
Mukti- Really(with a smile)
Prem-Yes realy !(he walks of leaving Mukti smiling and Prem walks but stops and turns to look at Mukti while she walks on the pavement contuniues to walk with a smirk on his face)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 gr8 job yaar!...plz cont! 👏

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