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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ANARLA

me first. 😃

thanks for the part that to for me.u r welcome

it was picturised good in such a way i mean pov of bani.her side of story.so jai have started showing his affection towards her ... slowly sometihng is starting. yep... something is starting...

now bani knows she is pregnant.ab kya hoga jo hoga dekha jayega...

tom one more part.this is a great news.

i want it now actually as u stopped there.

isliye conintue soooonnnnnnnnnnn

actually i want an update abhi.

anar



Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part abhilasha
plz cont soon


thanks jeenal

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

gr8 part...plz cont soon


thanks swati


thanks dear

Originally posted by: amiee

great part pls cont soon....


thanks amiee


Originally posted by: mujer

Abhilasha,

,
😆😆 😆 😆 😆 😆,No No I am not nuts
Seriously kill me but I will say it. I waited for an entire week for update and update shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya, not fair. I know I am being very mean 😊 but try and give a substantial material to read. The updates are more like Candy floss, by the time one feels like chewing on it, it already melts in your mouth. haha 🤣

Still a nice update. 😉

P.S:I am thinking about sending moderators a request to decide the limit of words in an update. 😆 arey yaar.... u should have guessed that the update might be small with i have the named the part as A



Originally posted by: phool527

😳 awwnnnn bani is pregnant and thats how she finds out... sweet.. lol.. anywayz great part abhilasha.. continue sooon yaar..


thanks dear

Originally posted by: tam2

oh so that's how she found out! ... silly me ... 😆 ... she's pregnant obviously she'll realize the changes in her physical being... 😳 i dont want that ekta crap... wonder how she'll react when Jai will told her he knew about it ... well looking forward to next part ... do cont soon... 👏 ...



Originally posted by: Pooja_fren

Abhu,
What was new n it
U again left s in th sme posin, didnt u? hehehe 😃
I was so happy that I can read Jai's reaction bt alas!!!!!!!!
however i dont want to say this but also i couldnt stop this. Update was gr8
Waiti for another one
Thanksssssssss this thanks sounds somewhat....😛



Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Abhi,

another beautiful update, the thoughts of Bani were described so well.you make all your characters so really, the feelings of bani after finding out that she is pregnant and someone her own will come into this world was simply amzing.with just few words you said soo much.looking forward to the next part. 👏
thanks preet 😳
preet 😳



Originally posted by: shweta76

I've been a silent reader till now but this story is simply great ..maybe coz I know of someone who had similar insecurities and at one point her dependence which in her case was her sister exceeded that of food and water
The story is too real! and you have extreme talents as a writer, you and Tintiny are my favs 😃 thanks shweta... many people are like that... we might not know...
Love
Shweta



Originally posted by: pooks

Good to see Jai and Bani's relationship developing and Bani feeling happier than before 😊 dont u think its a good sign...



Originally posted by: popeye

Hi Abhi the update was fabulous.. Bani finally seems to be coming out of her delusional state.. she seems to be remembering all of her past and is smiling thinking about the change in relationship between Jai and her. She is feeling more secure knowing that Jai cares for her... so i guess jais efforts are paying off. He needs to keep persisting and keep trying to pull her out of her shell and give her the self confidence which she seems to lack. that is exactly what she lost in the course of time... self-confidence
It was refreshing to see that Bani is mature enough to understand that she maybe pregnant and she doesnt need anyone to spell it out for her. It shows she is growing into a woman .. and Jais love is nurturing her. right.. earlier she was so absorbed in her own world... she did not even pay attention to what is happening to her body...
I cant wait to read the next part. I know Jai is hurt when she said mera baccha but I hope he continues to love and nurture Bani .. she needs him now more than ever. I cant wait for their relationship to progress and for both of them to realise their love for each other. soon...
Please do update soon 👏



Originally posted by: niruba

poor girl, feels excited about the baby because she thinks now she has someone to share her love.....i like this sentence... that is something that went unnoticed by me... nice part....please continue



Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

great part as usual.
But i'm wondering how Bani know she's pregnant.
Before the accident she didn't knew it so how. she was not thinking... she was pondering over the same thoughts... thats y... aur yeh accident kab hua...
This Jigyasa is so 🤢 🤢
Anyway, Jai should be very patient after all she has gone through cause of him 😭 😭 😭
I can't wait the next part 😉



Originally posted by: rongna

hey great part please update soon


thanks rongna...

Originally posted by: nishiraju

hey abhi ..... 😛 gre888888 update as usual....... 👏


thanks nishi

Originally posted by: divan

It seems Bani is happy with the thought of a child, a child she could love unconditionally. But what about Jai...she has yet to realize that she too loves Jai even though neither of them have expressed it... valid point... may be going to Aligarh is the solution to resolve the uncertainty in their relationship.



Thanks Everyone... I am opening a new topic... I guess u can post your comments over there... 😊

The link is... New thread


Mods... u can close this topic...
Edited by abhilashasharma - 17 years ago

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