FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Great start.
liked it.
awww...poor Bani 😭 😭 😭....all sad don't what went wrong...way Jai is behaving like that...paining for her best friend wants to know why he is being so cold to her....awesome....
looking forward to the next part...wants to know why Jai is behaving like that towards her.
plz cont. soon

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Hey abhilasha!!!
awesome begining man!!! its full of suspense, JB marrige doesnt look alike a normal one, poor Bani shes so sad bcz Jai doesnt talk t her the little hope that she had, hat even is broken now...
g8t ff!!!!!!!!
cont soon dear 😉 😃 😃
Sukh here 😊

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Abhi great start dear.....already loving the storyline...felt bad for Bani....so JB's marriage seemed was not working well.....can't wait to see how the story unfolds....please do continue soon 👏

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Hey Abhilasha,
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FF🥳

Great start and thank you for the PM.
I really want to know what happend between the two.
This is not fair. Why did you stop?😕
Sorry, I can't handle suspence that well so if you don't update in the next two days I will bug you for an update.

Bye
Ranjana

Edited by RANJANA_RRJ - 17 years ago

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Rupal

@culgal86

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

hey gal...................

nice startoff................

wats wrong with jai...............

update soon

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Awwww, feel bad for Bani, that was humiliating and hurtful....so what is Jai's problem? 😡

Good part, Abhi..

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bdev

@bdev

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Wow, what a start to a ff. But, a very bad place to stop 😭. I feel bad for Bani, and really want to know what made Jai so distant.

Please continue soon.

BD