FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 100

Me first😃

First of all when is next update because now i dont believe u that u will update on weekdays.
U have become lazy 😆 😆
Jai and Bani...............
What do I say?
I am juust waiting waiting and waiting.
Hope next one will be soon
Thankssssssss

hey abhi...
great part.....
feeling bad for bani 😭 😭 .....so jai will take her to aligarh or not 😕 .....
cant wait for the next part...
plzz cont.soon

great part
waitng for the next one...
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon.


nim.

Great part
I really feel bad for the both of them and I hope Jai tells her that she pregnant soon.
Please continue soon I really can't wait.

gr88 part
plz cont soon
loved it

oh poor thing! ... I think she has developed some sort of fear within her... but liking Jai's attention towards her...only if he had been this attentive from before... but as you said one day's attention won't be enough! ... lovely update though ... do cont soon... 👏 👏 👏 ...

Thanks sooo much for the update.. it was beautiful abhilasha.. I loved the whole homecoming... Bani's nervousness and apprehension to retun back to the waloa house. He fear when she sees all the people of the house. Despite all that she uses Jai as her support and hides behind him as if seeking protection. It was wonderfully written.
Why did she go stiff in the bedroom when Jai hugged her.. I was a bit confused about that.. Im glad Jai realises how insecure and how low on self esteem Bani is..Im glad she voiced her biggest fear to him. Poor thing her biggest fear is that Jai doesnt like her.. I felt sooo bad for Bani. I hope Jai doesnt give up and works on getting his Bani back.
I hope Jigyasa doesnt cause Bani's condition to go worse by saying something nasty to her.
Its an awesome story .. and I hope u update soon.
👏

abhilasha great part hun.. wow bani kitni ziddi hai... well she does have the right to.. jai should just take her to aligar once.. anywayz great part.. contineu sooon..

Weird bani is acting really childish ,, its weird ,, like she never grew up

Great part. Poor bani. She has regressed in age.Jay has lot of work cut out for him.But then he deserves this for ignoring her.