FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 4

awww
poor bani..
and jai too
i hope they both.. start.. talking..
and.. doing.. things.. like they both used too.
continue soon.
and.. what is this..
that was a very short.. update.
not cool at all

Bani is probably very nervous around him because of the age difference. He probably feels that he is too old for her too.. but if in love, does age matter?
Sounds like Bani is committed to the relationship and loves Jai unconditionally. Now what is Jai's peeve? What is going on his head that he will not listen to what his heart tells him.
Please update soon. The weekend will seem too long without KS on TV anyways.. Your update will surely reduce the pain

Abhilasha di
me crying 😭
what happened between them that they have become almost stranger??? 😕
gr88 part 👏 👏 👏
plz cont soon

Abhi wonderful part....felt bad for Bani how she was feeling morning after...but still she was trying to give a chance to her marriage with Jai...but wondering why Jai is behaving like this with her.....does he feels insecured because of therir age differences 😕 .....can't wait to read Jai's POV regarding his marriage with Bani.....please update soon 😃

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Adorable interaction between Krishna and Bani - can just picture a kid sitting on the wall, legs swinging, all-nosy and talkative. Very nice part!
👏 👏 👏

I loved little Bani, she was too cute and so were her talks with Krishna,especially her reason for climbing the wall. You also described the initial relationship between Jai and Bani so well, it was really adorable. Curious to know why Jai has become so distant, he still seems to care about her.

Please continue soon.

BD

hey,

just read ur FF n must say its great..................

loved it the story n JB character bt why Jai is doin this???????😡😡 poor Bani...........

they shared a bed.........bt stiil Jai is behavin like jerk to her.........

i hope he soon be nice to her..........

plzzzzzzzzzz update soon

cant wait to read wat happenes next..............

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

Originally posted by: divan

Interesting update, sad and sweet at the same time.

Sad because, Jai did not even bother to find out where she was before she went to sleep.😭 well... he will find out... eventually... but little late... as usual...

Sweet the convo between Krishna and Bani and how Jai got to know her. 😊

Funny he misses her not in his bed in the morning...but we will find out why he says sorry to her picture and not to her face. 😕

Originally posted by: siumi

Hey Abilasha,
it was a interesting update, what happened was to much drastic that made them like strangers to each other,
do continue soon 😊

thanks for reading... 😳

Originally posted by: divya_123

great part 👏 👏
i wonder what has happened that it has changed Jai and Bani's relation in such way 😕

continue soon

thanks divya 😃

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Abhilasha,

Very intriguing, the friendship culminated in marriage and also consummation, now come the regrets, poor Bani, looks like she is stuck between a rock and hard place. Like her sketches... me too... i like enjoying sketches a lot... but tried my hand in that... danger zone... 😆

thanks for reading dii 😃

Please continue soon!

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Bani's haalat. Idhar kuwa udhar khai jaaye to kidhar jaaye.
I think she is in love with her hubby but doesn't want to show cause she doesnt know about his feelings.
do u think so??? 😕 i dont know... i need to sort that now...
Abhilasha I love your updatess!!!
I'm totally fida on over this ff. wow... 😆

Bye
Ranjana

Originally posted by: koolgal

gr8 part 😊
really loved the flashback 👏 thanks lina 😳
hmmmmmmmm bani and jai were frends.....then wat happened 😕 we will find out... 😉
plzzz cont. soon 😊

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

awww
poor bani..
and jai too
i hope they both.. start.. talking..
and.. doing.. things.. like they both used too.
continue soon.
and.. what is this..
that was a very short.. update. welll... are you complaining 😛 u know what... i am lazy to type a lot... 😃
not cool at all

Originally posted by: pptm469

Bani is probably very nervous around him because of the age difference. He probably feels that he is too old for her too.. i think that may not be the reason... 😳 but if in love, does age matter? they both know that should and will not be the reason 😉
Sounds like Bani is committed to the relationship and loves Jai unconditionally. Now what is Jai's peeve? What is going on his head that he will not listen to what his heart tells him. well... we know he is a raging bulll... angry man 😆
Please update soon. The weekend will seem too long without KS on TV anyways.. Your update will surely reduce the pain hahaha... i thot my ff's are always little/more teary... 😆

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

Abhilasha di
me crying 😭
what happened between them that they have become almost stranger??? 😕
gr88 part 👏 👏 👏
plz cont soon

thanks Tropa...
one thing... no comments... but i dont have any experience in anybody calling me di... even if they 15 years younger to me... they call by my name 😆

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Abhi wonderful part....felt bad for Bani how she was feeling morning after...but still she was trying to give a chance to her marriage with Jai...but wondering why Jai is behaving like this with her.....does he feels insecured because of therir age differences 😕 .....can't wait to read Jai's POV regarding his marriage with Bani.....please update soon 😃

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well... i dont know how to reply... its little tricky.... u will know what their problem is as the story unfolds

Originally posted by: btkr

Adorable interaction between Krishna and Bani - can just picture a kid sitting on the wall, legs swinging, all-nosy and talkative. Very nice part!
👏 👏 👏

thanks dii... u read that soon... 😆😆

Originally posted by: bdev

I loved little Bani, she was too cute and so were her talks with Krishna,especially her reason for climbing the wall. You also described the initial relationship between Jai and Bani so well, it was really adorable. Curious to know why Jai has become so distant, he still seems to care about her.

Please continue soon.

BD

Thanks BD... 😳

Originally posted by: ejazanita

hey,

just read ur FF n must say its great.................. thanks nikita...

loved it the story n JB character bt why Jai is doin this???????😡😡 poor Bani...........

they shared a bed.........bt stiil Jai is behavin like jerk to her......... well.. i wont call him jerk... each have their own... in their POV valid reasons

i hope he soon be nice to her.......... hope is the best medicine 😆

plzzzzzzzzzz update soon

cant wait to read wat happenes next..............

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

Thanks everyone for reading and your guessings.. 😛

Great part.
liked it.
Bani and Krishna's first conversation was cute...and the way Bani made her entry in Walia house as well as being Jai's friend is awesome.
really what to know what went wrong
plz cont. soon

Hi Abhilasha

thk you so much for senting me PM saying u have updated ur ff. i loved it... so bani was chatterbox when she was young, can't wait to unfold the story as y jai is doing this. i am sure krisha must have to do smthing with it even thought she is dead.

cheers
have a gd day 😊