FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 6

Did Jai really marry her because his mother forced her or it there something else...

Pushkar as sweet as always, a true friend and what did Pia do? I wonder if Jai had a thing going on with Pia... 😕

nice build up Abhilasha....

Hey thanks for ur PM... 😃 ...

gr8 part... 👏

glad to know it's not a love triangle...even I hate them...have enough of them in real KS... 😡 ...

what's wrong with Jai?

why doesn't he love Bani ... if he doesn't love her then why keep a husband wife relationship...I mean they slept together... ...poor Bani...

Do cont soon... 👏 ..,

wow!!!! thats really great thing👏

omg!!!!!!!! they r ralkin abt Bani n now she realosed that Jai didnt marry her accordin to his wish bt coz of some1 else wish or force............

omg!!!!!! poor Bani😭😭😭 tn why did he touch her the day be4 yesterday?😡😡 to hurt her???????😡😡

plzzzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo😳

Jai is such a rude man, he doesnt even care about pople who live in the house?? that is so mean to say that Bani is old enough care about herself, true but dont people family care about the members of family, I dont understand why is Bani putting up with this thing, I hope she figures out soon the reason about Jais decision to marry Bani...from what it seems like Jai was not interested in marrying Bani but another girl, might be Pia? 😕
Such a mistery,... 😆 😆 😆
continue soon

Very nice update. I liked Pushkar a lot, Bani and him seem to have a good rapport. What's the deal with Pia though?

Felt bad for Bani when the realization hit her that Jai married her because of his mother. I do hope that was not the only reason. I am looking forward to find out the reason behind Jai's change in feelings.

You make me more and more curious with each update, please continue soon, eager to know how the story unfolds.

BD

Abilasha you doing a great job by keeping suspense and making us curious 👏👏

you need to know this, how much damage you have caused for posting this part!!!! I was about to leave my office when I saw an update from you, so I sat back to read it. My collegues thought that i've already left, so they locked the door and went home.....I got stucked in my room until a guard came and rescue me 😆. I'm going to charge you for this, for making me hooked to your FF...so better give me another update as soon as possible 😈

Abhi I don't want to ask you any question abou why, how, what, where cos we will get all our answers when the story slowly slowly unfolds, right 😉 .....but still felt bad for Bani and what a time and place to realize the reason for her marriage with Jai......but this JW is yours looks like a dumboo brainless creature....he is free to sleep with his wife but fails to care for her 😕 .....only God can reform Jigs.....please update soon 😃

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that was really.. good.
but please.. make jb talk continue soon please

Pushker is as usual sweet buddy
and Jigs is as ususal 🤢 🤢 🤢

poor Bani 😭

very well written 👏
plz cont soon

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
liked it.
Bani and Krishna's first conversation was cute...and the way Bani made her entry in Walia house as well as being Jai's friend is awesome.
really what to know what went wrong
plz cont. soon

Thanks Ridhi... u will know when bani's flashback comes... 😳

Originally posted by: j&b84

Hi Abhilasha

thk you so much for senting me PM saying u have updated ur ff. i loved it... so bani was chatterbox when she was young, can't wait to unfold the story as y jai is doing this. i am sure krisha must have to do smthing with it even thought she is dead. exactly the point,,

cheers
have a gd day 😊

Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

Hi Abhi,

Your writing is simply superb, I love this track. It is different and very fresh.

Look forward for your next update, hopefully soon ;)

Nimmie

thanks nimmie

Originally posted by: niruba

Abhilasha, great part once again 👏, can't wait to know what happened between them, looks like both are not happy at all.....do continue please.....

thanks Niruba... its litle confusing to tell whether they are happy or not..

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part
plz cont soon

thanks jeena

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Hi Abhi 😛

What a beautiful story! But very intrigued as to what happened in between.

It's lovely dear, hope you update soon. 😊

thanks dii... hope u r fine...

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey ...............

lovely part.....................

if he can say sorry to bani than why not talk to her properly......... million dollar question

update soon

Thanks for ur wonderful comments and guesses